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Writing Skills For Uni Studies U5
Unit 5
WUC 203/03
Writing Skills for
University Studies
Answering Written
Assignments and
Essay Questions in
Examinations
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Contents
Unit 5 Answering Written
Assignments and Essay
Questions in Examinations
Unit overview 1
Unit objectives 1
Objectives 3
Introduction 3
Objectives 11
Introduction 11
Understanding rubrics 12
Understanding keywords 13
Objectives 29
Introduction 29
Format 30
Layout 31
Objectives 41
Introduction 41
Objectives 53
Introduction 53
Summary of Unit 5 61
Course summary 63
References 73
Glossary 75
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Unit Overview
I n Unit 1 and Unit 2, you learnt what academic writing is and how it is different
from other kinds of writing. You also learnt the process of writing from choosing
a topic to editing and evaluating the final draft. In Unit 3 and Unit 4, you also
learnt how to write technical documents, reports and proposals in your professional
field. Ultimately, it is hoped that the principles learnt in this course will help you to
write better and more effectively, both for university studies and also professionally.
During the semester, you will have to do TMAs. It is also inevitable that you will
have to sit for an examination at the end of this semester not only for this course
but for your other courses as well. Thus, it is important for you to be prepared. This
is the main purpose of this unit i.e., to prepare you to answer essay questions
in examinations as well as answer written assignments. In identifying key terms
that are used in essay questions, you will learn how to answer essay questions
effectively. Finally, you will learn how examiners assess examinations. By learning
these techniques, it is hoped that you will be prepared for examinations that require
you to write essays. As in the other units, there are activities and self-tests to help
you understand what is taught in this unit. Attempt the activities in each section.
In addition, be sure to engage yourselves in the WawasanLearn activities by posting
responses on the discussion forum. Sharing your answers and your thoughts on
WawasanLearn will help you to develop your critical and analytical skills.
Unit Objectives
By the end of Unit 5, you should be able to:
3. List and use strategies you have learnt to answer essay questions.
Introduction
You would have written many essays as part of your schoolwork, homework and
examinations. As a result, you may be able to recognise the different types of essay
questions that you will be introduced to in this section.
Knowing these different types of essay questions will help you to be better prepared
to answer essay questions in examinations and for your assignments you will
know how to approach the questions effectively and how to answer them correctly.
In this section, you will learn two types of essay questions: structured and unstructured
essay questions. By working on activities that you will need to complete, you will
get a feel of what it is to write structured and unstructured essays.
Structured essay questions are also called “restricted-response questions” because the
writer who answers these questions is given limited freedom in determining the scope
of his or her essay i.e., what the content should be, how it should be presented,
etc. Consequently, the writer has to write according to what the question requires.
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Example 1
Write an essay of 200 – 250 words giving two reasons why rich governments should
continue to spend billions of dollars on space programmes — to find other possible
sources of energy and to seek alternative dwelling places for Earth’s ever-increasing
population.
In this example, we can see that the writer has to limit his or her answer to the
following conditions:
Example 2
The price of petrol in Malaysia is subsidised by the government. Discuss the positive
economic and social impact this has on the populace.
1. The question limits the writer to a specific content i.e., petrol subsidies
(“The price of petrol is subsidised by the government”). The examiner or
tutor will not award marks for discussion about other aspects of petrol.
2. The scope is limited to two aspects i.e., the positive economic and social
impact. Do not discuss other impacts.
In summary, you have to be careful of the scope of your content when you are given
a structured essay question. Write within the given focus. Do not spend time writing
beyond the given scope.
Work on the following activity so that you will understand how to answer a structured
essay question.
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Activity 5.1
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In light of the above, you have to plan the essay outline well so that you will fulfil
the requirements of the question and also be sure to stay within the number of
words and do not stray from the assigned subject matter.
Example 1
Select a social or ethical issue related to science and technology (such as euthanasia,
cloning, or genetically modified food). What is your personal position regarding the
issue? Present your argument in an essay of about 500 words.
The topic is limited to the field of science and technology. However, the writer has
the freedom to choose specific topics he or she is familiar with. Examples of specific
topics such as euthanasia, cloning, or genetically modified food are given.
The writer is limited to discuss either a social or an ethical issue related to the above
field.
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Example 2
Choose an issue related to your field of study that you would like to write about.
Discuss this topic with your tutor. Proceed to write the essay once your tutor has
given his or her approval.
1. Here, the writer has much freedom. The writer can choose any issue related
to his or her field of study.
2. However, the writer must discuss the chosen topic with the tutor before
approval is given.
For such a question, remember to narrow down your topic. Discussing a topic that
is too general can be a problem as there are too many aspects to be discussed. This
will result in an essay that is full of generalities and one that is lacking in substance
or direction.
Activity 5.2
1. Narrow down the given topic to one aspect that you want to
write about.
Introduction:
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Body paragraph 1:
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Body paragraph 2:
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Conclusion:
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Activity 5.3
Summary
Self-test 5.1
1. What is the first thing you would do when you are given the
above topic?
