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This is a rewrite of the story "Echoes Of the Past" by Gillian Puddle in the
Avon Club Zine "The Avon Special" [1998].
I thought the plot had interest, but the prose-writing was very weak.
Being untalented to rewrite prose, I rewrote it as a script.
(Somehow that was easier.)
Chopped fair whacks of it that seemed silly.
Feedback welcome.
[Soolin just barely catches a bottle of wine that nearly slips from
her grasp. ]
SOOLIN: Damn! That was close. [She puts it on a shelf by other bottles.]
[Aloud but to herself] Well, I defy even you to find these, Vila.
[She looks across the storeroom at a door, goes over to it, tries a
few times to open it.]
SOOLIN: Vila could probably open it. But he's the last person I can ask.
[She stares curiously at the door; then leaves the dimly lit room,
going into a larger bedroom. She presses a hidden switch; a door
slides across, perfectly blending into the wall. Soolin leaves the
bedroom and walks down corridors of Xenon base to the lounge.]
[Xenon lounge]
[Soolin exits from lounge into adjacent control room. Dayna and Vila
follow. Soolin presses a commlink, then again, then several others.]
VILA: You wouldn't like to help clean up in the lounge, would you?
DAYNA: You're right, we wouldn't. [exits]
[Soolin only smiles, presses a door-control and goes in; the door
closes behind her and Dayna continues down the corridor]
TARRANT: Almost there. Slave might as well handle the landing, it's routine.
AVON: You're staying on board this time.
TARRANT: What did you say?
AVON: You heard. You're to stay on board Scorpio.
TARRANT: I don't take orders from you. I'm not staying on Scorpio.
AVON: [half-musing to himself] I wonder if she likes you as much as she
liked Dorian.
TARRANT: What's that supposed to mean?
AVON: Can't you work it out? You're staying on board to prepare for an
emergency liftoff once the supplies are loaded.
TARRANT: Why should we need to do that?
AVON: Because this time we won't be paying for the goods. And this will
be our final visit to Arnos 2.
TARRANT: What's the matter with you, Avon? Dorian left ample funds to pay for
supplies, and last time Beron seemed to accept our story that Dorian
had gone into partnership with us. In fact I thought Beron and Mya
were very friendly and cooperative.
AVON: Well, I don't trust friendly and cooperative people. Especially when
they can supply highly specialised spare parts and equipment that
are unexpectedly available at an obscure trading post on Arnos 2.
TARRANT: What do you mean?
AVON: Last time while Beron was loading supplies and you were ... occupied
with Mya, I had a quick look around. I wondered where Dorian got the
specialist parts for his work and from what I saw, there's no doubt
in my mind that Beron supplied them. And he shouldn't have been able
to. They were far too advanced for a trader like him to obtain.
TARRANT: Perhaps he's got good contacts. I think you're jumping at shadows.
[They glare at each other]
SLAVE: My humble apologies for interrupting, Master, but landing clearance
has been received.
AVON: All right, Slave, take us down. I mean what I said, Tarrant, you're
to stay on Scorpio.
TARRANT: [frowns but nods] All right, but tell me, exactly what happened to
Dorian's funds?
AVON: I ordered a few parts last time for something I'm working on, I had
to pay in advance. Very specialised parts... extremely expensive.
TARRANT: [exasperated] But worth every penny we had, I suppose.
AVON: That remains to be seen.
BERON: [smiles & nods] Ah, Chevron. How was the trip?
[Avon walks back to the door and peers out, then quickly ducks back
inside, extracts a small container from his jacket, removes a device
from it and sets it on a shelf. He exits. Outside he looks warily
around & sneaks to another building, putting another device in it.]
[The workmen pick up the crate between them and go out. Avon and
Beron follow. Outside the building, Avon & Beron watch the two men
approach Scorpio with it.]
[Avon approaches Scorpio passing the two men leaving the area. He
casts a glance around, then swiftly boards Scorpio.]
