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Šta je sažetak?
Kondenzovana verzija dužeg, napisanog
teksta koja:
• Osvetljava glavne tačke teksta
• Koncizno opisuje sadržaj i domet
• Piše se na početku rada (ispod naslova)
napisanog
• Pojavljuje se i samostalno – u
• Predstavlja sadržinu napisanog u skraćenoj sekundarnim publikacijama,
formi. akreditacijama.
Pretpostavka: sažetak treba da bude jasan,
koncizan i bez stranih reči.

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 Sažetak može biti :
• Nestruktuisan (napisan u jednom
pasusu)
• Struktuisan (napisan u više kratkih
pasusa)
• Za naučni članak: uvod, ciljevi,
materijal , metod, rezultati i
zaključci.
Gramatika i pravopis
Na stolu bi vam trebale biti bar neke od
sledećih knjiga:
• Srpski pravopis
• Rečnik srpskog jezika
• Rečnik stranih reči
Svrha sažetka
• Svrha sažetka je tačno i veoma jezgrovito
izražavanje svrhe i suštine sadržaja
saopštenja-rada, a ne tumačenje,
razjašnjavanje, ocenjivanje ili ubeđivanje.
• Osobine: skladnost, jezgrovitost,
informativnost, jasnoća i razumljivost
• Sastav i sadržaj sažetka su odredeni
sastavom i sadržajem izveštaja o
istraživanju ili saopštenju
• U pisanju sažetka koriste se ključni izrazi
iz izveštaja, a suštinski delovi sadržaja
sažeto se prepričavaju.
I ove napomene su važne
• Obično se piše u pasivu i 3. licu.
• Nekada ga treba pisati i na
engleskom jeziku.
• Obično ne sadrži reference i
fusnote.
• Izbegavati skraćenice.
Značenje zavisi i od položaja zareza!!!
• ”Danas koljemo drage mušterije.”
Mesar je svoje mušterije, kupce, hteo
obavestiti da danas kolje svinje i da će,
prema tome, biti svežeg mesa za mušterije.
Zaboravio je, međutim, nedužan zarez i
tako je svoje drage mušterije uplašio.
Važnost dobrog sažetka
• Cilj sažetak je da pruži čitataocu uvid u
bitne aspekte rada,postera ili
prezentacije.
• Čitataoci često odluče hoće li slušati
predavanje ili pročitati članak na temelju
sažetka.
• Dakle, da bi bili u mogućnosti napisati
dobar sažetak važano je imati i veštinu .
• Pisanje sažetaka je često izazov, jer je
obično ograničen na samo nekoliko
stotina reči.
• Uglavnom, sažetak pruža vrlo kratak
pregled glavnih delova rada : uvod,
metode ,rezultat, rasprava i zaključk.
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 Načini pisanja
Nač
Akademsko pisanje
Analiziramo, evaluiramo,
komentarišemo
Rečnik vezan uz područje
“Ja” ima ulogu posmatrača i
komentatora
Informacije dolaze od relevantnih
izvora pa se pozivaju na te izvore
Dokazi i argumenti
Pravila citiranja
SAŽETAK ZA ISTRAŽIVAČKI
RAD
• • Sažetak je kratko poglavlje (većina
časopisa definiše njegovu dužinu,
ograničavajući je na 250 reči ili
manje).
• • Sažetak treba biti koncizan prikaz
rada koji u glavnim crtama govori o
tome šta se istraživalo i šta se dobilo.
• • Sažetak sumira glavne elemente
rada: svrhu zašto je istraživanje
rađeno, metode koje su korištene,
glavne rezultate koji su dobijeni i
zaključke koji iz rezultata proizilaze.
SAŽETAK
• • Dobar sažetak mora činiti celinu
koja stoji sama za sebe i koja je
čitaocu razumljiva bez uvida u celi
rad.
• • Sažetak je važan iz istih razloga
zbog kojih je važan naslov rada, jer
je sažetak, pored naslova, ono što
korisnici prvo pogledaju kada
pregledaju literaturu.
Drugi oblici pisanja
Pričamo priču
Rečnik vezan uz područje
“Ja” je u centru
Informacije dolaze iz vlastitog
iskustva
Lična gledišta i stavovi
Pravila citiranja
• Nakon jedne ili dve rečenice uvoda, treba jasno i
eksplicitno navesti svrhu istraživanja ili iskustva.
• To se može učiniti na različite načine, npr., “Svrha rada
bila je ...", "Ova studija pokušava odgovoriti na sledeća
pitanja i testirati hipotezu", "Ova studija usmerena je na
..." “Za bolje razumevanje mehanizama ... "ili" Cilj ovog
istraživanja bio je ... ".
• Nakon izjava o svrsi, opšti pristup treba biti opisan ako je
moguće u nekoliko rečenica.
• Ne objašnjavati kako nego šta .
• Sažetak treba zaključiti sa nekoliko rečenica u kojima
značenje i rezultate nalaza ,ili saopštenja su ukratko
navedeni u predhodnim delovima sažetka.
SAVET
• • Jedan od dobrih pristupa u
pisanju sažetka je taj da se
na jedan papir izvuku sve Pisanje je težak posao
važne tačke koje donosi
svako poglavlje.
• • Od tako izvučenih
rečenica može se složiti
dobar sažetak.
• • Sažetak je najbolje
napisati na kraju kada je rad
dovršen.
KLJUČNE REČI
• • Veliki broj naučnih časopisa traži da se
iza sažetka navede nekoliko najvažnijih
reči koje se odnose na rad (ključne reči).
• • Ključne reči ulaze u različite indekse i
pretraživače literature i olakšavaju traženje
potrebne literature.
• • Kod izbora ključnih reči potrebno je
redosled navoda usmeriti od širih pojmova
prema užim.
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Funkcija sažetaka na konferenciji na
kojoj se prijavljuje sažetak
• Pokaži da imaš
vredan doprinos u
struci
• Napravi “mamac” za
publiku za svoj rad
• Potencijalni
saradnici, recenzenti
• Budući
mentori...........
PONEKAD JE POTREBNO NAPISATI
I REFERENCE-LITERATURA
• Citiranje literature predstavlja
standardizovan metod prikazivanja izvora
informacija i ideja koje se koriste u pisanju
rada, i to na jedinstveni način koji
identifikuje njihove izvore.
Literatura-
Literatura-primer
• Vankuverski sistem -knjiga:
• 1. Butler SW. Secrets from the Black Bag.
London: The Royal College of General
Practitioners; 2005.
• 2. Cheers B, Darracott R, Lonne B. Social care
practice in rural communities. Sydney: The
Federation Press; 2007.
• 3. Hofmeyr GJ, Neilson JP, Alfirevic Z, Crowther
CA, Gulmezoglu AM, Hodnett ED et al. A
Cochrane pocketbook: Pregnancy and childbirth.
Chichester, West Sussex, England: John Wiley &
Sons Ltd; 2008.
AUTORI
• Puno ime i prezime svih autora
• Brojem u superskriptu uz prezime
označava se kojoj ustanovi/odelenju
autor pripada (e.g., Snežana Novaković1)
• Puni naziv odelenja i ustanove, grad i
država (e.g., 1Health Center
“Vračar”,Belgrad,Serbija, ili 1 Dom zdravlja
“Vračar”,Beograd, Srbija
POSTOJI PUNO NAČINA NAVOĐENJA
LITERATURE, MI ĆEMO NAVESI DVA:
Vankuverski način
Harvardski način
Literatura-
Literatura-primer
• Harvardski sistem-knjiga:
• Berkman, RI 1994,any subject, HarperPerennial,
New York.
• Cengel, YA & Boles, MA 1994,
Thermodynamics: an engineering approach, 2nd
edn, McGraw Hill, London.
• Reid, DH, Parsons, MB & Green, CW 1989, Staff
management in human services: behavioral
research and application, Charles C. Thomas,
Springfield.
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 “Poziv za sažetak” upućuju
Važne napomene za organizatora i organizatori konferencije radi
angažovanja prezentera na
učesnika konferencije konferenciji.
Prihvaćeni sažetak i prezentovanje
prikazuje se kao važna stavka u
vašem CV a i u broju bodova !