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Feedback
Activity 5.1
Activity 5.2
For instance, “How food has changed in the past fifty years in
Malaysia”.
Introduction:
Body paragraph 1:
Body paragraph 2:
Conclusion:
1. Explain what the rubrics of an essay question mean, and subsequently choose
an appropriate approach to meet the requirements of the rubrics.
2. Identify keywords in essay questions and explain what they mean, and
subsequently write essays adequately with relevant content and structure.
Introduction
In this section, you will learn to understand requirements (also known as “rubrics”)
for essay questions and to answer the questions appropriately and precisely. Often,
examination candidates do not do well in essay questions because they misread the
questions and write what is not required. Thus, it is important to know how to
understand essay questions.
Understanding rubrics
What am I supposed
to write?
“Rubrics” simply means the instructions on answering the questions. How can one
comprehend the rubrics of an essay question? To do so, you need to do the following:
Example
Read the sample essay question. What does the question generally require
you to do? What is the question about?
2. Read again to find out what the specific requirements of the question are. What
does the question want? In other words, what do you as the writer of the
essay specifically need to write about?
The specific requirement for this sample essay question is to describe the
eight (8) stages of the decision-making process. You also have to ensure
that it is in the right sequence.
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Activity 5.4
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Another aspect to consider when you read the rubrics is to look at the keywords.
The keywords will determine how and what you need to write in your essay. We
shall look at keywords such as “define”, “explain”, “exemplify” and “discuss” in the
next subsection.
Understanding keywords
In this subsection, we will revise some important instructional keywords (also known
as “task words”) that you have learnt in Unit 2. You may encounter these keywords
in essay questions and in other writing tasks. It is important to understand them so
that you will be able to answer essay questions appropriately. Let us look at some
common instructional keywords you may encounter in an examination.
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Define
Example
In your own words, define “space technology” and discuss if Malaysia should spend
money on it.
In this example, you need to define “space technology” in your own words. This is
why it is important to read widely (as advised in Unit A on the WawasanLearn) so
that you can have a broad knowledge of the world which ultimately helps you in
working on your assignments and in answering examination questions.
In the context of an examination, even in the absence of the phrase “in your own
words” as in the example above, it is understood that you are to give the definition
of “space technology” according to your understanding.
In the case of an assignment where you have access to reading materials, you should
read books related to space technology and define the term as it is given in the texts.
For essay assignments and examination questions, it is hardly unlikely that you are
asked to only define something. You are usually instructed to work on a task such
as to “explain”.
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Activity 5.5
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Explain
Activity 5.6
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When you write your essay, it is always necessary to include some examples as evidence
for the points that you communicate. Sometimes, this is stated specifically in the
rubrics which means that you have to provide examples. The word “exemplify” is
used for this purpose. Let us look at this word in the next subsection.
Exemplify
Generally, you need to illustrate your points in an essay by supporting them with
examples. If a question specifically asks for examples, you will have to ensure that
there are examples given. Examples seek “to illustrate some part of a statement by
showing the reader a specific instance of it” (Brannan 2003, 41). When you provide
examples, they must be specific (i.e., not generalised examples) and supportive of
the point that you are explaining. It would be irrelevant to provide examples that do
not illustrate the point that you are explaining. Remember to develop your example
by connecting your example to the point or the topic sentence that you give.
You are contributing an article for your university magazine. The article is about
problems faced by adult learners in an open university. Share your personal
experiences in your answer.
In the question, you are to give your personal experiences as examples. Remember
to ensure that the examples that you provide are relevant to the point that you are
making.
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Another problem faced by adult learners is finding time to study. Many adult learners
have full-time jobs which they need to concentrate on. In other words, between
work and study, work has to come first. Consequently, the adult learner will have to
manage his or her time well so that he or she can do his or her work first and then
find time to study. Most of the time, I have to work overtime to meet my project
deadlines, failing which my contract may be terminated by the main contractor.
So, I am greatly pressured to do my job well, and at the same time, find time during
breaks, meals or just before I sleep to go through my study notes and work on my
assignments. It can be tough to be an adult learner but I know the fruit of all this
hard work will be precious.
Note the structure of the above paragraph. The topic sentence is Another problem
faced by adult learners is finding time to study. In this sentence, the topic is Another
problem faced by adult learners, and the controlling idea is finding time to study.
First, explain the problem of finding time to study. The writer explains that work has
to come first, and provides specific examples I have to work overtime to meet my
project deadlines, failing which my contract may be terminated by the main contractor,
and at the same time, find time during breaks, meals or just before I sleep to go through
my study notes and work on my assignments.
Note also that the explanation and examples are developed so that the reader can
understand the connection between the examples and the topic sentence.
Read the following paragraph. What are the differences between this paragraph and
the above paragraph?
Another problem faced by adult learners is finding time to study. Many adult learners
have full-time jobs which they need to concentrate on. In other words, between
work and study, work has to come first. Consequently, the adult learner will have to
manage his or her time well so that he or she can do his or her work first and then
find time to study. For example, I too have a lot of work and sometimes do not
have enough time to study. It can be tough to be an adult learner but I know the
fruit of all this hard work will be precious.
