一 改错

Reading

When it comes to reading, everybody have inadividuls

opinions.some people think that we should read book setectively. There

are some reason for read book setectively.

First, more and more books are published. it is impossible for us to read

all the books. for reason that our time and vigorous is limited. What's

more many book can poisonous to our mind, owning to the content of

those books include crime, violent, unheathly and so on.

The other people, who hold that reading widely is better, There are some

reason for read book widely, First and foremost, read book widely can

extent our knowledge in all aspect. They believe that"to know more, to

read more".Besides, if one man have many kinds of knowledge. He will

have more chance to success.

In my opinion, despite all the disadvantage reason of read books

seletively mention above. I still think read book seletively is better. As for

this promble, I think that we would'd better make full use of books.

二 小作文

一 you have bought an air- conditioner from the department store, but

soon it doesnot work very well, now write to the department store to

1) tell them what is wrong with the machine

2) complain about the in convince it has brought about.

3)express your wishes that it should be repaired as soon as possible.

dear sir or madam,

i am a costumer who has bought an air conditioner last Sunday.

now, i regret to tell you that the machine is really far from satifying.

at first it made a little bit of noise, and i thought i can bear it.

however,the noise became bigger and bigger. at the same time, its pipe

began to leak ,which make our whole family feel horrible and we could

not go to sleep in such a hot summer.

in the end , i hope the problem could be solved as quickly as

possible,and we are looking forward to your reply eagerly.

yours truly,

Liming

you are the manager's assistant, and your company is going to donate

some

medicine to the patients in poor areas,please write a memo to inform

the faculty to have a meeting next week to discuss about the donation.

to : all the faculty

from: liming, manager's assistant

date: 25th 12, 2015

subject: donation of medicine to patients in poor area

 all staff are required to attend the meeting , which will be held next

friday in the dinning hall.

the main purpose of the meeting is to discuss the medicine donation to

the patients in poor areas. as you see, there people are so poor that they

could do nothing facing even little illness. thus, our behavior is quite

necessary. but before the discussion , every department should supply a

detailed plan.

the meeting will begin at 2 o'clock and everyone must be present on

time.

liming

三 欢迎关注微信公众号[梦之家考研]

notice bulletin poster announcement

welcome students to join in a club

1) the main activities of your club

2) analysize the advantages if students join in your club

3)how to join

dear every one,

 do you want to improve yourself and promote your english ability?

then come to join us now.

english club was organized 10years ago with more than 3000

mumbers.

one sunday evening, you will see a classic english movie. most important,

someone will be invited to express his idea about the movie, then we will

have a hot discussion on it.besides, a foreign friend could be introduced

to you if you like to, which is really helpful to your oral english.

so donot hesitate to join us, if you are interested in our club, you

could call us 136 or email us english club@163.com.

english club

四 欢迎关注微信公众号[梦之家考研]

a classmate wants to pass the examination of postgraduates, give him

some

suggestions about the major and tell him the reasons.

dear my friend,

i'm so delighted to hear that you decide to take part in the

examination of postgraduates. now, i just give you some suggestinons

about the major. for my part, english may be your favorable choice. first,

you love english and i think interest is the best teacher. then, if you

learned english as your main course, you would become an english

teacher who can help so many Chinese to realize their dreams。at last,
possibly, you could go abroad to teach foreigners how to study Chinese,

as is a fantastic idea.

so you could consider my suggestion carefully, and make a prudent

determination to have a bright future.

yours truly

liming

dear mr liu,

i have been one of your students who admire you a lot. the aim of my

letter is to show my great appreciation to you for your assistance.

maybe you've forgot that rainy day when i felt so bad because i failed

in the examination of CET 4. so many people passed me but nobody

turned back to solace me.at this time, you came here with an umbrella. i

remember clearly that you said nothing ,just put your hand on my

shoulder for a long time, then you told me with a slow tune that

yesterday is history , tomorrow is a mystery; today is a gift; that is why it

is called present. i was stricken by your words. quickly ,by working hard , i

passed the exam with a high grade.

at last, i will be a teacher just like you. wish you are well and have a nice

life.
yours truly

liming

大作文

1.精神类

a case in point, years ago, i had an intimate friend who was a teacher in a

middle school. in fact, the job was not his favorite, and what he really

wanted was to be a lawyer. after days of consideration, he quitted from

the school bravely, losing his admirable status as a teacher。at last, it was

through his hard endeavors that the dream to be a lawyer came true. the

story, as can be seen, strikes us that risks sometimes really means great

change. so just try what you want. if every young man waited and failed

to master the chance, what would happen to them? they could achieve

nothing until to the end of their life. so what could we do when facing

risk? for one thing, responsible schools are likely to encourage their

students to shoulder difficulties which are quite necessary to their

growth. then as a brave sea swallow, i just want to say, let the storm

become more fiercely and violently.

