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Niaylah Mascall
Mrs. Pettay
ENG 112
10 March 2019
Zora Neale Hurston once expressed, “Love makes your soul crawl out from its hiding
place.” In Their Eyes Were Watching God, Zora Neale Hurston sets up the story in the early
1900s. She tells the story of a young woman named Janie, who is yearning to find true love
amidst her grandmother’s desires for her and the pressure of society. An important topic that
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Hurston focuses on throughout the book is love. In Their Eyes Were Watching God, Z
The heart of the innocent tends to wander into paths that can challenge a woman’s
patience. Hurston uses Janie’s first marriage to show readers the immaturity and innocence that
seventeen-year-old Janie possesses. What Janie doesn't realize is that her Grandmother wants her
to be secured. Janie says, “Nanny. Please don’t make me marry Mr. Killicks.” And her
Grandmother responds with, “T’aint Logan killicks Ah wants you to have, baby, it’s protection”
(15). Because of this time period in society, it was important for a woman to find a man to care
for her; a woman had to sometimes compromise love for security. By stating, “She knew now
that marriage did not make love. Janie’s first dream was dead, so she became a woman” (25), the
narrator expressed that love will and does not come easily. This time in Janie’s life connects to
life outside the novel because there are many young women who are immature and do not know
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the true meaning of love. Young Janie is a representation of a love-hungry woman who will not
Growth allows the shift of maturity to produce self-worth. Janie’s second marriage
exemplifies that over time, Love can guide in needed maturity that can reveal self-worth. The
revelation that was revealed within Janie in her marriage with Joe Starks was apparent. Joe only
wanted Janie to look pretty and to show off when he stated, “Thank yuh fuh yo’ compliments,
but mah wife don’t know nothin’ ‘bout no speech-makin’. Ah never married her for nothin’ lak
dat. She’s uh woman and her place is in de home”(43). Women can empathize with Janie and
have that same realization: she is more than just a pretty woman. As this marriage progresses,
Joe starts to show his true colors. He ridicules and silences Janie at every chance there is. When
he is on his deathbed, Janie approaches him with final words, “Naw you gointuh listen tuh me
one time befo’ you die...But you wasn’t satisfied wid me de way Ah was” (86). Janie became fed
up and recognized that she didn’t have a voice at all with Joe and she just wasn’t the real woman
she ought to be. Janie has gone through a complete transformation in the past twenty years. The
narrator states, “She went over to the dresser and looked hard at her skin and features. The young
girl was gone, but a handsome woman had taken her place” (87). Throughout this time in Janie’s
life, she has aged and understands things a little more. Over her 20 year marriage, she has been
treated like a servant and was never allowed to speak her mind. Janie is now strong and
completely aware of the type of love to avoid on her journey. This situation that Janie was
engulfed in can teach many women about self-worth and when enough is enough.
On to the next path of Janie’s journey, she explores the level of being comfortable in
love. Janie’s last husband, Tea Cake, has brought fun and authenticity to the table. Janie’s love of
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nature reveals the attractiveness of Tea Cake, “He looked like the love thoughts of women. He
could be a bee to a blossom--a pear tree blossom in the spring... He was a glance from God”
(106). The fact that there was comparison of this man to something as pure and breathtaking as
nature, foreshadows that this love is true and that Tea Cake is Janie’s soul mate. This type of
comparison is familiar for many women today compare their lovers to nature and beautiful
sights. Throughout this budding relationship with Tea Cake, Janie starts to develop a feeling that
she has never felt before. The narrator expresses, “Doubt. All the fears that circumstance could
provide and the heart feel, attacked her on every side. This was a new sensation for her” (108).
Janie wanted to be enough for her new lover, but the fact that she was way older than him
produced a feeling of uncertainty. This sensation can relate outside of the story because many
women possess doubt when dealing with a new relationship and it can be based on the past hurt
or just insecurities. As the relationship progresses on, Janie’s doubts are quelled every time by
Tea Cake, which provided her with security and satisfaction. Janie learned how to have fun and
be herself in this relationship. Even though Tea Cake and Janie’s marriage was cut short, Janie
returned home with ample fulfillment and lessons. Love may not have a cliche, happy-ending,
but love can help a person grow and become more aware of the inner-self.
Zora Neale Hurston uses Janie’s three marriages to show the transformation that took
place to articulate that Love can construct ways to prosperity. Hurston wants the readers to
connect this story to the real world by acknowledging the hardships and struggles of love. Even
though this book was set in the early 1900s, there were many familiar situations that women
today can connect and relate to. There will be trials and tribulations, but it is an individual’s
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choice to learn and move on from them or just dwell on the matter. Love may not be a great
experience for many people, but the lessons acquired from it are everlasting and impactful.
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Works Cited
Hurston, Zora Neale. Their Eyes Were Watching God. New York: HarperCollins Publishers,
1937.