Galvez 1

Anel Galvez

Professor Holly Batty

English 28

13 December 2018

Reflection Argumentative Essay

My Argumentative essay was the most difficult of them all. This essay I left it last to revise

do to all the help I was going to need. I started by reading the comments Ms. Batty wrote and I

was missing the works cited page. I looked into my Bibliography to gather the outside sources

that I used and created my Works Cited page. Then I went ahead and read my essay to fix my

grammar, spelling, and MLA format. The most complicated categories were Thesis,

Organization, and Developmental support. I left it to the Writing Center because I was going to

need their help. The tutor had me read Ms.Batty’s comments of the essay and we went from

there. He explained the mistake I had done on organizing the Introduction and Thesis, he said to

rearrange the sentences because I already had all the details except they were not in the right

order. I had placed it in the middle so I placed it in the end. Next we worked on

Development/Support. He said to check my sources because it needed to be in sandwich

structure, to add more points and research. Lastly we talked about my transitional concluding

sentences. He said to check the endings of my paragraphs so they connect with the following

paragraph. He was very helpful and knowledgeable on all that was talked about and because of

this I am thankful I had great help.