For my visual Rhetoric essay I got comments from professor Batty and my friend.

They both had

some great suggestions to improve my overall essay. Professor Batty commented that I had

repetitive points in my three body paragraphs. She said that I should consider changing those

sentences unless absolutely necessary to keep them. Also, that I had spelling, grammar, syntax,

run on sentences, and word choice errors throughout my essay. In addition, I need to improve on

my MLA format specifically my work cited page. My friend said that I needed to fix my

frustration paragraph because it didn't serve its purpose. He also commented on how I needed to

better specify my three points.