I hope you have been able to identify that the example given is not specific and it
is also not developed.
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Activity 5.7
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4. Choose one topic sentence and its relevant example that you
have written and develop them into a paragraph. Remember to
be specific in your example and develop it.
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In the next subsection, we will look at the word “discuss” which is another common
word that is used in essay questions.
Discuss
“Discuss” is synonymous with “explain”. In other words, when you discuss an issue
or a point, you present an elaboration on that specific issue or that particular point.
When you conduct a discussion, you may consider expressing viewpoints from
various perspectives.
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This topic is very general. No specific direction is given as to how your essay should
be structured Are you to agree or disagree with the topic?
Here, you can present both views one paragraph to explain why some people agree
and another paragraph to explain why others disagree. You should also indicate your
stand (i.e., your position as to whether you agree or disagree) in a separate paragraph.
A sample outline of the essay may look as follows:
Thesis statement: It has its truths and also its untruths — different views.
Body paragraph 1 Topic sentence: First view — Some people agree that religion is the
opium of the masses because religion has helped many people by giving
them hope.
Body paragraph 2 Topic sentence: Second view — Disagree because the misuse of religion
can put people into bondage.
Body paragraph 3 Topic sentence: My view — My personal opinion is that religion has its
place in a person’s life.
Closing statement: Religion may not be the opium of the masses, but
for some who use religion to control others.
In the above outline, two perspectives of the quotation are given one to agree
(Body paragraph 1), and the other to disagree (Body paragraph 2). Body paragraph 3
gives the personal stand of the writer.
Remember to give relevant examples (where necessary) to illustrate the points that
you are making.
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Activity 5.8
“One should fight fire with fire”. Discuss this statement with regard
to gun control.
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Another set of keywords is “compare and contrast”. When you are asked to compare,
you are to write the similarities between one thing and another. To contrast is to
write the differences of one thing from another. This is a popular kind of question
and it requires you to demonstrate mastery over both concepts and show that you
can find the connections between them.
For instance, if you are asked to compare and contrast doing an open distance learning
course and a full-time campus course (i.e., studying full-time in a university), you
should discuss the similarities and the differences between these two modes of study.
1. List all the similarities first and state all the differences in the following
paragraphs before the conclusion.
Introductory Paragraph
Similarities
Differences
Concluding Paragraph
2. Discuss the particular features in which the two concepts find similarities
and differences. This is a more complex approach to comparing and
contrasting.
Introductory Paragraph
Feature 1
Concept A
Concept B
Feature 2
Concept A
Concept B
Feature 3
Concept A
Concept B
Concluding Paragraph
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Other keywords
There are many other instructional keywords that you may come across in essays.
Here is a list of them and explanations on what you are required to do:
Illustrate Draw a picture and label its parts. Give a long written example
to explain something.
(Illustrate the use of Edward de Bono’s CoRT 4 tools in
generating creative ideas.)
Identify To name or state.
(Identify five strategies that will reduce miscommunication.)
Interpret Explain, translate, provide examples and give your opinion.
(Interpret the following lines from Robert Frost.)
Justify Provide reasons and facts to support the topic.
(Justify your decision for choosing Plan A instead of Plan B.)
List Present information as a series of points.
(List the importance of writing skills in the workplace.)
Outline Present important information in an organized manner.
(Outline the steps of the writing process.)
Prove Cite evidence or proof, giving clear and logical reasons.
(Prove that the Road Safety Campaign was a success.)
Relate Write about the connection between topics.
(Relate the connection between texting while driving and the
high rate of road accidents.)
Review Examine, analyse and comment on the topic critically.
(Review the novel “Great Expectations” by Charles Dickens.)
State Present the main points in a clear and concise manner
(State the steps leading to the signing of the contract.)
Summarise Present the main points in a brief manner.
(Summarise the president’s speech in not more than 100
words)
Trace Present information in the order something occurred.
(Trace the events leading to the formation of Malaysia.)
Activity 5.9
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Summary
Self-test 5.2
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4. Will the content of the essay change if the question uses the
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Feedback
Activity 5.4
Activity 5.5
Activity 5.6
Supporting sentences:
To excel in education, one has to sacrifice a lot of
one’s time to study and work on assignments.
This builds a person's character through values such
as patience, diligence, creativity, etc.
Conclusion Restatement/Summary: Striving for excellence in
university education starts with the individual. It
takes time and effort i.e., not immediate.
Activity 5.7
4. Exercising can help one to live a healthy life. When one exercises,
the muscles and the heart are worked on and also the blood
circulation is improved. These help to make the body tissues firmer,
making one look more youthful and healthy. Thus, activities such
as aerobics and gym workouts help to put the body in motion
and improve blood circulation. Lifting weights in the gym also helps
to develop one’s muscles. Consequently, one’s physique looks better
and more attractive. In summary, exercising provides many benefits
for everyone.
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(All appropriate answers are acceptable. You may want to submit your
paragraph to your tutor for feedback.)
