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Sample Counterarg Paragraph - Annotated
Sample Counterarg Paragraph - Annotated
Thesis: Although standardized tests are costly and rigorous, the Common Core State Standards
should be implemented because they do not inhibit teachers’ creativity, they present a reasonable
progression for students through the grade levels, and equip students with necessary skills for
college, career, and life.
Counterarg ¶: With Common Core comes a new set of standardized tests aligned to the
standards, which are always a source of contention. Diane Ravitch, a professor of education at
New York University, condemns the new standards due to the high cost of the tests and the
emotional toll on students. Ravitch’s New York Times article “The Common Core Costs Billions
and Hurts Students” notes that implementing the CCSS is an expensive process. According to
Ravitch, “states and school districts have spent billions of dollars to phase in the standards…and
to buy the technology needed to administer them online.” Adapting to the technology required
for administering the assessments is an arduous task, and Ravitch does not believe it is worth the
immense cost, especially to student morale. In reference to the increased difficultly of Common
Core’s tests from previous ones, Ravitch states that a harder test “predictably depresses test
scores, creating a sense of failure and hopelessness.” Ultimately, Common Core could be costly
to school budgets and student morale. While these arguments seem plausible at first, Ravitch’s
proposed problems are solvable. For instance, the Public Policy Institute of California found that
“California’s old standards are pretty similar to the [CCSS],” which would logistically require
less transition than Ravitch suggests (“Implementing”). Additionally, the relationships between
harder tests, depressed scores, and sense of failure and hopelessness are not permanent or
irreversible. Students need time to adjust to the new tests, and the increased difficulty better
prepares them for a world in which college-acceptance rates and job markets are growing more
competitive. While Ravitch’s points are understandable, Common Core’s benefits outweigh her
counterarguments.