Writing Task 1 Student’s Name:Irmayani

Topic: My Family Class: Writing A_2

Please write at least 100 words on the following topic:

“My Family“
(Write at least 100 words about yourself. Explain about yourself, your family member, your family’
characteristic, special moment with family, etc.)

Hello,, my name is Irma, i’am working at one of BUMN company at Palu city, i life at Pewunu village
and the distance is 16 KM from Palu city which is taking time about 45 minute to get office.
My family consist of six member, that is my father, my mother, me and three young sister and brother. My
father as an ASN, and my mother as a teacher of primary school, and my sister as a member of Bawaslu
which supervise of elections.
I was very grateful because my family and I can be save from a great disaster earthquake on 28
September 2018. However our house is not collapse and can be occupied when compare with the refugge in
temporary place (Huntara). So, love your family and be a grateful every day with them.

Assessment Scores:*teacher only (1) Poor (2) Weak (3) Fair (4) Good (5) Excellent
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Comments: Area for Improvement:
I am not really good at english especially
with grammar and its friends, so i dont
think that i can correct your assigment.
But i think in the paragraoh 2 it should
be 'get to the office'.

Because im not an expert i think yours is

good enough.
Friend’s name: Adit Teacher’s Name: Yulisa Hambali