List number 11

Date 28-06-18

Reading and writing Home Test 1 Part 1

Outline

Topic

Love and War In The Streets

Introduction

Hook

Nowadays gangs are considered a big problem in many countries of Central America, but it
had changing in the decades between 1990 and 2015 where existed the true evil.

Set the scene

James Cortana lived in Nicaragua, a wonderful country, full of unhappiness, sadness people,
beautiful hills, and old houses like skyscraper where the beauty of the city is the only
thing that make to feel happy the people, Nicaragua is one of the most dangerous
countries in the world where you risk your life or you can learn to live happy, however if
you try to live there you can survive or you can die.

Thesis statement

One Friday June 16,1998, James Cortana went to buy cigarettes on a convenience store
called El Guaro. The convenience store El Guaro was in the middle of the city in front of
the park where many gangster were there to buy heroin, and cocaine every day. El Guaro
was the best place to buy drugs, food, drinks, because the leader of the gang 18 lived
there,his name was Viejo Lin and he wanted to hid his bad business of the police and the
convenience store was a nest of birds, in addition El Guaro received the money of the
crimes such as extortion,kidnappings,murder that gangster earned ever day, El Guaro was
as evil as the hell,in Nicaragua there was another gang named gang 13 wanted to destroy
El Guaro, because both of the gang were enemies,and the walls of the city said if you go to
El Guaro you can see the most horrible faces in the world.

Body paragraph

1. Beginning action. Topic sentence. James Cortana was looking some cakes in the
convenience store.
Detail 1. One of the most beautiful girls that James never had seen passed in front of him,
James started to talk to her,she was Cristal.

Detail 2. Cristal was the woman of Viejo Lin, and James did not anything about it, James
found problems.

Detail 3.Viejo Lin and his friends started to lick James, and he almost died.

Middle action. Topic sentence. James went to search Gang 13 to be a gangster.

Detail 1. Some members of gang 13 found James, and they went to see their leader, his
name was Sharky.

Detail 2. James started to talk to Sharky, and James decided to become in a gangster.

Detail 3.Sharky taught James How can he use a gun?

End action. Topic sentence. James started to think about how can he kill Viejo Lin.

Detail 1.James and the other members of gang 13 went to El Guaro to kill Viejo L in.

Detail 2. James and Cristal went to Sharky's house.

Detail 3. Viejo Lin's friends killed James and Cristal.

Conclusion

As I have shown, the life in the some countries in the world is dangerous, because there
were bad people such as gangster, killers,and the evil can consumed , and drag you toward
the bad road, James lived in Nicaragua, a country with many gangs, he was in the middle of
death, and he could not keep the control of his emotions and his thoughts, he chose the
bad road and as a result he died, it is something that happen with many people who live in
this kind of countries, a thing important for you it is keep the control of your feelings,
because it is something that can make us damage, and you can finish under the ground, so
if somebody makes something bad to you search good people that can help you, and live
happy.
 Love and War In The Streets

Nowadays gangs are considered a big problem in many countries of Central America,
but it had changing in the decades between 1990 and 2015 where existed the true
evil.James Cortana lived in Nicaragua, a wonderful country, full of unhappiness, sadness
people, beautiful hills, and old houses like skyscraper where the beauty of the city is the
only thing that make to feel happy the people, Nicaragua is one of the most dangerous
countries in the world where you risk your life or you can learn to live happy, however if
you try to live there you can survive or you can die.

One Friday June 16,1998, James Cortana went to buy cigarettes on a convenience store
called El Guaro. The convenience store El Guaro was in the middle of the city in front of
the park where many gangster were there to buy heroin, and cocaine every day. El Guaro
was the best place to buy drugs, food, drinks, because the leader of the gang 18 lived
there,his name was Viejo Lin and he wanted to hid his bad business of the police and the
convenience store was a nest of birds, in addition El Guaro received the money of the
crimes such as extortion,kidnappings,murder that gangster earned ever day, El Guaro was
as evil as the hell,in Nicaragua there was another gang named gang 13 wanted to destroy
El Guaro, because both of the gang were enemies,and the walls of the city said if you go to
El Guaro you can see the most horrible faces in the world.

