Dear Kabir,
After reviewing your brochure, | have a few slight adjustments.
First off, the material in the product is great. Everything seems
accurate and it offers great information about customer retention,
and | personally did not understand how important these strategies
are. However, there are just too many words. | am not sure about
your requirements for this project, but its very long and difficult to
read.
Secondly, make sure to reorganize the information so that when
the brochure is folded, it actually makes sense. Right now, folding
it would put the information in the wrong spots.
Lastly, there does not seem to be any conclusive statement from
this brochure. There's no conclusion that explains the impact of
retention. You should add a part that shows what to do with this
info.
Overall, good work. Good luck completing this project,
Rashaad Sanders: