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Preparation for the footballer is really necessary and

important so they always prepare themself by practice
themself and learn strategy of the enemy inside OTA’s for
hours.

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I. SPECIFIC TOPIC: smallest handgun ever (2.7 mmkolibri)
2. THESIS STATEMENT: 2.7 mmkolibri is the smallest gun in the
world.
3. OUTLINE:
I. Introduction
A. general facts
II. Body
A. facts of the gun
B. creator of the gun
III. Conclusion
A. general statement
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4. ESSAY:
Have you ever seen the smallest gun in the world? There ​was​ a gun
that can amaze you by the size of it. It is 2.7mm kolibr​i which is​ the
smallest gun in the world that has length of 11 mm and the wide of 3
​ iece of strawberry.
mm and really light weight​ like a p

The smallest gun is the creation of a man ​who​ named Franz Pfannl
who was watchmaker or manufacturer. He desi​gned​ ​the gun in 1910
and then he produced it in 1914 and stopped producin​g in​ ​1938.
Franz Pfannl is not the only one who crea​ted​ ​the gu​n ,​ ​he had
financial help from Georg Grabner to help making the pistol.​ ​2.7 mm
kalibri weight is 5.3 grams, 3 millimeter at its widest point and 11
millimeter from the base of the perimeter to the tips of the bullet.​ ​The
bullet itself is weight 0.2 gram, its velocity is 200 meters per second.
This gun sale on internet around 3,450 dollar or in thailand it is
around 120,750 bath.​The pistol was marke​ted​ ​for self-defense weapon
for situation that you want to pick it everywhere to use in any
situation such as when there ​were​ someone ​who​ ​wan​ted​ to rob you.
But it turn out that ​it was really bad​ ​at the defence because it has
forces of the bullet lower than punch of a man that is mean the bullet
has really low penetratio​n for doing damage or harming the enemy
that want to harm you,​ ​i​t mean​ ​it is hard and bad to defend yourself so
it shut downed ​in​ ​1938.

Guns have many size to choose some of them are long , some of
them are short some of them are wide some of them are narrow,
2.7mm kolibri is one of the smallest gun in the world.

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