TARRANT: Avon - [He stops in shock seeing Avon aim a Scorpio clipgun at him.]
NO!
TARRANT: [bit choked] All right, Avon. I'm listening, but it better be good.
AVON: Dorian... left us [slight smile] his ship, his base, and belongings.
TARRANT: And Soolin.
AVON: Unfortunately, I think we've also inherited the fallout from
Dorian's distinctly unpleasant past. We know Dorian sacrificed many
people to stay alive, and as he grew older he required an increasing
number of substitutes. We also know Dorian used the Seska's
technical knowledge in his work, which required a good deal of
specialist equipment and parts.
TARRANT: [sounding unimpressed] So? Tell me something I don't already know.
AVON: [thoughtfully] Centuries ago, men deliberately attracted ships
at sea onto rocky coasts to loot them when they ran aground. They
were called wreckers.
TARRANT: [sneering] A history lesson as well.
AVON: I believe Dorian and Beron were engaged in the modern equivalent.
Dorian's claim that he worked in salvage was a half truth. He
conveniently omitted to say he brought down the ships in the first
place.
TARRANT: [partly convinced] And just how did he do that?
AVON: I'm not sure exactly, a mix of tractor beam and standard systems
override, but whatever it is, I believe we've come within range of
it and [sardonic smile] just had a demonstration of its effectiveness.
TARRANT: [slowly] And Dorian stripped the ships for spare parts and used the
crews for his own purposes. You know, you could be right. So
presumably that means we can expect company pretty soon.
AVON: Not this time. Dorian's dead and I trust Beron and his men died when
I destroyed their base on Arnos 2.
TARRANT: [sarcastically mock cheerful] Then all we have to worry about is
being stranded here for the rest of our lives.
AVON: [smiles] All we have to worry about is getting into the cargo hold.
I left it pressurised this time. I suspected Dorian was up to
something like this, and from the parts I ordered I should be able
to make a jamming shield to deflect the override, to regain access
to Scorpio's flight controls.
[Tarrant opens his eyes; then from his blurry view we see straight
into the barrel of a gun. The figure holding it sharpens into focus
as Mya, smiling seductively at him. Beron strides over to stand
between them.]
[Tarrant slowly gets to his feet. Beron walks to Avon and pushes him
in the ribs with the toe of his boot. Avon stirs; Beron gives him a
firmer push. Avon eases himself to a sitting position on the floor,
puts a hand to the side of his head and stares at the blood on his
hand. He looks at Tarrant, Mya, then Beron. Beron gestures to Avon,
who rises and reseats himself. Mya covers them both with her gun.
Tarrant glances at her and she smiles brilliantly back at him.]
[Mya nods. Beron walks around the flight deck, examining the
controls, Slave, the teleport. Then he returns to stand in front of
Avon and Tarrant. He holds a gun.]
BERON: Slave?
SLAVE: Yes, Sir?
BERON: [walking over to Slave] So, you will obey me now?
SLAVE: I am programmed to take orders from anyone on the flight deck, Sir.
BERON: Slave. Plot a course for your home base and execute. Maximum speed.
SLAVE: Yes Sir, at once.
BERON: You can spend the journey wondering which of you will become my
first substitute. Although you'll both end up in the room... sooner
or later.
SLAVE: I humbly apologise for disturbing your noble thoughts, Sir, but we
have permission to enter fixed orbit.
BERON: Journey's end! [rises and approaches Avon and Tarrant]
ORAC: (v.o.) Scorpio. This is base. Are you receiving?
[Tarrant materialises to find Dayna & Soolin facing him with guns
drawn. Avon is on the floor. Orac is buzzing loudly.]
TARRANT: [shouting] Where's Beron?
[Soolin & Dayna look at each other and shrug, holster their guns]
SOOLIN: You and Sleeping Beauty here are the only ones who materialised,
although Orac seems to be working overtime.
