Hernandez 1

Crystal Hernandez

English 101

Professor Batty

29 May 2018

Reflection

To improve this paper I added more commentary to my quote sandwiches and added

more to the second to last paragraph explaining one of my points towards the end of the paper. I

also added more transitions and tried to flesh out and connect my points by adding more

commentary . I fixed the format of my MLA work cited page. I think with the small changes I

was able to get my essay to be more coherent and to flow better overall. I also fixed the in text

citations by adding the parenthesis and the authors last name. Lastly I revised and edited some

spelling and grammar errors