Razie Hyria

Professor Zack De Piero

English 15

Revision Outline- After

Parag Main Point of the Paragraph How/Why It Supports My Argument

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1 Without the feature of written language, political my argument.

(Thesi propaganda posters would not significantly persuade,
s inform, or empower its target audiences.
State
ment)

2 Describing what some features of written language are, It explains some aspects of my thesis and
like rhetoric and its uses. adds of sense of professionalism. Like, i
know what im talking about, and makes
things clear for first time readers.

3 An example of semi- recent persuasive piece like It directly references a point in my

propaganda to appeal to voters and increase voting in thesis.
an election.

4 An example of older informative propaganda and the It directly references a point in my

significance of text in vague posters. thesis.

5 A recent piece that combines similar aspects of the It directly references a point in my
other examples to offer a new connection to the thesis.
significance of text in political propaganda.

6 A conclusion discussing some of the limitations Instead of touching on additional

political posters have. affordances, I mention constraints to add
a balance to my paper.