Activity 5.8
(You may want to submit your paragraph to your tutor for feedback.)
Activity 5.9
(You may want to submit your outline to your tutor for feedback.)
Introduction
The earlier units discussed how you go about preparing your academic essays and
how to go about answering the various essay questions. You have put in a lot of
time and effort in planning, drafting and writing your essay, and in this section,
you will learn about how to present the fruits of your labour. Just as a chef has who
has cooked a great meal would want to present the dish in an eye-catching way, you
would want to do the same. Naturally, for all the time invested in your assignment,
you want to obtain the best score possible.
Do be aware that marking essays is rather subjective. This means that one assessor’s
marks for an essay may differ from that of another assessor although the both of them
may use the same criteria for marking. The difference in marks is usually not too
wide but it does show that different examiners will view the same essay differently.
What can you do to ensure that you obtain the best possible score?
Chefs don’t just cook and then simply put the food on the plate for them, the
presentation is the most crucial stage. The choice of plates, the way the various items
of food are arranged, the colours, the decoration these are some of the aspects
chefs place importance on. Chefs are fond of saying, “We eat with our eyes first.”
Similarly, the way you present your essays is the first thing your tutors or lecturers
see before they even begin evaluating your work. Submitting visually-pleasing essays
is one way to ensure your create a good impression. In many cases, the layouts of
some essays are so bad that it is almost impossible to tell at a glance how many
paragraphs were written. Examiners very frequently cannot tell where one paragraph
ends and the next one begin.
In this section, we will look at some of the techniques of improving your presentation.
Do remember that ultimately your tutors and examiners will award you marks
according to your content and your language for English Language related courses.
For other courses, marks are given for content, but you must remember that if
your language proficiency is not good, it will definitely affect the way your answer
is communicated.
Format
The first thing you have to consider is the format of your essay. Always stick to
the format given by your institution. If no format is provided, here are some of the
usual recommendations:
4. The text of your essay should be aligned to the left. Do not justify the
text selecting this option produces weird results in the reference list.
5. The usual fonts recommended are Times New Roman or Arial, and a font
size of 12 point is usually recommended.
7. The recommended paper weight or paper density is 80gsm (grams per square
meter). Paper of a lower density might allow too much light to pass through
making the text of the following page visible; and therefore making your
essay difficult for your tutors to read.
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8. Use plain white paper for your assignments. Coloured paper may be used
only if necessary such as to indicate a separation between the main text
of your assignment and the appendix.
9 Most importantly, on the first page of your assignment, you should have
the following:
• Student’s name
• Student ID
• Lecturer’s/Tutor’ name
10. In preparing your reference list at the end of your assignment, the style and
format adopted by the university is the Chicago style.
1. Ensure that your handwriting can be easily read. Write neatly, and make an
effort to write your letters, words and sentences legibly.
3. When using a pen, use black or dark blue ink. Light-coloured ink tends to
make your text look faint and such text is difficult to read.
4. Plan your essay outline before proceeding to write your final draft. An
essay with scribbles, cancellations or liquid correction marks is annoying
to the examiner. Let the examiner focus on your answer, not distracted by
the various alterations on your answer sheet.
Layout
According to the Macmillan Dictionary online, layout refers to the way in which
the different parts of something are arranged. Just as a chef views the way the nasi
lemak is presented to the customer, you should similarly view the layout of your
essay as very important.
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Essay A Essay B
The most dangerous animal in the The most dangerous animal in the
world world
What is the most dangerous animal
in the world? If you think it is some What is the most dangerous animal
fierce jungle beast, you are wrong. in the world? If you think it is some
According to many scientists, fierce jungle beast, you are wrong.
the most consistently dangerous According to many scientists,
animal in the world is the common the most consistently dangerous
housefly. animal in the world is the common
The housefly carries millions of housefly.
germs. Because of its habit of
feeding on excrement and rubbish, The housefly carries millions of
and any form of filth, a single germs. Because of its habit of
housefly can harbour thirty-three feeding on excrement and rubbish,
million germs in its intestines and and any form of filth, a single
more than five hundred million housefly can harbour thirty-three
germs on it body and legs. million germs in its intestines and
The housefly is dangerous to more than five hundred million
people because it spreads diseases. germs on it body and legs.
Being a carrier of germs, it is not
surprising that it is the bearer of The housefly is dangerous to
such dreaded diseases such as people because it spreads diseases.
typhoid fever, tuberculosis and Being a carrier of germs, it is not
diarrhoea. These diseases kill surprising that it is the bearer of
people. such dreaded diseases such as
These are the reasons why the typhoid fever, tuberculosis and
housefly is considered dangerous. diarrhoea. These diseases kill
To reduce the problems caused by people.
houseflies, we should always cover
food, and ensure that all rubbish These are the reasons why the
bins are covered with lids. housefly is considered dangerous.
To reduce the problems caused by
houseflies, we should always cover
food, and ensure that all rubbish
bins are covered with lids.