2.社会热点

pirated discs
 to clarify such phenomenon clearly, i would like to point out three

arguments. to begin with, under modern conditions, pirated discs are

not only quite cheap but also rather easy to be available for all the

youngsters, so why bother to buy the authentic ones?

in addition, the evidence that quite a few dishonest businessmen

manage to make more money by illegal behaviors indicates that there

will exist more pirated discs flooding our society and life.

at last, there is little doubt that the lack of national supervision seems an

indispensable role . the less authorities interrupt such illegal action, the

more pervasive those matters keep .

so what could we do when facing these pirated discs? for one thing,

responsible schools are likely to encourage their students to buy

authentic ones. at the same time, try to praise their behaviors in public

so that more people can learn from them. then as a lawful teenager, i

just want to say, refuse pirated ones from now on.

3,经济管理

网络购物成交额

electric commercial transaction

to clarify such phenomenon clearly, i would like to point out three

arguments. to begin with, there is little doubt that the price of the goods
is far less expensive than those in the real market , which is a good sign

for many common people. in addition, not only does shopping on line

save youngsters more time but also can save a lot of their energy and

strength, so why bother to buy dress or suit by traveling a long

distance?at last, with the advance of science and technology, the

internet has played a key role in both our study and our daily work. at

the same time, more service would be available including shopping

online because it is not only beneficial to costumers but also to the

sellers on the internet.

what would happen if the trend continued? undoubtedly , there would

be more Chinese purchasing products on the internet. indeed, what we

could do is to ban or confine its weakness and promote its strength to

serve consumers more conveniently and considerately.

模板总结

1.图画作文

一段：what looks so clear in the cartoon is that 图画描述. its drawer ,as

every one can see it, is trying to clarify a fact that sth is claimed even

more essential / grave under current situations.

二段：it is to see the phenomenon thouroughly that some factors could

be pointed out here. the most essential one seems that 原因简单句

although .......; another element that could be used here is that 原因简
单句(主谓中间插入语 little wonder），which should have led to wide

public attention. then in the end, if every one of 人 failed to do sth, he

or she would pay a heavy price in the near future.

三段

so someting , undoubtedly, could be done to settle the issue/ to promote

such behaviour. parents, as the primary factors in children's

education,should never fail to.... ; then as a private individual , sth could

be done . as a consequence , i just desire to say should not the issue is

worthy of our attention?

图表作文

一段 what looks so clear in the chart is that 图表描述. its drawer ,as

every one can see it, is trying to clarify a fact that______.

二段 t is to clarify the phenomenon thouroughly that some factors must

be pointed out here. the most essential one seems that with the

favorable policy of nearly thirty years, chinese economy has been

developing fast .under such conditions, society is becoming more

stable and harmonous .as a result, more chinese are inclined to do sth。

another element that could be used here is that chinese have been

satisfied with the existing state of affairs and reluctant to move

forward.however, such situations,years later, become quite adverse .

more 人 are fond of doing sth nowadays.

so could you imagine if the current tendency continued as it had, what

would happen in the near future. there , no doubt, would be more 人/

物 doing sth. what a hopeful/worrying matter. so i just desire to say

should not the issue is worthy of our attention?

正面模板

What could be seen clearly is that+ 图画描述. The purpose of the

cartoon is that _____ plays an increasingly crucial role in the general

routine of everyday living.

It is quite a few factors that could account for my argument. The

elementary element , in my judgment ,is that the evidence that _____

keeps a chinese conventional virtue with a long history means that ____
is really significant in the current situations. In addition, can ____ not

only manage to make human beings have more friends but also have

them achieve more glories, which could be widely accepted. Then just

imagine if almost every private individual failed to do sth? The

consequence is unknown. Therefore, the more ____ we do sth, the

more glories we will have.

so much attention ought to be paid to the issue of ____. For one thing,

the elderly should never fail to let their kids know the importance of

_____. Then as a modern undergraduate , i just want to say” should not

Chinese focus on _____?”

反面模板

What could be seen clearly is that+ 图画描述. The purpose of the

cartoon is that _____ has become increasingly fatal in the current

situations.

It is quite a few factors that could account for my argument. The

elementary element , in my judgment ,is that the evidence that _____

indeed brings about quite a few influence to the mental and physical

health of the average means that immediate measures should be

adopted as quickly as possible. In addition, can ____ not only leave a less
impressive to readers but also bring much trouble to our moral life,

which could be widely accepted. Then just imagine if almost every

private individual failed to do sth? The consequence is unknown.

Therefore, the more ____ we do sth, the more gloomy future we will

have.

so much attention ought to be paid to the issue of ____. For one thing,

the elderly should never fail to let their kids know the severity of _____.

Then as a modern undergraduate , i just want to say” should not Chinese

focus on _____?”