5/24/2019 Reflection - Google Docs

Barahona 1

Emrek Barahona

Professor Batty

English 101

29 May 2019

Reflection

This essay is about time management problems with student-athletes. I choose this topic

becuase I wanted to focus on how much student-athletes have risked making time easier for them

in class and outside the field. My original essay has comments about some of the problems I

have which were incorrect spelling, improper grammar, and off topic subject on the body

paragraphs. This time I have revised my essay with some help to check on my essay and reread it

to find what are the most necessary parts I need to tell the reader. Then I started editing my essay

to find the incorrect spelling and grammar. What I also did is making my essay a little bit short

for the reader becuase there are some paragraphs that weren’t necessary information that doesn’t

need to know. My problems with this essay that I tend to put too much information for the reader

but without thinking about what the reader needs to know about my argumentative essay. I

correctly rearrange my citations in order as well as making the MLA format look properly

corrected for this essay becuase essay requires to be professionally well done in MLA format.

Lastly, I made more paragraphs for each idea to prove my points about the argumentative essay

including keeping separating each body paragraph to be sure each of them has a good idea.

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