Can you see a title and four paragraphs in each of the above essays at a glance? Which
is easier to see? Why? As will observe, Essay B has a better layout. Hopefully, you
will be aware, that your task does not end with the completion of the writing of
your essay you need to put some thought on your layout.
Here are some considerations to ensure that the layout of your essay is pleasing to
your reader’s eye:
1. The title of your essay must be clear. It should stand out. For an assignment,
put the title in bold and centre it. In an examination, underline the title.
Look at the following examples to illustrate the importance of format and layout:
Paragraph A
In Paragraph A, several words are cancelled and replaced with other words.
Corrections are made and a few words are inserted. Besides making the essay look
like a rough draft, the finished product looks untidy. Would you like to read an
essay like this? Do you think your tutor or the examiner would like to read it? It is
therefore better not to handwrite the assignment as handwritten assignments can
be misread by the examiner.
Paragraph B
The recent bridge collapse in Minnesota, America is a grim reminder of the need
to be vigilant at all times. Had the city engineers and the city officials been vigilant
in their work and notified the relevant authorities of the need to strengthen the
bridge, many lives would not have perished in the tragedy. Unfortunately, many
people tend to be careless they tend to take things for granted, assuming that
all is well until a tragedy strikes.
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Paragraph B is an improved version of the text. Note that without the corrections
made on the text, and typed using the appropriate font size, font type and line
spacing, the text definitely looks more pleasing and presentable. In short, do not
submit to your tutor or the examiner a draft text with all the corrections that have
been made. The final text you submit should be edited, neat and presentable.
Before we end this section, here are some ideas adopted by students in their
attempt to get their tutors, lecturers or examiners into awarding them more marks.
Unfortunately, these tricks do not work. You are advised to avoid them.
Graphics, pretty binders, colourful covers and fancy fonts are no substitutes
for a well-written paper.
2. Using large fonts, wide margins and extra spacing to increase the number
of pages.
These deceptive tricks are immediately obvious to the eye. Your tutors
and examiners are very experienced people and they cannot be fooled into
thinking you have prepared a lengthy assignment.
Remember that the quantity can never replace the quality of your answer.
Avoid padding your essay with unnecessary information. Tutors and
examiners devote many hours grading essays, and would certainly prefer to
read answers that are clear and straight-to-the-point rather than go through
paragraphs of unnecessary information searching endlessly for the correct
responses.
Activity 5.10
The essay below has a title and five paragraphs. Because of the poor
formatting and layout, the examiner would have difficulty seeing
the title and the various paragraphs at a glance.
Retype the essay below by adopting the format and layout below:
Format:
• Font size: 11
• Spacing: 1.5
Layout:
• Title: Centred
nor can they fight back. If you think they are defenceless, you
are wrong. Plants have ways to defend themselves.
One way plants have to defend themselves is by having sharp edges or
thorns. For example, the leaves of a holly plant have sharp spines that
discourage animals from eating its leaves. This is how the holly plant
defends itself physically.
Another way plants defend themselves physically is by having
hard leaves. The oak tree has leaves that are thick and hard which
make it difficult for animals to eat them.
Besides physical means, plants make use of chemical defences.
For example, when a caterpillar bites a tobacco leaf, the chemical
nicotine is released. This nicotine
Activity 5.11
Title: ________________________________________________
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Conclusion: Restatement
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Summary
Format refers to the choice of fonts, font size, line spacing, text
alignment, and margins. Layout refers to the way text (titles and
paragraphs) and graphics are set out on the page.
Physical characteristics of your product such as the type of paper
for the assignment, the tidiness of your assignment and the type of
stationery you use for your writing are equally important.
Self-test 5.3
You are given ten weeks to complete this assignment. The following
is a sample of your assignment:
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3. What format and layout would you consider for this essay
assignment?
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Activity 5.11
Conclusion: Restatement
As you can see, plants are not completely defenceless as many people think.
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Introduction
Assessment is one activity that you, as a student, will always encounter. Students
are assessed through examinations, tests, assignments and activities. Employees are
appraised by their managers on their capability to do work. Assignments are also
assessed and evaluated so that a grade or marks can be awarded accordingly.
In this section, you will look at how essays are assessed. You will also learn how to
assess your own essays and that of your peers. By conducting such assessments, you
can become aware of what you need to do to improve you academic writing skills.
In this section, you will learn what assessment is, followed by an explanation of
how essays are assessed. Do attempt the activities so that you can have a clearer
understanding of how essays are assessed.
2. Assessment
Here’s an example of an evaluation of that same article. You would notice that
it makes a judgement based on the assessment given above:
The article is well-written and is suitable for publication in the university’s next
journal.
Before you submit in your essay to your tutor or the examiner, you can do a
self-assessment. For assignments to be submitted to your tutors, you can also
have peer-assessment whereby your peers use relevant criteria to assess your essay.
You will learn about these two types of assessment here.
1. Impression marking
Question:
The women’s liberation movement in the West during the early twentieth
century has brought many social changes to Western society, especially to
the status of women as compared to men. Some of these changes have
spilled over to Asian communities. Compare and contrast the status of
women in the Western and Asian worlds.
