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Revised Yasemin Gurel - 4 2f5 2f18 Narrative Response
Revised Yasemin Gurel - 4 2f5 2f18 Narrative Response
Think about the details the author uses to establish the setting and the characters to finish Dahl’s
story. Be sure to pick up exactly where Dahl left off and provide a clear resolution. Your response
Mini Gurel
4-6-18
Humanities 8B
The Detectives had been searching for three hours franticly and they were becoming very
Noonan conversed with the other policemen for a while. After a long dreaded minute Noonan walked
up to Mrs. Maloney.
“I’m afraid we can’t find anything ma’am” said one police officer
The policemen left swiftly leaving Mrs. Maloney alone in her house. Mrs. Maloney started to drift off.
She got up and went up stairs. Hissssss. She suddenly stopped on the stairs. Hissssss. She peered
down stairs. The hissing stopped. Mrs. Maloney got into bed. She smelt a sour gas-like smell. She
Crack….Hissssssssssss…...CRASH. She coughed and coughed and coughed. Smoke was everywhere,
She rolled under her bed assuming that would help her stay clear from any fire. How was she to
contact the fire department? She got out from under her bed and ran down stairs. The kitchen was
completely engulfed in flames. The exits where are blocked by rubble. Mrs. Maloney stood still for a
couple seconds and took a deep breath. Cough...Cough...cough. She inhaled a huge amount of smoke.
DING…..DING the sound of a fire truck racing down a street rung in Mrs. Maloney’s ears. It
screeched and squealed down the street. Mrs. Maloney woke to the sounds of a firetruck and wild
flames. Hisss hisss. The couch suddenly went up in flames burning Mrs. Maloney’s face.
She tried to sit up but her body wasn’t strong enough. She closed her eyes and saw her husband Mr.
Maloney.
“This is what you get” he hissed. A tear dribbed down Mrs. Maloney’s face.
“I don’t regret anything” she took one last deep breath.
There laid Mrs. Maloney, almost lifeless and completely soulless. Soulless because she had just
hit her husband upside his head with a lamb leg. Suddenly the front door was toppled down by a
firefighter.
One firefighter yelled “There is a lady over here someone help me pick her up!” “Come’on, I
A doctor looking quite worrisome was staring at papers. “I really don’t know if she’ll make
it…she inhaled a lot of smoke and her body temperature was very high”.
Another doctor came over to check on Mrs. Maloney. Mrs. Maloney was very pale but her face
was very red due to burns and scratches. The doctor checked her pulse and wrote some things down.
A small breath.
“I did it..” wheezed Mrs. Maloney. “She’s awake!” yelled the doctor. “I Did it!” Mrs. Maloney
coughed. “Did what?” asked another doctor. “I-I killed him-m.” Mrs. Maloney wheezed. “Killed
who!?!” said the doctor still looking quite worried. “Mr. Maloney……”
Mrs. Maloney's eyes rolled back inside her head and she let out one last final cough and then
The next morning the news got to Noonan. Noonan looking quite shocked went and asked a
former detective how he could have missed all the signs. He wondered how he could have looked
everywhere but didn’t find anything. The next day Noonan showed up to the now burnt up house of
Mrs. Maloney to search for that missing link. Although it was the first thing to be burnt Noonan
noticed a bone leg of some animal in the burnt oven. He took it in for evidence and found nothing on
it. Since it was the only large object that could have been used to kill someone Noonan claimed that to
be the murder weapon. It seems that they had no actual evidence to back up Mrs. Maloney final
remarks. The only proof they really had was Mrs. Maloney’s own words.