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LO3 & LO4 FEEDBACK

LO3 & LO4 Feedback.

Current Grade for LO3: Fail

Current Grade for LO4: Pass

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of this
work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on learning outcome 3 is a pass grade & learning
outcome 4 is a Merit Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are any minor corrections or
additions, can you please ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.


Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with the
words “Re-Submission”.

Overall: Some good work Matthew however you need to write in more detail and build upon your
initial ideas. Please see feedback below.

LO3: You need to expand your work on distribution channels by expanding your research
on advertising and promotional methods. For this look at the variety of ways a media
product uses social media for example to reach their target audience.

LO4: You have demonstrated a sound understanding of legal and ethical issues however
you need to expand on how regulatory bodies implement regulations that media products
have to abide by.

The resubmission deadline is: 15th June 2018.

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