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Rhetorical Analysis Final - 11 14
Rhetorical Analysis Final - 11 14
Joey Kassenoff
ENC 1102
29 October 2018
Draft 4 – Final
Typically, law school is viewed as a demanding experience that can cause students much
stress and anxiety. A rigorous curriculum paired with the atmosphere of underlying competition
against classmates can pose challenges for students. This introduces the idea that law school
requires a very specific set of personality traits in order to be successful. Likewise, professional
lawyers are often stereotyped to show signs of being argumentative, dominant, confident, and
communicative. While this stereotype does not provide a flawless representation of the legal
community, it does propose questions as to if there is some accuracy to it. Whether the
stereotype is accurate or not, personality traits could undoubtedly affect a student’s likelihood for
success. So, the question arises: Are there personality traits that have either a positive or negative
effect on law student success? If so, is the effect significant, or is it negligible based off of the
particular candidate? Research done by Fagan and Squitiera focuses on providing an answer to
School” (2002), authors Ron Fagan and Paula Squitiera focus on the personality characteristics
that can affect first-year law student success. Additionally, they take the scores that students
received on the Law School Admissions Test (LSAT) and compare it to the Grade Point Average
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(GPA) of first-year students. So essentially, the authors are finding the factors that can affect a
student’s early success in law school. Fagan, a professor in the social science division at
Pepperdine University, combines his perspective with Squitiera, who adds an analysis of
personality characteristics as a psychologist with a private practice. The differing of the author’s
individual perspectives creates connections between the two fields to help draw conclusions
about the results of the study. The publisher of the source, Informa, was founded in 1998 and has
become a well-known academic journal publisher around the globe. Their published work is
trusted and widely read within the community. Regarding the traffic the article has received,
1076 individuals have viewed the abstract. Out of those individuals, 310 have views the full text,
making this a decently referenced source. The popularity of this source makes it a candidate for
the addition of intertextuality in other articles. As an original study giving unique results that
have never been addressed before, this article could act as a reference source within the discourse
community. This particular discourse community includes aspiring law students, current law
students, professional lawyers, and individuals interested in the success factors for obtaining a
post-graduate law degree. One of the main sources of contribution to literature in this community
are professors at universities that offer law programs, as they are a primary witness to the topic.
In regard to Fagan and Squitiera’s study, the discourse community is accurately represented
within the literature. Not only does the information address law school success, but the authors
The study is conducted by giving 137 law students the California Psychological
Inventory (CPI) test, to identify personality traits and competencies as they relate to individual
GPA during the first year of law school. Included in the CPI test are 18 characteristics such as
self-acceptance, responsibility, and flexibility. The traits were divided into four classes: Class I,
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interpersonal ability; Class II, maturity; Class III, achievement potential; and Class IV, interests
and thought structure (p. 97). Among the law student respondents, Class I and IV was scored
above the average. This indicates advanced communicative ability and intellect (p. 98).
Conversely, Class II resulted with a score well below the mean. This indicates independence,
impulsiveness, and a skeptical outlook. Lastly, Class III scores among the respondents were
essentially even with the mean. This symbolizes that students have average academic potential
(p. 99). The results show that law students often share certain characteristics, but their effect on
GPA is somewhat undeterminable (p. 100). Because of certain research limitations, the study
doesn’t propose an explicit relationship between characteristics and success. However, it does
provide an accurate report of the personality of the students, which is sufficient to synthesize
with other sources to draw new conclusions that include these results.
Fagan and Squitiera conclude that law students tend to be very confident and flexible, but
susceptible to anxiety and impulsiveness. Valid statistical evidence that comes from the CPI
scores of students helps to draw these conclusions. The reasoning behind the conclusion
combines several of the CPI test’s categories in order to summarize the personality of a law
student. For example, an individual’s Self-acceptance score could be above the mean, whereas
the Self-control score is below. This leads to the previously stated conclusion that law students
are confident yet impulsive (p. 99). The reasoning behind these claims are sound, but since there
are 18 categories in total it is difficult to generate such a complex personality portfolio. The
study fails to address the various combinations of the personality traits and how they can impact
each other, positively or negatively. To address this limitation, additional studies could be done
portfolio, and then comparing it to their GPA. By gathering a large data pool of unique and
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complex students, patterns concerning the relationship between certain characteristics and GPA
will arise. Furthermore, the study conducted by Fagan and Squitiera is limited to comparing
personality to GPA. There is no comparison to LSAT scores that each student received. The
LSAT is important at determining a student’s preparedness for law school, which introduces the
thought that personality plays a large role in deciding scores. Similar research utilizing the CPI
test could compare to the LSAT scores to determine if the same traits that effect GPA are
positively correlated to those that affect LSAT scores. While this study does include a few
limitations that constrict the applications of the results, he variety of characteristic tests allows
for either a basic generalization of a law student, or the complex analysis of various types of law
students. This is still valuable when paired with other sources within the discourse community.
Moreover, Fagan and Squitiera promote their own credibility by using original data on a
topic that had never been discussed prior (p. 98). By gathering noteworthy sources for their
background information and incorporating it into their own research, they were able to establish
a fluid research process. One the sources referenced was James C. Hathaway’s, “The Mythical
Meritocracy of Law School Admissions” (1984). Although the referenced source is slightly
dated, it still provides imperative foundational knowledge and propositions for the nature of law
school admissions. Topics highlighted in this study are the acceptance tendencies of the LSAT,
and the desired goal-oriented qualities to enter law school (p. 87). The author, Hathaway, is a
frequently cited lawyer who is affiliated the University of Michigan’s law school. In terms of
Fagan and Squitiera’s study, citing Hathaway’s work adds a highly touted opinion on the topic at
hand. In their study, the categorization and analysis of all the tested personality traits is easy to
understand, while still being thorough. Each important trait was explained to a reader so that they
could conceptualize what a higher or lower score meant for the respondent’s tendencies. Their
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survey method (administering the CPI) proved effective, because they received results that match
up with later sources on the topic. Care was taken to organize the results of the CPI in order to
analyze them efficiently, but a discussion about the relationship between the characteristics
Overall, the findings of the study are representative of personality traits that law students
tend to share, but the applications for the research stops there. The authors did find a positive
correlation between some personality traits and GPA, but the percentages were highly
insignificant. Perhaps a larger sample size would’ve better depicted effects on GPA. However,
the results that the study did present are valuable to determine what type of student is typically
enrolled at a law school. In the research project, the results concerning the four classes of
personality tendencies can be used in tandem with other sources to determine if there is a
relationship between characteristics and academic success. Individually analyzing the 18 CPI
scales can lead to making connections between them, and when compared to the demands of law
school conclusions can be drawn whether or not certain traits are favored over others. The
valuable perspectives offered by this study are from a professor of social sciences and a
psychologist, which fits into the discourse community surrounding the characteristics of a legal
profession. Their unique point of view will serve as a basis for the perspective regarding the
Works Cited
Fagan, Ron, and Paula Squitiera. “The Relationship between Personality Characteristics and
Academic Success in Law School.” Evaluation and Research in Education, vol. 16, no. 2,
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Hathaway, James C. “The Mythical Meritocracy of Law School Admissions.” Journal of Legal
www.jstor.org/stable/42897932.