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IR APR 27 2001 ID
IMAGINE STORY DEFT.
UNTITLED DETROIT PROJECT
by
Scott Silver
First Rewrite
April 27, 2001~ RABBIT ANGSTZOK
John Updike, "Rabitt, guns1
Run it under a harsh green fluorescent light.
CLOSE ON AN ANGRY BLONDE PUNK, his head flying in and out of
frame. Hard against SOME GIRL's face. Banging against a
dirty mirror. Sweating. Moaning.
GIRL
Jim Jim Jimey Jimey Jimmy oh god
Puck me Rabbit Rabbit yes oh yer
Simny Rabbit Fuck Puck Fuck
He's fucking her on top of a nasty sink. Fast. and furious.
Her short skirt hiked up high around her waist.
A wool cap pulled down tight over bis face. This is Jiv,
Jawes, B, Bunny, Rabbit, B-Rabbit & Jimmy Smith Jr.
To us he's just’ plain giver.
Gru
Ob Rabbit fuck yes ob yes
They're in a desolate bathroom. Wet. Full of noise.
Beats thumping through the walls. Fists banging cn the door.
The girl moan-moaning. It's all so fucking loud.
CLOSZ ON JIMMY, catching sight of himself bouncing up & down
in the mirror.’ Ignoring the girl, he's somewhere else.
Gone. Always moving. We hear her coming. Jimmy stops
Stares. The harsh light crowns his head, a burning halo
He doesn't look so good, cold sweat.
army
- I gotta run.
She jumps off the sink, yanks down her skirt
GIRL
(pissed)
Why? you still nervous? You're
lucky I ran into you ‘cause i'm
tryin' to help calm you down. But
it's like you ain't even fuckin'
here -
ore
(pulls up his pants;
dist racted)
- Wat? Wasn't it good for you?
GIRL
Yeah. You know I love the way you
fuck me, Rabbit. Why do you always
gotta ask?
Before Jimmy can answer a queer look crosses his face--
He rushes for a dirty stall and
we hear him puking his fucking brains out.