James Cortana was looking some cakes in the convenience store, because it was his
birthday, so he wanted to eat one thousand cakes, for him cakes were as sweet as his
mother's kisses, later he bought an apple cake, and it smelled delicious, suddenly in the
convenience store one of the most beautiful girls that James never had seen passed in
front of him,she wore a skirt, sandals, her eyes were as blue as an ocean, her lips were two
lava's river, and James was lose about the beauty of the girl, inside James appeared a
wish of give her one million of hugs, so he said hello my name is James, What is your name?
And the girl answered him my name is Cristal, while James was looking her, she touched
one of the hands of James, his face was red like a tomato, Cristal said to him I want to
kiss you, and James asked her Do you have boyfriend? she answered him I do not have
boyfriend, James laughed about it, suddenly one man appeared and hit James,James fell
down on the wet floor,and he cried out What happened with you? She is my woman, and you
are the winner of a lick, James stood up, and asked him Who are you? And he answered
him, I am Viejo Lin, I am the leader of the gang 18, so James looked at him, and Viejo Lin
was full of tattoos about the number 18,his tattoos seemed the fury of one thousand men,
James was trembling, so Viejo Lin and his friends started to hit him ''punk,bang'' and
Cristal cried out ''aaahhhhh, nooooo, aiiiiii'', five minutes later Viejo Lin said to James, go
away, James went out and he shouted I promise that you are going to die, Viejo Lin was
laughing ''ja ja ja ja ja ja'', James went to his house his wounds were serious, and he lost
much blood.

After the terrible lick that Viejo Lin gave to James, he wanted to give Viejo Lin a taste of
his own medicine,so he decided to search Gang 13 to became in a gangster, so James
started to search them, and that day the sun wanted to hit James with its sunlight, so
James was tired, because he have searched them for three hours, so he sat down,
suddenly five men of Gang 13 saw James, and they asked him, Why are you here?, James
answered him, it is because I wanted to hit Viejo Lin, and I need to become in a gangster,
so one of them said to James we want to hit him too, because he is our enemy, we are going
to go to see our leader his name is Sharky, he can help you, come with us, so James went
with them, twenty minutes later they were with Sharky and James said to him I need your
help, because Viejo Lin gave me a lick, because I was talking with his woman in El Guaro, so
I want to give him a lick too, and I need to be one of you, because I know you hate Viejo
Lin,so we can work together, Sharky said to him okay James now you are a gangster, so if
you want to hit Viejo Lin you must practice with a gung, I am going to teach you, James was
afraid about it, so Sharky gave to James a weapon, and Sharky said practice with those
bottles, James had the gun in his hand, and the gung said to James, shoot James, we need
to kill Viejo Lin, shoot, so James started to practice, later Sharky said to him you are good
with the guns,we are ready James.

James started to think about How can he kill Viejo Lin? , so James said to Sharky
tomorrow we are going to go to El Guaro, and we are going to kill Viejo Lin, so we need guns,
and bullets, Sharky said to James okay talk to the other men, next day James, Sharky
went to El Guaro, when they were there, James started to shoot to El Guaro Lin''bang,
bang'' that place was a Swiss cheese, suddenly Viejo Lin and the gang 18 starter to shoot
to James, it was a bullets rain, suddenly Cristal went out, and James saw her, so he ran and
he touched her hand, while Viejo Lin was killing Sharky and the other men Cristal and
James went to Sharki's house, then Viejo Lin said to his friends go and catch him, so one
of Viejo Lin's friends threw a grenade, when the grenade fell on the ground a big explosion
started ''booom, caboom'', and James and Cristal died, when Viejo Lin watched that he
was laughing and said gang 18 forever.

As I have shown, the life in the some countries in the world is dangerous, because there
were bad people such as gangster, killers,and the evil can consumed , and drag you toward
the bad road, James lived in Nicaragua, a country with many gangs, he was in the middle of
death, and he could not keep the control of his emotions and his thoughts, he chose the
bad road and as a result he died, it is something that happen with many people who live in
this kind of countries, a thing important for you it is keep the control of your feelings,
because it is something that can make us damage, and you can finish under the ground, so
if somebody makes something bad to you, search good people that can help you, for you
happiness.

1.Simile

2.Metaphor

3.Personification

4.Hyperbole

5.Onomatopoeia

6.Symbol