Karina,

You have some interesting information about ASD. It is worth noting, however, that the Autism

community has begun phasing out the diagnosis of Asperger’s and including those who were

previously labeled on the Autism Spectrum. The introduction doesn’t have a thesis statement but

research evidence; try to use the research evidence to make your own overall assertion about this

population of students and consider how these students can succeed academically. An important

part of this assignment was suggesting a single, specific possible solution to the issue. Try to go

more in depth in your body paragraphs about why the evidence you use is relevant. Also, the essay,

when properly formatted does not meet the minimum three full page standard. Proof read for

grammar issues. Reformat to MLA standards. Overall, good start!