LO1 & LO2 FEEDBACK

LO1 & LO2 Feedback.

Current Grade for LO1: Fail & Pass.

Current Grade for LO2: Merit

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on learning outcome 1 is a Pass Grade and
Learning outcome 2 is a Distinction Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are any
minor corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

Overall: Some good work here Brandon however you need to be sure that you upload all work to
your blog for re-submission. Please see feedback below.

LO1: Great analysis of media product however you need to ensure that you upload all
completed work for LO1 Part 1 which includes the analysis of a media institution. For this
look at how a media institution operates and distributes it product and which marketing
and promotional techniques it adopts.

LO2: Your proposal is detailed and contains all the necessary information for your
magazine. Your draft articles have also shown improvements through editing and drafting
to ensure your article is too a good standard. Budget and production schedule are feasible
and realistic and the developments in housestyle and the aesthetic look of your magazine
is also completed well. You do however need to write in more detail regarding the legal
and ethical issues surrounding your magazine, for this look at the accuracy of the content
your magazine will produce.

The resubmission deadline is: 27th June 2018.