LO1 & LO2 FEEDBACK

LO1 & LO2 Feedback.

Current Grade for LO1: Pass

Current Grade for LO2: Fail

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on learning outcome 1 is a Pass Grade and
Learning outcome 2 is a Pass Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are any minor
corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

Overall: Insightful initial work however more detail is needed when researching media based
institutions and products. Please see feedback below.

LO1: Some good work Brandon but more detail on target audiences is required to improve
this work. You have however showed good analysis of print–based media product but
more detail on the topic of genre and target audiences is required. Also include an image
of the magazine you have researched.

LO2: You need to ensure you upload all work for LO2. This includes using research from
LO1 to inform your own ideas for a print-based media product.

The resubmission deadline is: 22nd June 2018.