TARRANT: [bewildered] Then what's going on?
DAYNA: That's what we'd like to know. You could try asking Orac, but he
hasn't been very communicative to us.
TARRANT: Orac! What happened to Beron and Mya?
ORAC: I sent them into deep space as instructed. Now the emergency has
been dealt with satisfactorily, I suggest you return to Scorpio to
supervise landing procedures.
TARRANT: Instructed? By whom?
SOOLIN: Who do you think?
DAYNA: Avon seems to have prepared for every eventuality - [she gasps as
she bends over him] - apart from getting himself shot.
SOOLIN: [joins Dayna] That was actually quite thoughtful of him for a
change, to save me the trouble, but I'd have been more accurate.
[She takes a quick look at Avon's shoulder.] I'll fetch a gurney,
we'd better get him to the medical unit fast. [exits]
[Dayna is starting carefully to lift Avon's torso; Tarrant steps
over to her and supports Avon]
TARRANT: You take his feet. Orac, how did you distinguish who you were
teleporting just now?
DAYNA: Does it matter?
TARRANT: It's unnerving to think I might have been teleported into oblivion.
ORAC: Avon left instructions that only you and he were to be teleported to
the base. It was a simple matter of recognition.
DAYNA: So. A case of mistaken identity could have proved fatal.
TARRANT: [disturbed] That's what I was thinking.
[Soolin enters with gurney, Tarrant & Dayna lift Avon onto it]
SOOLIN: We'd better hurry, he doesn't look good. [exits pushing gurney]
DAYNA: You bring Scorpio in, we'll handle it. [exits]
TARRANT: Why not. Orac, I'm ready for teleport.
[Avon is on one of the beds, his shoulder bandaged. The door to the
medical bay opens. Avon wakes.]
SOOLIN: How are you feeling?
AVON: Much better.
SOOLIN: You lost a good deal of blood, but the wound is healing well.
AVON: That was fast.
SOOLIN: I learned a thing or two from the Seska.
AVON: Any problems?
SOOLIN: No. Well - we've lost Vila. Nobody's seen him in over three days.
AVON: [small smile] He'll come out when he's hungry. [Notices Soolin's
grave expression.] Well, there's nothing I can do, is there?
SOOLIN: Yes. Drink this. Seska special.
AVON: [grimaces] Do I have a choice?
SOOLIN: Yes. You can take this and be up tomorrow, or you can stay in bed
for the next week.
AVON: [resigned] I'll take it. [Drinks, coughs a bit, seems woozy.] Get
the others to help you search for Vila. [sleeps]
[Soolin holds the cup, looking troubled]
[Xenon lounge]
[The dimly lit storeroom in Xenon base, where the wine remains still hidden]
[Soolin, gun in hand, tries the locked door; this time it opens. She
takes a torch from a shelf beside the door, switches it on and
enters. It's a jaggedly-hewn steeply inclined passage, pitch black.
Gun in one hand, torch in the other, she makes her way carefully
down; it levels out just at the bottom at an apparent dead end at a
smooth blank rock-face. Soolin casts her torchlight all around the
blank wall and spots a metal lever. She holds the torch between her
gun-arm and side, and turns the lever; a door swings open. She steps
through it and finds herself on the landing immediately above
Dorian's chamber of horrors. She looks disappointed, and returns to
the passage, pulling the door shut behind her. On the way up the
steep incline she slips, drops the torch which goes out; she falls,
hits her head on a protruding rock, her gun flies out of her hand,
and she is still.]
[ Avon enters control room, sets Orac down & steps into teleport area ]
ORAC: Of course I have. But I must warn you that the proximity of the
energy source could affect the operation of the teleport.
AVON: I am aware of that. [checks his gun & reholsters it.]
ORAC: Shall I give you the odds?
AVON: Don't bother. [picks up a torch] Just get on with it.
[Avon releases her and Soolin moves away, rubbing her arms. Avon
touches her arm, she jerks it away, & he gestures up the passageway.