The response provides a genuine comparison and/or contrast
about most of the qualities of authenticity, completeness,
consistency, typicality and usefulness in relation to the question.
Areas of agreement and/or disagreement are discussed. The
argument shows judgement. The writing shows accuracy in
18 – 20 grammar, punctuation and spelling.
marks
[“Genuine comparison and/or contrast” means content (area of
agreement and/or disagreement) and provenance. The list of
qualities is not exhaustive and not all these qualities need to
be discussed. A judgement “as evidence” on the relative extent
of support is expected.]
The response provides an effective comparison and/or contrast.
The judgements are supported by appropriate references
to internal evidence. The answer is relevant but it lacks
completeness and the full range of the available comparative
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criteria. Most of the writing shows accuracy in grammar,
marks
punctuation and spelling.
2. Analytical marking
Let us look at one example of a detailed marking scheme that is taken from
another course. Although the marking scheme does not look at language, it
gives you an illustration of what a detailed marking scheme is. The following
sample detailed marking scheme is used in WOU for two parts of a tutor-
marked assignment (TMA) question designed by the School of Business.
Marking Scheme
Question 1
(8 marks)
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Question 2
(4 marks)
Marks Marks
Criteria for each question
allocated awarded
(S1) Question 1
Explanation on the importance of organisational 2
structure.
Good explanation on 3 roles that organisational 2
structure plays in an organisation’s efficiency
and effectiveness.
(2 marks per role discussed) 2
Among the points that can be discussed by
students are:
• Span of control. 2
• Degree of centralisation.
• Whether empowerment is an option.
• Other logical and well-explained answers are
acceptable.
(S1) Subtotal for Question 1 8
Grading A: 8 – 6 B: 5.5 – 5 C: 4.5 – 4 D: 3.5 – 3 F: 2.5 – 0
(S2) Question 2
State whether organic or mechanistic structure is 1
more appropriate for Indigo Enterprise.
Good justification on the proposed structure(s). 3
(S2) Subtotal for Question 2 4
Grading A: 4 – 3 B: 2.5 C: 2 D: 1.5 F: 1 – 0
An implication you can draw from knowing such a sample marking scheme is that
you need to ensure that your assignment or your examination script is well-edited
before submission. You must check to see that you have covered all the relevant
points and also details such as spelling and punctuation that can be awarded marks
for English language papers. Ensure that your answer script is neat as untidy work
will not give a good impression to the examiner. It may also irritate the examiners
because they will have to spend time deciphering what you have written.
involved in your own assessment will motivate you to work towards improving
your learning.
1. Self-assessment
As the term implies, self-assessment means you assess yourself. Here you assess
your own work and be your own judge on how well you have performed
based on a set of assessment criteria. Self-assessment is not so much about
awarding your own grades, but more about identifying your own strengths
and weaknesses, and areas you still have not fully understood.
2. Peer-assessment
Here is an assessment sheet for assessing an essay you can use for peer and
self-assessment:
Marks Marks
Criteria for content
allocated awarded
Title (1 mark)
• Award 1 mark for an appropriate title that is 1
grammatically correct.
• Award ½ mark for an inappropriate title/
grammatically incorrect.
Introduction (3 marks)
Opening sentence/Hook: 1
• Award 1 mark for the hook.
(Identify the hook used: _________________)
General/Background information: 1
• Award 1 mark for sufficient general/
background information.
• Award ½ mark for vague general/background
information.
Thesis statement: 1
• Award 1 mark for a clear and appropriate
thesis statement.
• Award ½ mark for a vague thesis statement.
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Coherence: 1
• Award 1 mark for coherence (the consistent
use of key nouns, pronouns).
Deduct ½ mark for inconsistency in the use of
pronouns (E.g., We in one sentence, and you in
another sentence).
• Award 1 mark for the use of connectors. 1
(Connectors used: ______________________)
Body paragraph 2 (6 marks)
Topic sentence: 1
• Award 1 mark for a topic sentence with a
controlling idea.
• Award ½ mark for a topic sentence without a
clear controlling idea.
• 0 mark for a topic sentence not related to the
thesis statement.
Coherence: 1
• Award 1 mark for coherence (the consistent
use of key nouns, pronouns).
Deduct ½ mark for inconsistency in the use of
pronouns (E.g., We in one sentence, and you in
another sentence).
• Award 1 mark for the use of connectors. 1
(Connectors used: ______________________)
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Coherence: 1
• Award 1 mark for coherence (the consistent
use of key nouns, pronouns).
Deduct ½ mark for inconsistency in the use of
pronouns (E.g., We in one sentence, and you in
another sentence).
• Award 1 mark for the use of connectors. 1
(Connectors used: ______________________)
Conclusion (3 marks)
Restatement: 1
• Award 1 mark for the statement that
rephrases the thesis statement.
• Award ½ mark for a vague restatement.
Summary: 1
• Award 1 mark for a general summary of the
information provided in the body paragraphs.
