It is often considered that because of increasing of the obese people, the health care system has

been affected, it is now becoming more stress, some people think the way to settle this issue is to
have sessions in the school curriculum,. I completely agree with this solution to do more practice
which students can be fit all the time and maintain their bodies.

Firstly, however, the obesity and fatness is are a big problems, but can also be solved by doing
exercises in the school at least twice a week, it will help the students to be always slim. Also, it can
preserve them from any diseases such as diabetes. In Europe, most of the children have been
learned how to follow up a balanced diet to be constantly in a good health, they usually practice
sports every day, that is why most of them are in a good shape.

Secondly, one of the factors to keep the weight in a reasonable shape is the society where we live,
we can be affected with the persons around us such as our parents, friends and teachers. Our weight
should be reduced in order to protect ourselves from any illness. Fast food also is considered as one
of the reasons of gaining weight, most of people used to have a junk food, they have to give up and
kick the habit to avoid being fat.

In conclusion, following up a balanced diet can help people to be always in a good shape and
avoiding gaining weight will protect them from diseases as well.

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Correction

TR= 6.5
C&C=6
LR=6
GR=6

Overall=6