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Essay Three Ref
Essay Three Ref
Tenisha Vega
Professor Batty
English 101
28 May 2018
In my last essay The Belief in Oneself, I did not change much in my first two paragraphs.
However, I did look for grammatical errors and fixed those. I really liked the first two paragraphs. The
paragraph talking about gender reassignment surgery I decided to add an example of a transgender
woman name Caitlyn Jenner. I felt like she was a wonderful example showing that gender reassignment
helps with peoples self-esteem and confidence. It shows that it helps with transgender people who were