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‘Pachshyaachi Kaani’
[08-01-2015]
Story , Screenplay, Concept & Dialogues: Samarth Borkar

Characters:

Pachso
Kali
Muthu
..and five others (extra)

Location: 1. Where stone sculptors have their zopdis

2. Mapusa Zatrotsav for ambience if possible

Property: 5 feet Thermocoal black standing idol (Must)

Scene:1 Day: Afternoon Light: Sunny Location: Outside

[‘Pachso’ navaacho manis ek pashyanaache shilp ghadayta. Aangan savlo, kidkidit, daadyekhuta vaadlya.
Aangant tran naa. Kadta bavdo aaple dis. Fatlyan aamka dista, tachi garkann, ‘Kali’ dispatto vavar karta.
Kapde dulle vaalaita, sukat galta, kadek tancho saan bhurgo, don mhainyancho, zaadaachya sadinyaant
palnyant nidla…adimadi ti thai vachun takai palaita.]

Kali:
Aaij meren tuve faqt dev korle. Bare bare dev kele. Teen futanche, chaar futanche… devaan re pachshya
tuje kite bare kele? Dev kenna disla re tuka hya faatranbhitar? Mhaka kennach dislona!

Pachso:
PashaanKali, tashe mhanu nhaka. Devan aamche vait tari kite kela? Mhaka hya bhurgyabhitar devach tar
dista.

Kali:
Pun, ashya hya disnyan potachyo khalgyo bharna.

Pachso:
Mhaka devacher bhavart aasa.

Kali:
Kaltale ek dis!

[Parat doganchoy vavar suru. Kali bhurgyak dudak dharla Te zaadakhala basla, matshe out of focus.
Bhurge radata.]

Kali:
Mhajyach potak kaai naa, jalyaar hachya potak tari kite sapadtale.

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[Ek white gaadi, with black tinted glass, thai yeta. Driver yevan dhaar ugadta. Ek manis devta. White
shirt, white pant, white sandals. Haatan teen unchi mobile anni tondant cigar. Galyaan bhangar.]

Kali:
Girayak aailashe dista. Deva tu paav.

[‘Muthu’ tanchesari yeta. Pachso, pant fafdun ubo ravta. Haat zodun namaskar karta. Muthuchi
personality prabhavi zaupak zaai. Muthuchi vaayat nazar kalicher padta. Calculated moves.]

Muthu:
Koriv kaam bare karta tu…

[Kali aaplyacho padar sarko karta. ]

Pachso:
Saib, kasli mhurti karpak zaai? Kaai mantryacho putlo…kasley kaam gheta hanv.

Muthu:
Dista, kamacho manis tu! Tujekade aasa te konakaden na…hastkaushyalya! Khub garmi marta hanga.
Taloy sukta.

Pachso:
Kali, maatantale tand udak haad. Basa...

Muthu:
Muthu…Muthu naav mhaje. Sarkari, binsarkari kama gheta. Middle agent. Dhar hangay na…dhar…

[Kali udak ghevan yeta. Muthu, udak ghetana, haluvar tichya hatank sparsh karta, kaknaacho awaz jata. Ti
kadek vata. Tondar padar gheta. Muthu, tika palait pita]

Muthu:
Kali…

Kali:
Pashyankali!

Muthu:
Udak avadle. Taan matshi bhagali…

Pachso:
Aanik, haad go, saib…quality udak.

Muthu:
A1 quality! Kamache ulovya! Mhaka ek ubi murt zhai aasli. Kitle padtale?

Pachso:
Teen foot 25,000/-, chaar foot 35,000/-

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Muthu:
Aani paach foot dha inch?

[Muthuchi nazar parat parat kalicher. Kalik vailyan sakal paleta. Ti lakshya dina.]

Pachso:
Paach foot dha inch? Haanve kenna karunk naa…pashaan sodhche padtale.

Muthu:
Tumka pashyananchi kasli kami? Ghe mhun melta. Paach foot dha inch…rate aajun sangunk naa!

Pachso:
Panchavan - saatt hazar zatle.

Muthu:
Avois. Vaklevangda tu lagnachoy kharch sangta mare, Pachshya..Kite Pashyaankali?

Pachso:
Haanv samjunk naa.

Muthu:
Vevhari bashya ti! Tika samjali aastali. Betech pannas saat saangta. Tumka kharch to kite? Fatar, hatodi
aanni chinni….Toc, Toc, Toc….

Pachso:
Kashtache kaam saiba.

