Immigration

Paragraph 1:

Hook: An immigration process is often needed in order to help a country to recover

from a serious issue.

Thesis statement: Immigration becomes an actual option when a country is going

through difficult times: political, economic or humanitarian difficulties.

Paragraph 2:

Topic sentence: Economic problems lead to people to immigrate

Supporting detail: Some country’s economy can result problematic; people can’t pay for
basic needs like food or rent. The money they receive as a compensation for their work
is not enough.

Supporting detail: The prices are too high that even though the salary is enough to pay
for rent and food; other things like a car or buying a house are not possible.

Supporting detail: People see an opportunity in other country to work almost the same
but earn more money, so they can afford many things they could not otherwise.

Paragraph 3:

Topic sentence: People see immigration as an opportunity to have a better future for
their family.

Supporting detail: The fact of moving to another country is a good chance to meet other
people, learn another language in most cases and find out about other culture.

Supporting detail: The education and health services are often free or at least better than
their home country.

Supporting detail: Sometimes people immigrate because of the country safety situation
and just look for a place without political problems.

Paragraph 4:

Topic sentence: Migrants act like a new working class that is willing to do the work that
is left behind or is too complicated to get done.

Supporting detail: This working class can help to develop the economy of a country.

Supporting detail: Migrants work in things that natives do not want to but are still
necessary.

Supporting detail: These unwanted jobs are still part of a country development
economy.
Paragraph 5:

Restate thesis: Migrants try to run from difficult times that their home countries are
going through and in the meantime they help to make dynamic the economy from
another country.

Final comment: Immigration can be seen as an opportunity to many people going

through rough times and in some way it helps the host country’s economy.