Closing statement: 1
• Award 1 mark for the closing statement
(Type of closing statement: _______________)
Total (25 marks) 25
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Marks Marks
Criteria for in-text citation and references
allocated awarded
In-text citation
• Award ½ mark for each correct Author- 2
Date. Award a maximum of 2 marks for four
citations.
• Award ½ mark for grammatically sentence 2
introducing the cited information. Award a
maximum of 2 marks for four citations.
Reference List
• Award ½ mark for a correctly formatted entry. 2
Award a maximum of 2 marks for four entries.
• Deduct ½ mark for entries not arranged in
alphabetical order.
• Deduct ½ mark for not indenting the second
line of the entry. Example:
Gladwell, Malcolm. 2008. Outliers: The Story
of Success. New York: Little, Brown and
Company.
4
Marks Marks
Criteria for language
allocated awarded
The writing uses a wide range of vocabulary; 16 – 20
contains well-developed and coherent ideas.
Sentence structure is good with appropriate
use of expressions and minimal spelling and
grammatical errors.
The writing uses a fair range of vocabulary 11 – 15
with ideas satisfactorily developed. It contains
occasional faulty sentence structures and some
errors in spelling and grammar.
The writing attempts to communicate ideas 6 – 10
but is not always successful; contains ideas
and details which are inadequately developed;
contains inappropriate choice of words and
intrusive spelling and grammatical errors.
The writing is only understood after 1–5
much effort; has irrelevant ideas that are
difficult to follow; contains severe spelling
and grammatical errors; some ideas are
incomprehensible.
Do not be concerned if the total marks do not add up to 100%. The marks
allocated here are for the purpose of peer and self-assessment, and not an
evaluation of your overall writing ability. The assessment sheets are to raise
your awareness on aspects you need to pay attention to when assessing your
essay.
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You need to be aware that in this course, although 100 marks are awarded
for TMA 1, TMA 2, and the exam, the weightage or allocation of marks is
different for each of the three components when calculating the overall score:
Component Weightage
TMA 1 20%
TMA 2 30%
Exam 50%
Total 100%
Activity 5.12
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Summary
You also learnt about peer and self-assessment and the various criteria
you can go about assessing your essays and that of your peers.
Self-test 5.4
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Activity 5.12
Title
Introduction:
• Opening sentence/Hook:
• General/Background information:
• Thesis statement:
Body paragraphs:
• Topic sentences
• Supporting sentences
• Unity
• Coherence
Conclusion:
• Restatement
• Summary
• Closing statement
References:
• In-text citation
• Reference list
Language:
• Grammar
• Punctuation
• Sentence structure
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Introduction
In this final section, you will look at three general examination strategies to consider
when taking an examination. Applying these three examination strategies will help
you to be well-prepared for any examination. We will then end this course with some
advice on using all the principles that you have learnt for writing in examination
situations and during the preparation of assignments.
1. Time management
2. Emotional stability
3. Following instructions
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Time management
It is important to keep track of time when you do your examination or when you
do your assignments. This principle is especially relevant when you do essay type
questions as there may be a tendency for examination candidates to write without
any proper planning at all. Similarly, without proper time management, students
doing assignments may face deadline pressure. This may result in low quality work
when the students realise that the deadline for the submission of their assignment
is almost near. It may also result in writer’s block where the writer may not know
how to proceed with the writing process.
During the examination, when you first look through your question booklet, decide
on the time to be spent on each question. Ensure that you leave enough time to
answer the more difficult essay questions and those that are worth more marks.
Generally, the more marks that are allocated to a question, the more time you should
spend your time on it.
Similarly, think through your assignment question and plan out how much time
you should allocate for each part of your writing process. Do not forget to leave
some time for reviewing your answers. Doing this immediately after answering each
essay question as well as at the conclusion of the entire examination gives you one
last chance to correct careless mistakes or add additional information that you may
have initially left out of the response.
Activity 5.13
1. Which question should you spend more time on? Explain your
reason(s).
Emotional stability
Many students struggle with high levels of anxiety when taking tests. Anxiety can
interfere with your ability to do your best. The degree to which anxiety can interfere
with test performance varies from person to person. It is important to be calm when
you enter the examination hall. Being calm will help you to think and concentrate
better. You may wish to consider the following techniques to help you stay calm.
2. Take a good rest on the night before the examination. A sleepy and tired
mind will not be able to think well.
4. Prepare the necessary items you need at least one day ahead of the
examination. For instance, ensure you have enough pens and pencils to
bring along. Do also remember to have all the required documents with
you such as your student card, identification card (I.C.), examination slip
or card, etc. You will invite unnecessary stress if you realise on the day of
the examination that you have forgotten some items or realise that your
only pen has run out of ink.
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Following instructions
1. Read the instructions on the cover page of the question booklet. Preview the
entire paper in the first two minutes. This will help you check the marks
allocated to each question and help you prepare mentally for particularly
challenging questions. It also helps you to plan your time better. Note
especially the number of questions that you have to answer are there more
than one question that you have to answer? Is there any compulsory question?
