William Oktavec

ENGL 393

Peer Review

 How well is this task divided up? Where can your peer further partition up the task?

Overall the tasks were appropriately partitioned. I would suggest that you make use of
font size or bullets when explaining subtopics. (second step)

 What’s the best feature or trait of this draft?

The best trait of this draft is the tone and personability. It makes the reader feel
comfortable and truly feels like you want the reader to be able to complete the task.

 At what point did you get confused? Why?

I never found myself confused except for the fact that it feels incomplete, which it
probably is.

 What would you add to these instructions?

I think these set of instructions would benefit from a format change, making it less like
an essay. Also continue adding steps to give the task more substance and make sure to
keep the same helpful tone.

 What would you add to these instructions?

The instructions still require a resources/tools section as well as some visuals. Keep in
mind formatting when you do add visuals, tips, and definitions. Overall just add more
information.