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LO1 & LO2 FEEDBACK

LO1 & LO2 Feedback.

Current Grade for LO1: Pass

Current Grade for LO2: Pass

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on learning outcome 1 is a Pass Grade and
Learning outcome 2 is a Pass Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are any minor
corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.


Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

Overall: Some highly detailed work here Matthew! You have successfully conducted some good
research on media products and used it to inform your own ideas.

LO1: You have analysed a variety of media products in great detail taking into
consideration target audience and also the form and style of each magazine/newspaper.
You could however include more information regarding the production process of the
magazine and how it creates content which compliments their target audience; for this
think about the genre.

LO2: You have created three great ideas for a variety of media-based products and taken
into consideration target audience, content, meaning and purpose which were developed
from the work you completed for LO1.

The resubmission deadline is: 22nd June 2018.

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