Muthu:
Tu dev karta…devan sanglaa te khabar na? Kasht kar …phalachi aashya sod… He ghe 5ooo/- advance. Ho
ghe structure kagdacher kaadun hadla.. ashich kar..mhurt…

[Muthu vachpak valta]

Pachso:
Saib, itlyan zaavche naa. Pashanachech satra atra hazar zata. Pashan mharag.

Muthu:
Made in china kar…savaibhitar…faqt, size sambal…mhaje naa tar bill adaktale…

Pachso:
Saib….

[Pacsho fatlyan gharkannik palaita, ti khunnen naa mhanta.]

Muthu:
Ghe…aanik paach hazaar davar…urlele magir kaam zatakach dita.

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Pachso:
Saib…saade phashan upkarta?… chad udak maat lagpak upkarna... Chir vaitali.

Muthu:
Chaltaa re…tension ghev naka. He ghe paacshi…bhurgyak khaopak ghe!

Pachso:
Saaib..to don mhainyancho! To kite khatlo?…aasu naka…

Muthu:
Tuka saglech utrani sangpak zai? Kena kenna utra fatli bhavna samjupak kalpak zaai. Aare saiba,
tujekaden aasa te mhajekaden legit na…..davar….laxmik naa mhanpak zaina…aani hya Muthuk tar
kennach ‘Naa’ aaikun gheupachi savay naa….

[Muthu tasoch gadyekade vata. Gadyent basta. Fatlo harso sakal devaita. Madak nazren kalik niyalta.
Harso vayar kadtana gaadi sutta. Fatlyan matyecho favvaro. Ho ‘dhull’ zenna settle zaata tenaa amka dista
ki, 5000/- don bundala Kalichya hatan aasa tar, ti ek ‘Pacshyachi Note’ pacshyachya haatan lombkalta!

Scene :2 Location: Continued Time: Freeze time all around the clock

[Amka dista aata ki Pacsho, kasht karta….halu halu kaai disani mhurt swarup gheta. Hya khinnani, Kalicho
aani pacshyachi aapulkayeche kaai khin chitrit karpache. Rangbhusha aani veshbhushecher lakshya diupak
zaai. Kaal khub mahatvacho. Mhurt kartana khub dis gelyat he pratyaksh dispak zaai.]

Scene:3 Location: Mapusa…near zatra, where there is one such family Time: early morning

[Kadek aamka dista ki mhurt ready zalyaa. Themocoal chi mhurt karchi padtali. Zaka kalo poster color
maarcho padtalo. Oil paint will spoil thermocol.]

Kali:
Gharant kaich gotto naa…annacho kann legit naa.

Pachso:
Hanvach udaar aasa. Te 10000/- kenach sople. To Muthu ghevan yeta mhantalo paishe… tachoy patto
naa… ek 20000/- mhurt vartana dilyar puro!

Kali:
Hyach tumchya saadepanaacho lok faydo ghetat. 20000/- sanglyar to tuje haatir faqt 10,000/- davartlo.
Tumi taka 30000/- sangaat. Punn aata khaopache tari kite?

Pachso:
Hi pacshyaachi note titli aasa! Hi moduya.

Kali:

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Kaslya kaamache te paishe?

Pachso:
Teka maagir parat dusri note divaya!

Kali:
Pachshya….tuka dist khabar aasa ki kasle aashen taane hi tuka paachshyachi note tekailya… aami garib
aasu….pun manaan aami shrimant aasa…aamche sarvasv ghaan davrpak aami itli nalayak ani tu itlo bekaar
zaunk na…hanv jite aastana tari hee paali tujer yevchi naa.

Pachso:
Sagli savanga baadyaan hadpak melta….paishyanche nai.

Kali:
Hya…pachshi rupyanche anna mhajya potant jirpache sod...tondakade legit vachpache naa… Kaso maagir
gilu hya pachshi rupyancho annache kann?

Pachso:
Amche bare aasa… pun bhurgyache kite?

Kali:
Pitlo udak! … Amchoch to!

[Kali dolyantli duka pusta. Pascho faqt te notik niyalta. Ti note palait urta…background bhurge radta]

Scene:4 Location: Mapusa…near zatra, where there is one such family Time: evening

[Pacsho aaij bekar aasa kaich kaam naa. Background ti mhurt titli dista.Muthuchi gaadi yeta. Pacsho
gadyekade vata. Gadyetlyan paach zaan devta. Mhurtesari vata. Mhurtek haat galta. Cinematographeran
haanga zatrecho ambience capture karpak zaai.]

Pachso:
Khai varta?

Ekto:
Order aasa.

Pachso:
Punn ajun paishe pavonk naa.

Dusro:
Paishe khai vata…maagir meltale.

Kali:
Paishe dilyashivay mhurt halovank melchi naa.

Tisro:
Amche kaam faqt murti varpache.

