Tittle: Married By Accident : isn’t like a romance movie (bisa diganti sesuai hati)

Topic Sentence:
 simple definition of Married by accident

Supporting ideas :
1. There is several causes of M.B.A. from the inside and also the outside
2. inside causes like ignorance of sex education, he/she is not ready for the adult things
3. outside causes like the environtment (Places and the society)

Conclusion/restatement :
 we can avoid M.B.A, by knowing the causes

paragraph:
Nowdays, society have a lot of trouble, From poverty, ignorance, and much more troubles, but
there is one problem that maybe occurred to many people in our beloved country and that is “Married By
Accident”, married by accident or M.B.A is a situation that happened to a couple of person that forced to
marrie, like early pregnant, can’t pay of loan, forced by our parent, but for generally there is two main
causes of why M.B.A happened, from the inside of person like ignorance of sex education, and outside
causes like where he/she lived, their society (like normally age of person to marrie at the certain area).

Topic Sentence:
 Why it is important to know about sex education

Supporting ideas :
1. Sex education isn’t taboo for some reason
2. When the right time to start sex education
3. How to start to tell about sex education

Conclusion/restatement :
 After know about sex education, there is one factor that can be eliminated from M.B.A and that
is “inside” causes

paragraph:
one of the reason why M.B.A can be happend is ignorance of sex education, commonly at Asia’s
country, “sex” is a taboo word, that forbidden to know, although it only spoken by teenager, most of
parent would say “keep your word youngman/lady”, and it doesn’t stop teen for actually, quite the
opposite, they as teenager will search about it more and more, and after that the worst things happened,
lost of their own way. As a parent, they have responsibility to tell and guide about sex, but when the right
time to start telling about sex education ?, Quoted from “Pentingnya ‘sex education’ bagi remaja” by
Diana Septi Purnama, M.Pd, she said that the best time to give sex education is at 13 years old, right when
they have a big curiosity and finding their own identity, they will know about how precious their genetical
part, about their full privacy area, and the responsibility for that part of body, most of senior high school
do sex education by telling about reproduction as a part of class of biology, and parent take the main part
of sex education by tell them that privacy area is the most important part of their body, and there is no
person that can see them (nude) except people who are permitted, such as their husbands or wives.
(http://staff.uny.ac.id/sites/default/files/pengabdian/diana-septi-purnama-mpd/sex-education-high-
school.pdf)
Topic Sentence:
 Society and environment also take a part of why M.B.A happend

Supporting ideas :

1. Family as the first guard of their environment

Conclusion/restatement :
 As the first layer of guard, family should know about how to protect their own member.

paragraph:
link : https://ejournal.undip.ac.id/index.php/psikologi/article/view/2887,
https://media.neliti.com/media/publications/114008-ID-peran-lingkungan-keluarga-terhadap-perke.pdf