UWRT Writer's Name: 3 4 VAAN Gow Reviewer's Name: Paper Review Instructions art of your final grade (50 points) for the Genre Analysis is based on the credit you receive for this assignment. To receive full credit for this assignment you must a) bring a complete draft of your paper for this session b) complete the peer-review session, including answering ALL the questions on this sheet. Please swap your paper with one of two classmates (this can be on a Google Doc, Word Doe, ot printed copy). When you are finished, please make sure your classmate has your feedback and you theirs, Remember that you must make decisions about whether, or how, to incorporate the feedback into your revision for the final draft you turn in. Any changes you make are entirely your responsibility. Read-t minute ‘As you read, make note of both the positive aspects of the paper and the patts that you think need work, Please make notes in the margins to signal your comments. Remember to provide constructive criticism, and to respect your classmates as you would like them to respect you. Questions (temainder of the class) 1. What are the most successful parts of the paper (minimum of 2)? For each part, please explain why /how so. * Wnesis [introduction , . ~ gakes ak a Gere 1S As doves Whar He paper call lee abair * Suppor hry details c Geos pan y logical — vhe Mews Story aousts The man (den nN‘What parts do you think the writer shbuld work on a little more before handing in the Papet? For each part, please explain why (Do not simply say proofreading/typos: spend some time identifying the parts that need attention, such as otganization of the paper, full explanation of each point made, topic sentences, tansitions, proper use of quotations, etc) “Gyo ce~more wntol Leta on He Suppertmy sintements , yt Stagnr bo Fhe yank luk mone destnphon cout) be added. of Hae resources Listed ih + klso, being my Cia Ss . Does the paper provide an introducti dy, and a conclusion? Does the paper fall within the page count? Only WWsorry chareay MW WIN AHL Comt Does the paper have a title that effectivily describes what it is about? Could you offer comments to help your colleague with tile title? Please do so below. Veg Yad bk iS effec 5. Please identify and write down the paperp thesis. ‘The thesis is the main argument the paper makes before it starts discussing specific (leas that back up the thesis/main argument. Is there a thesis clearly stated in the opening paragmph(s) of the paper? If there i, is the thesis statement as clear as wt could be? If there is no thesit cleatly stated in the opening, please suggest what a strong thesis for this paper might look like (don't write a thesis for your colleague, just give suggestions). ottecr culture and cial features + hws=\ 6, Please summarize here each paragraph all paragraphs in no more than one line (use the numbers for reference; you should use as many entries as paragraphs there are in the paper) : due twits © Come cegerts are Classifred AS Agere qpabres, = Came reports are mind boy pooh and mvterer resident 5 Come reports use Formal language 4 Culture £ Aace Prekor wy vila comb teparts 5 Cyamgle ok A CAML eepork ant haw ib qualetres AS A CNL pefort, 6.