LO1 & LO2 FEEDBACK

LO1 & LO2 Feedback.

Current Grade for LO1: Fail

Current Grade for LO2: Pass

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on learning outcome 1 is a Pass Grade and
Learning outcome 2 is a Pass Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are any minor
corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

Overall: Some good work here Kayleigh but more work is needed! Please see feedback below.

LO1: You have conducted some detailed research into an innovative media product
specifically analysing examples of their work and how they create content in order to
successfully appeal to a target audience. However you need to look at target audience in
more detail and also and also look at the processes involved in production.

LO2: You have created a good moodboard for an original print-based media product idea
which includes some effective images however you need to go into more detail regarding
target audience.

The resubmission deadline is: 22nd June 2018.