LO3 & LO4 FEEDBACK

LO3 & LO4 Feedback.

Current Grade for LO3: Pass

Current Grade for LO4: Merit

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on learning outcome 3 is a Distinction Grade
and Learning outcome 4 is a Merit Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are any minor
corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

Overall: Some good work here Brandon but you need to ensure that your put all graphics and
images and analysis you have used in your presentation in your proposal.

LO3: Some good initial ideas in your proposal Brandon however you need to ensure you
include pre-production materials such as images, masthead’s and information regarding
housestyle.

LO4: Great presentation Brandon! You were detailed and articulate by being able to
explain the different elements of your magazine. You addressed many key areas
effectively such as content and target audience.

The resubmission deadline is: 22nd June 2018.