They go several meters up the passage, then stop.]
SOOLIN: Damn you, Avon, you didn't have to hold me so tightly, especially
once I knew it was you.
AVON: I couldn't risk you giving away our position. He knew there was
someone in the passage.
SOOLIN: Who was that?
AVON: I'm not sure yet. But if I hadn't intercepted you, you would have
become another of his... guests.
SOOLIN: You think he has Vila?
AVON: It's possible.
SOOLIN: You say he knew we were here?
AVON: His instruments registered that someone was in the passageway. I
have a device in my pocket to project a field that deflects scanning
beams, so I'm invisible to him. Your... proximity to me guaranteed
you were within the field's envelope. Perhaps you noticed he consulted
an instrument in his hand; it told him no-one was here.
SOOLIN: Oh! [pause] How did you find this place?
AVON: Shortly after we arrived here, Orac detected a massive energy source
very close to the base. Orac investigated and found the energy
emanates from not one, but two entirely different sources situated
very closely together. One, it seems, is a computer without Tarial
cells; the other is as yet undefined. Orac plotted the coordinates
so I could teleport near the sources. Here's your gun. Alright now?
SOOLIN: Yes.
AVON: Good. Then let's pay a call on the neighbours and see if they've
stolen our thief.
[Avon's torch flits around the dead end, but no visible way of
opening. He hands Soolin a teleport bracelet.]
AVON: Put that on. We'll have to try Plan B. Orac. Plot coordinates a
metre due west of our present position. Then bring us up.
[Avon removes the bulky goggles & puts them in his pocket. He takes
an extra bracelet from the rack and clasps it on his wrist. Soolin
is shielding her eyes from the light.]
AVON: Ready?
SOOLIN: No, wait a minute. If I should need to, I couldn't focus on a target
at the moment; my eyes haven't adjusted yet.
AVON: I'll give you a couple of minutes while I fetch another gun.
[Brightly lit deserted corridor with doors here and there on either side]
[They approach the door, listen, glance at each other, Avon presses
the door-conrol; it slides open; guns at the ready, they burst in
together.]
[No one in room. Avon points to one display showing the interior of
the Hommik main chamber.]
AVON: Just as I thought -
[Both Avon & Soolin whirl toward the door, aiming at the man last
seen in the rock passageway. Their guns are wrenched by an invisible
force from their hands, and they collapse, unconscious]
[A dimly-lit bedroom]
[Zor is striding very rapidly & disappears round a corner. Avon &
Soolin break into a run and turn the corner, almost colliding with
Zor who is checking the lock on an open door.]
ZOR: I confined your friend here, but as you can see, he is gone.
SOOLIN: Well, at least that proves it was Vila.
[Zor looks at them, puzzled]
AVON: Vila has a way with locks. And having given you that piece of
information, perhaps you would care to to reciprocate in kind?
ZOR: [smiles] Follow me.
AVON: Orac. [no reply] Orac. [sighs] The teleport doesn't seem to be an
option at present. [walks to a door, operates the lever in the wall
next to it. Grating noise, door opens, revealing pitch-black
passageway. Avon reaches into his pocket, taking out the goggles,
and puts them on.] You could wait here and I'll try to teleport you
when I get back, if you -
SOOLIN: 'If you're afraid of the dark'. Whatever gave you that idea?
AVON: If you like, I was going to say. [They enter; door closes behind
them. Avon grasps Soolin's arm.] Well - are you coming?
[They walk up the steep passageway, then Avon suddenly pulls Soolin
to him.]
SOOLIN: What do you think you're doing?!
AVON: Sorry, overhanging rock. You nearly hit your head. Are you ready to
go on, or would you like a rest?
SOOLIN: Actually, I'd like an answer.
AVON: That depends on the question.
SOOLIN: Why wouldn't you wait for me to accompany you to Arnos 2?
