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To conclude she uses her knowledge orfJaw that terminates violence against women and shows that she has done her research proving her positive credibility. Her purpose is repeatedly shown through the text to inform the audience +3 of the dictatorship of Trujillo and injures they din the about the hardship women had fac ie, academic, educated audience in mind because had endured. Minou seems to have resi Adhere to the four sentence structure of the rhetorical p10 she tries to persuade them on her education to prove her viewpoint worthy and knowledgeable, To begin with, Tavarez Mirabal backs up why violence against women needs to end through th use fascinating statistics and interesting accounts of th butterflies, While explaining some examples of violence against women, she gives a mind-boggling statistic in which, “8,000 family violence” i II country with a population of smvat county BEEBE SRB ees oF ita Family violence” in a sma yuntry with a populoe eee + shows that many households in the -2 Mirabal pg. 2)- The fae nisi bso a topic in households that reauiies centum by talking about the ‘under 10 million people CTavare! Review all ctanions for eo7ectness. Dominican Republic ar hostile envionment. 7 sen, Minow then shifts mom 4° of June Political Moversent” wit the time (Tavarez attention to end violence against wor rae butterflies and how they were able to begin “the Jaguing the Dominican Republic at pecitically? to overthrow the government that was p that women can make a strong wnat hetoncal stategy/device are you attempting to analyze here more © ‘Mirabal pg. 3). She uses the buterlies as a focal point showing how difference in their countried government. Minow also uses the butterflies as an example inf 10% an make a difference. It should also serve as an example to many women who story of the butterflies have had many women cé Symbolism analysis? : ‘want to make a difference in their country. The facts given or the 1 strong impact on many people, NICHOLAS LARA To finish off, Mirabal utilizes her knowledge to show a serious but hopeful outcome to Finish off what? Watch use of language and sentence structure here. her speech. The author uses emotional language and symbolism to get her point across that violence in the home needs to stop. She uses a hopeful tone as she states that the “violence that our societies have visited upon women” have been ignored and that it is time guide “...us along [Provide more context for CDs and review use of elipses. the path towards building a culture of peace in our countries of Latin America and the world” (Minou Tavarez Mirabal pg. 4). Minou uses this as a way to catch the reader’s attention with the [Review ail citations forcomectness. Never refer to a speaker by their 1st name alone. use of language that was put in this sentence as a call for help. She puts the fact that the culture What words more specifically? What do they connote? of peace for Latin American women has been ignored and yet still has not been ceased. She is asking for thd help of others to help build the freedom that these women have not yet received, Mirabal then goes into using her mom as a symbol of feminism, She reveals what her mom. [Provide the author's complete last name. would reply to about the dan; of Trujillo and the we Ne oliocaaihees ply gers of Trujillo and uses the words that her mother used, “ «...If they Kill me , I shall reach my arms out of the grave and I shall be stronger’ “ ( Minow Tavarez