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[Pascho vachun mhurtek veng marta. Te sarshi te ghat mhut aashile bouncers tya bavdyak kadun kadek
dhukalta…kali tachya adharak yeta…kaljak pill galpacho kshan chitrit zaopak zaai. Sadaran don teen minta
hajer kaam zaonk zaai. Balzabri karun te mhurta gadyent gaalta aani matyecho ‘dhull’ karun ghadi sutta.
Shunnya nazren, pacsho tya dhullakade palaita. Gaadi gelli aasta. Dhull settle zaata. Tenna taichyan
sadcho white get up karun Muthu ubo ravla to dista. Tondatle cigar to payamulak galta aani chalat hya
dogaysari yeta. Emotionak uttav yevchekhatir, kalichya hatan bhurge dakhovache.]

Muthu:
Kite zaale?

Pachso:
Saiiba….saiba

[Pacsho tache payakade gidgidta.]

Muthu:
Mahje kapde ghaan zatle.

Pachso:
Saiba..potant annacho kann naa…kite khatlo zalyar garaant paishe naa…

[Muthu, kadun ek paschyachi note dakhaita]

Muthu:
Ghe…Kami aasa? Ghe aani ek pachshyachi note. Aare, aanik zaai…ghe…aani ek pachshyachi note…Ekda ji
vast mhaka avadli mhantakach…ti kashi meloupachi he hanv dist zaana..

Pachso:
Saiba…he kasle paishe

Muthu:
Kasle mhanje? Gaandhik valkhana?

Pachso:
Kashtachyaa kamacho Gandhi hatant ghelyar pandra dis zaale….mhaka mhajya murtiche paishe farik kar.

Muthu:
Tu kite mhurti…mhurti ghevan basla…tuje mhurtichi tai kennach pran-pratishtapana zalya…aata ti mhurti
tuka suddha aaplya mukhar ubi karchi naa!

Pachso:
Mhaka mhaje pashan parte kar.

Muthu:
Mhaka tuje Pashyaan di!
Pachso:
Saibaa…tond sambalun ulay…

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Muthu:
Te disa paacshi rupyaa tekayalle te khale? Aani aata mhaka tond sambhalun ulovank laita…

[Te sarshi ti crumbled 500 rupee note kadun Pachsho , Muthuchya payakade udaita. Fatlyan Muthuchi
gaadi parat yevan ravlya. Driver yevan fuddle aani faatle, donuy daara ugadta aani bhair vata.]

Pachso:
Mhaka mhaje kashtache paishe di.

Muthu:
Haanv hanga gajaali marunk yevank naa. Ek pashaan pavaile…aata hanv dusri ‘pashaan kali’ varpak aaila!
kali,…ho adaani…haaka kaich samjana…pun tu dist zaana...gadyechi daara ugdi aasa..chal bas. Bare
bhashen aaiklyar sagle bare zaatle…forsaar kadun kaam karpak arth na!

Pachso:
Tuka mattuy manispann naa?

Muthu:
Manispanachyo gajaali bhikaaryaa tu mhaka shikayta…

Pachso:
Devachi tari bhiraant davar.

Muthu:
Dev! Hya sharantle chadshe devaanchyo murti karpachi contractaa hanvech tar ghetlya. Hee ji mhurt tuve
kelli ti hanve committee kadlyan eka lakhache contractacher ghetilli…aani tich tujekadlyan hanve dha
hazaarank ubarli!! Saglya murtincher sakal baraille aastale ‘Murtikar Muthu Sammy’.

Pachso:
Ek fatar ekdach devlant vataa aani dev zaata….tumi manis…hazaar khepo devlan vachun legit
tumchebhitar manispann yena…Manispannamukhar he faathar parvadle…

[Muthu, Pachshyache bailek , Kalik haatak ghat dharun gaadyesari odpak lagtaa…pratikaar kartlya
Pacshyak fot maarun zamnir udaita. Hatak ghat dharun to tika baljabren gadyekade varta. Kaknaa
phutaa..paayaponda padta..Tennach fatlyansaan ek ‘pashaan’ ghevan pachsho kadun Muthuchya takler
galta. Muthuchi takli Futta. Ragtache vall vavta. Muthu Kosalta…marta…Kadek to kalo pashan ubo
padla…taajer ragat shimpadla…janu Pinjar Devak Lailya. Kali, tya pashanak palevan, namaskar karta]

Kali:
Aaij mhaka kharo dev pavlo …prasann zaalo..Pacshya, tujo dev aasa hya sanvasarant, aani aaij mhaka to
hya fatrachya rupant dislo…Paashyan tech ektyacho dev kelo…dusryacho dev zaalo!
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