AVON: Ah! That's still rankling, is it?
SOOLIN: You could say so.
AVON: [after a moment] I deduced that Arnos 2 was potentially deadly to
us, and the precautions I took for our protection were based purely
on educated guesswork, which is why I kept my intentions to myself.
Your dogged determination to find evidence of Dorian's past life
would have been an added and dangerous complication. I didn't know
then how Mya would react to female competition, but I now realise
with hindsight that she would have coped better than you.
SOOLIN: What's that supposed to mean?
AVON: Her response to other females would have been written into her
programming, so jealousy wouldn't have come into it.
SOOLIN: [angry] Believe me, I wouldn't have been jealous. Far from it, the
way I feel about Dorian.
AVON: I'm sure Tarrant gave you all the details of our trip. There's
nothing more to be said.
SOOLIN: I want to know if Dorian planned my death, or was he just making up
the numbers at the last minute for his gestalt.
AVON: From all accounts it seems you lasted longer than any other woman he
took back to his base, because your skill with a gun introduced an
element of danger into his liaison with you, which he found
exciting, as he realised you were more than capable of killing him.
SOOLIN: I see.
AVON: You wanted the truth. Make no mistake, you were marked for death the
moment you set foot in Dorian's base.
SOOLIN: I wish I had killed him myself. [Avon stops walking; Soolin halts
too] What is is? Why have you stopped?
AVON: We can't go any further. Ah, there's a lever here. [He operates it
and a door swings open.]
[At the same time there's an explosion from inside the base,
flinging them both back to the ground.]
AVON: Are you alright?
SOOLIN: I think so. The door must have taken most of the force of the blast.
AVON: [removes goggles and goes to doorway] Your bolt-hole has seen better
days. [Picks his way across debris of the storeroom, past broken
bottles of wine, to a large hole in the wall]
TARRANT: [looking through hole in wall] Avon!
AVON: What's the matter? Forget your key?
TARRANT: [climbs through hole] Um. Bit of a mess.
DAYNA: [following Tarrant] 'Bit of a mess'. That's an understatement. It
must have been the door we blew instead of the wall.
SOOLIN: Over here! [She is clearing debris around some fallen shelves.]
Look! [They can make out a pair of green-tan boots visible amongst
the wreckage]
AVON: Tarrant. We've found Vila. Or part of him.
[Together they push the shelves upright while Dayna & Soolin move
larger pieces of debris covering the body. Vila asleep is revealed,
a beatific smile on his face as he sleeps off over-indulgence]
TARRANT: Well, what a surprise. Vila's been having a party.
SOOLIN: He's lucky not to have been killed, but you know what they say about
drunks.
AVON: [dabbing at the powders and liquids covering Vila from head to toe]
Yes, but he may not be that lucky. [Grabs Vila's shoulders] We'd
better get him cleaned up fast. Dorian's chemicals could result in a
lot more than Vila bargained for if he's ingested any of that.
[Tarrant takes Vila's feet; Avon & Tarrant carry him through the
hole in the wall. Dayna nudges the broken wine bottles and shakes
her head.]
DAYNA: I did warn you Vila would sniff out the best wine, however cleverly
you hid it.
SOOLIN: [holds up one unbroken full bottle] [wryly] My wine conservation
policy wasn't an unqualified success, was it?
DAYNA: Not exactly.
SOOLIN: And for an explosives expert, your handling of the entry here was a
little mismanaged, wouldn't you say?
DAYNA: [eyeing the surrounding wreckage] Just a bit!
SOOLIN: Then why don't we retreat to the lounge and celebrate our shortcomings
with this while the others are busy?
DAYNA: Sounds good to me! How long d'you think we've got?
[A strangled cry followed by howls of protest reach them. Voices
raised in anger and furious splosh of water follow.]
SOOLIN: It sounds as though Vila's intent on sharing his cold shower with
the rest, so I imagine it'll be some time. Shall we begin?