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Name : Suma Anio Lui Alamsyah

NIM : 2201789454
Class : LA55

Take a look at the story below and find out the mistakes.
One hot summer day in an open field, there was a moose named Sam. Sam is a one tough
moose that don’t like to surrender. He always did everything he can to achieve his goals. That
evening, Sam was exploring the field in search for food. While Sam was searching for food,
another moose named Mas showed up. Mas was once a top moose during the great forest war in
the 19th century. He was a really selfish moose, but now as it aged it became wiser. Mas was also
in search for food to eat in the fields.
While searching for some food, Sam came across a delicious-looked red apple on the
ground, just at the edge of its vision. Mas also happens to notice the apple on the ground, and
quickly charging towards the apple. Sam then noticed Mas’ presence and doesn’t want to let Mas
get the apple. Sam then also started to charge towards the apple at full speed. They both charge
towards each other. As they charged, they noticed that they were about to collide with each other.
Sam abruptly tried to stop his run and so does Mas.
Correction :
Opent : Open
An : A
Sellfish : Selfish
Charges : Charge

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