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that I proceeded to look for and fix any grammatical errors which were quite a bit. After I did
that I moved on to my quotes, I changed one of them and just tried explaining why I chose the
quotes that I did. I also added a little bit of context like, why this quote is relevant or what
experiences has this person had for me to be putting there quote in this essay. After this I looked
to add more information due to my essay being about a page short. I did some more research and
added a good variety to all of my paragraphs so it’s not one towering the others. I tried adding
information that was relevant with the quotes I have so that I can get it to flow a little better and
more smoothly. I than went on to my paragraph that was arguing against me and made some
small edits to make it a bit stronger so when I explained my side again it would be more
agreeable to anyone arguing against it. I also explained a bit more to make it more clear. Finally I
went on to the conclusion. I cleaned it up a bit to make the repeat of the thesis seem better and
just fixed any issues I saw with it. Finally I did one last recheck over everything like grammar
and spelling.