Are there any choices given? If so, how many questions should one choose
and from which section should these questions be chosen?
2. Read all examination regulations carefully before you sit for your
examination.
3. Ensure that you remember the date and time of your examinations. If you
are required to be early in the examination room, be sure to manage your
time well so that you will be in the examination hall on time.
4. Print out all instructions for any assignment. Do not rely solely on your
memory as there is a tendency for one to forget minute details.
5. Remember to go through your final draft and ensure that your assignment
complies with the instructions given by your tutor for this module.
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Activity 5.14
Are these principles valid only for only university-level writing? Are they relevant
only for the sake of passing examinations? This is certainly not the case as what you
learn here has applications to situations in your life and workplace. We have looked
at some of these writing aspects for the workplace in Unit 3 and Unit 4.
Here are some situations where you can apply what you have learnt in this course.
1. Writing a report for your manager i.e., preparing the outline of your
report, selection of appropriate content, giving the appropriate amount of
content and examples in the report, drafting and re-drafting the report,
editing the final draft for submission to your manager.
5. Writing an article for a magazine i.e., writing the outline of the article,
researching for contents of the article, drafting and editing before submitting
the article to the editor for publication.
Activity 5.15
Consider another possible situation where you can apply what you
have learnt in this course to your everyday life. How much of what
you have learnt here do you think has helped you to write better
in the situation you are thinking of?
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Summary
Self-test 5.5
Consider the following situations and suggest one way that you
could take to overcome the problems that you face.
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2. You suddenly get a panic attack just as you enter the examination
hall. Suggest one way that you can take to keep yourself calm.
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3. You are given a handout with your assignment. Should you read
every instruction in the handout? Explain your reason(s).
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Feedback
Activity 5.13
Activity 5.15
Summary of Unit 5
Summary
Course Summary
Summary
Now that we are at the end of the course, let us summarise all that
we have covered in this course. In Unit 1, you learnt about the
writing process choosing a topic, generating ideas, planning,
writing the first draft, revising, editing, and proofreading. You
were also shown how to write the introduction, body, and
conclusion. Unit 2 introduced you to the various types of essays.
The types of essays discussed were persuasion, compare and
contrast, discussion, definition, problem solution, evaluation,
and cause and effect.
1. What do you think you should first do when you have an unstructured essay
question in your assignment?
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2. Which of the following would you do first when you open your question booklet
in the examination hall?
A. Read the essay topic and start planning the outline of the essay.
B. Read the instructions in the question booklet.
C. Start to relax through breathing techniques.
3. Is it necessary for you to know the marking criteria that your examiner is using
to mark essay questions in assignments and in examinations?
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4. Think through what you have learnt in this course. Are there potential problems
that you may face in examinations or for future writing assignments? What
steps would you take to overcome these problems?
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Self-test 5.1
Self-test 5.1
2. Keyword: Explain.
Self-test 5.3
1. No.
3. Format:
Layout:
Self-test 5.4
1. Content.
Self-test 5.5
3. Yes, you should read every instruction in the brief even though
you may know the instructions. It is always good to read the
instructions to be certain that the requirements of the assignment
have not changed.
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Feedback
2. B
(Note: It would be good for you to know what the criteria are.
Ask your tutor. You should aim to do well when you write your
text.)
References
Brannan, B (2003) A Writer’s Workshop Crafting Paragraphs, Building Essays,
Boston: McGraw-Hill.
Clouse, B F (1996)The Student Writer Editor and Critic, 6th edn, New York:
McGraw-Hill.
Humphrey, D and Conklin, R (2005) Connections Writing for the World, Ohio:
South-Western Educational Publishing.
Additonal references
http://core.ecu.edu/hist/zipfk/guidelines_for_grading_an_essay.htm
http://library.bcu.ac.uk/learner/Study%20Skills%20Guides/13%20Exam%20
techniques.htm
http://professionals.collegeboard.com/testing/sat-reasoning/scores/essay
http://www.boardofstudies.nsw.edu.au/syllabus_hsc/glossary_keywords.html
http://www.bris.ac.uk/esu/e-learning/support/tools/Self-and-peer-assessment/
http://www.dummies.com/how-to/content/defining-common-exam-instruction-
words.html
http://www.hsc.csu.edu.au/pdhpe/resources/2604/keywords.html
http://www.openpolytechnic.ac.nz/study-with-us/study-resources-for-students/
exams/tips-for-answering-exam-questions/
http://www.reading.ac.uk/engageinassessment/peer-and-self-assessment/eia-peer-
and-self-assessment-main.aspx
http://www.reading.ac.uk/internal/studyadvice/studyresources/exams/sta-
answering.aspx
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Glossary
Writer’s block A situation when the writer does not know
what to say next in an essay. According to
Humphrey and Conklin (2005), this can
happen at any stage of the writing process.
To avoid this psychological barrier, plan your
time well. Aim for a good product but do not
aim to be “absolutely perfect”. When you are
writing, steer clear of distractions such as the
television and the handphone. Avoid worries
and preoccupations.