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Chapter 42
Chapter 42
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1. He was ill.
He could not attend the meeting.
He sent a proxy.
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3. Mr. Rahman is an M. A.
He is a friend of my father's.
He is president of this club.
He is dedicated (Ff<fr-roet.l) to social work.
3. Isawatiger.
It was chasing ({sRl Rr{l) a deer.
The deer was running towards the sea-shore.
I was then sitting on a branch of a tree.
Answer : I
saw a tiger chasing a deer which was running towards
the sea-shore, and at that time I was sitting on a branch
of a tree.
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While sitting on a branch of a tree, I saw a tiger chasing a
deer which was running towards the sea-shore.
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qql fr{ :
While sitting on a branch of p tree, I saw a tiger which was
chasing a deer which was running towards the sea-shore.
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sea-shore q{ftLT @q;
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fiMfro modifier ffi $dls, running . . . sea-shore c+) <rE dangling modifier.
fr6u-4 {rsK modifierF dangling (lss, q{s q qmrE 6q-4 *or6fr5q
modify F-{cq q -'B m) qaQt Elrq :
I saw a dead cow walking along the street.
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GFr, vt q+E qdfrce I <ts qir(qRq F] ,{-st ftrs oAVIcq;w ft?
Grammar : Techniques of Advanced Writing 767
Answer : Man-they say (6f6{ <rE)-is not born twice ' but I
think he should be born again and again if he wants to
' be PerfecllY human.
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Though they say that man is not born twice, I think he should be
born ilore than once, if he wants to be perfectly human'
762 A Passage to the English Language
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If man wants to be pe-rfectly human, then, I think, he should be
born more than once, thougi they say thai man ls
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man 4T{C{ he{Cfr{qr{Iil I
Answer: I know who he was, and / but not who he is, because
of the fil there being) great difference between him at
the age of thirty and him at the age of forty.
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Though I know who he was, I do not know who he is, for (mfqgy
there is great difference
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Though I know who he was, I do not know who he is, there being
great difference
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9. Man is a thinking animal.
He is capable of the strangest kind of thoughts ever possible on
earth.
Grammar : Techniques of Advanced Writing 763
As a result, all he thinks about is how he could be selfish in a
better way.
This is my opinion.
q-{i-vTr{-
When the enemies were thoroughly demoralized, they receded,
having left much food and many arms, which we took.
12. His mother died last night.
She had been suf{ering from several diseases for a long time.
She was seventy when she died.
Answer, @<l,siBc8sr{-
Because he was not able to walk and his head was badly
injured, he remained sitting there.
QqqFs q#+m-
Because his head was badly injured he remained sitting
there and was not able to walk.
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(General Rules)
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bY using aPPositives'
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q{'R *,*-str <nffi q E{cE qe-l-s r
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He is a very honest man.
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People say so.
Only one woman says that he is not an honest man'
Nobody knows why the woman saYs so.
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They say (that) he is a very honest man, while only one
woman says" (thafl he is not, and nobody knows why she
says so.
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qt
F'c< Yq6o {r{cq vs "l],efeitr qR<t GFt q? qc< I
qqr< qrqtcE El c's< EF
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Though theg/people say that he is a very,honest man, only
one woman says-nobody knows why-that he is not'
q<F frq nobody knows why (she says so)--clausefrf$ absolute qFFIC<
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PRACTICE MATERIAL
Combine each set of sentences into one.
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768 A Passage to the English Language
5. Man is mortal. It is true. Some people can become immortal,
not by avoiding death but by embracing it.
6. I know a man. He has five sisters. Each sister has five
daughters.
7. He was asked what his name was. He said that his name was
nobody. Somebody believed that. Not that everybody believed
that.
8. Poetry is the language of mind and feeling. It is an output of
mind. It is an input to mind.
9. He says what he does. He does what he says. He acts through
'#i:; words. He speaks through actions.
ri::; 10. You could have informed me of the incident (lf{}); I would
have helped you. I would do it in spite of my wife's
opposition.
11. He bought a hoe from the market.
He brought it home. His wife saw it.
She did not know irirat to do with it.
72. He was ill. He attended a meeting. It was a four-hour lhours
$trI meeting.
13. He is rich. He is not happy. I think he is unhappy because of
his wife. His wife is very quarrelsome and selfish.
74. He read the letter. He burnt the letter. There was some secret
information in the letter.
15. He is an honest man. It is true. I think so. Some people
question ({tr{R 6-41; his honesty.
76. The sun moves round the earth. It was believed in former
days. The earth moves round the sun. Science has discovered
this fact.
t7. This is a house. He bought it last year. He bought ii from his
uncle. He bought it for three lakh flakhs T{f] taka.
18. He has some money. It is enough to buy a cow. He needs a
cow that gives.at least {ive litre of milk daily.
INOTE : noun + enough + to + verb trt enough + noun + to +
verb Es{R qE+ r sr< adjective q< Crycg I adjective + enough +
to + verbl
19. There is a process of doing this. I know the process. Nobody
else in our family knows it.
20. He is honest. He cannot tell a lie. He is foolish. He believes
whatever others tell him.
27, He came home last night. Just then he found his '"vife ill. He
took his wife immediately to the nearby hospital.
22, He sat for the examination. He passed. He expected a first
division. He obtained a second division.
LJ. He went back home. He informed his family of the accident.
All of them rushed to the spot.
24. He heard that. He burst into tears. He exclaimed, "O my God!
How shall I live now!"
Grammar : Techniques of Advanced Writing 769
25. You want me to go with you? In that case you have to come
to my house early. You must come before 7 a.m.
lHint : Conditicnal sentence {(-{]
26. Dhaka is the largest city of Bangladesh. It is the capital of
Bangladesh. It is the oldest city of this country.
2V. He bought a horse {rom his uncle. His uncle had bought it
from his uncle. The horse was rvhite.
28. Wait here. I shall come back. I am going into that house. I shall
have to stay there for about half an hour.
29. Make haste. I suspect you may miss the train" If you miss the
train, you wil! be in trouble"
lf<csc sm?ri Tdfift (E<t-cqFrco ]rffi q&rl <tql Efiio rl
30. I am something.'I know it. I may be something (in ihe future).
I do not know that.
31. You are golng somewhere. I know where. I shall not tell you
where you are going. You do not know it.
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qcs SR etrEq rl
32. She is Tul!. She is my elder sister. She is going to be married in
the nexi manth.
[q{fr{ Tuli, my elder sister . . qsfC-{ apposition <,TqF s"Sffi
qfilE sister 4i "i{ .{46 comma <clcs qr< qfr s'fE "K who EFll
{fiio clause qlR-€ t<q{ 6q Fra?l
33. Country A is a socialist country. Country B is also a socialist
country. They have good relationship between them.
lHint : Country A and Country B, both socialist countries have
. . . qqtr{ {iT} SfBrs combine T-<(f, \5t gICfi standard {C{ 4f r
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770 A Passage to the English Language
36. He was born in Khulna. He was educated in Dhaka. He started
his career as a manager in 1985 at the age of twenty seven.
[Re&e Combined sentencefr {fr born in Khulna and educated in
Dhaka-qE participial (past participle) phraseF qKl es siTI q{ I