Prihvaćeni sažeci
ponekad (ali ne uvek) se
publikuju od strane
organizatora

Odgovor na “Poziv za sažetak”

Ključne tačke: Potražiti kriterijume:
• Ko je objavio poziv?
• Da li imaju propisani obrasci?
• Gde/kada će da bude održana • Koji identifikacioni podaci se traže?
konferencija?
• Na koliko reči je ograničenje?
• Koja vrsta sažetka se traži? • Da li je dozvoljena prethodno saopštena
prezentacija?
• Da li stvarno mogu da idem na
• Da li je članstvo kod organizatora obavezno?
konferenciju?
• Da li postoji još elemenata koji su obavezni?
• Da li će takvo iskustvo biti korisno za
mene?
• Da li da pišem taj rad sam, ili kao
koautor?

Kriterijumi za prihvatanje
Važne informacije
Organizatori bi trebalo da imaju jasan kriterijum za
prihvatanjje sažetka: Instrukcije za prijavu,prvo obaveštenje :
Naprimer :Idite na www.suzr.org.rs.....
Krajnji rok
A radovi će biti rangirani i prihvaćeni prema sledećem: Krajnji rok za prijavu je uvek naznačen, na sajtu i
•Jasnoća napisanog prvom pismu
Podobnost
•Aktuelnost
Postoje kriterijumi kojih se mora pridržavati
•Primenjivost Prethodno objavljivanje
•Globalni značaj Organizator određuje da li prihvata već
•Izvodljivost (Samo za radionice po grupama) prezentovane radove ili ne

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Cremmins, E.T. (1982). The art of abstracting.

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Day, R. A. (1995). How to Write & Publish a
Scientific Paper. Cambridge: Cambridge U. Press,
pp. 29-32.
The Writers' Workshop,(2001). Writing abstracts.
University of Illinois, Urbana-Champaign.
Proulx, A. (1993). The Shipping News. NY: Scribner

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