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Descriptive Writing
Description is a kind of writing that produces a vivid picture of someone or something in our mind, and
generates a mood or feeling of the subject being described.
• It portrays a clear and bright picture of a certain subject: person, place, event, etc.
• It uses sensory details, rather than neutral words, to make the description alive.
• It replaces vague language with concrete precise language.
• It uses figurative language and creative images. (Refer to the “Glossary of Some Literary Terms” in
Appendix A at the end of the book, where figurative language is thoroughly explained.)
• It conveys the writer’s feelings about the subject.
• It sheds light on the core, the most important quality of the subject.
Working with Concrete Words
Use concrete words to describe your concept word – concrete sensory details to show what your
subject looks, sounds, or probably feels like. If the concept word, for example, is “friendship,” you could
write the following:
Friendship is like:
• Sight words: a dove, a flowery meadow, etc.
• Sound words: a guitar, etc.
• Taste words: honey, sweet cakes, etc.
• Touch words: velvet, silk, etc.
• Smell words: popcorn, chocolate cookies in the oven, etc.
• Action words: a quick hug, running, etc.
Activity 1
Develop a paragraph in which you describe the concept of friendship (or any other concept of your choice,
probably something like motherhood, bravery, cooperation, hunger, etc.), using concrete words that appeal
to the senses.
Sensory details vs. Neutral details
Focus on all kinds of sensory details, not just visual details, to make your description alive.
Neutral words Sensory words
1. The horse came toward us. The spotted pony galloped toward us.
2. I like summer. I like the smell of cook-outs, the sounds of cardinals,
and the taste of fresh strawberries that summer brings.
3. There was a smell coming from the trunk. There was a foul odor coming from the rusty trunk.
4. We sat in the attic listening to the rain. We sat in the hushed attic listening to the pounding
rain.
5. Susan lifted out the vest. Susan lifted out the soft satin vest.
Activity 2
Study the following descriptive words and try to use as many of them as possible in descriptive statements
of your own.
• Sight: towering – rusty – shadowy – silver – golden, etc.
• Sound: jingling – lilting – hoarse – echoing – musical – murmuring, etc.
• Smell: musty – putrid – earthy – lemony, etc.
• Touch: frozen – splintered – mushy – slimy, etc.
• Taste: curried – syrupy – pickled – fiery – salty, etc.
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Instead of using general vague language, try to use specific and precise language. Imagine you have a
camera. Zoom in for a closer observation and collect precise details about the subject. Consider the
following cases:
• General: She walked up the street.
Specific: Her tiny leather shoes patted over the cobblestone sidewalk and her long, straight navy skirt
brushed the many parked scooters.
• General: The boy struggled but the woman pushed him along.
Specific: Sweat popped out on Tim’s face and he began to struggle. His stepmother stopped, pushed him
around, and continued to drag him up the street.
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Activity 4
Develop a paragraph in which you describe a place or a person of your own choice.