That is wonderful news for you. Finally you have a mountain bike. Yes, it is an exceptional idea.

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to be fun. I prefer to go on Saturday because we can relax and ride without pressure, I cannot on Sunday. wonderful)
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as I’ve already made some plans.
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Actually, I was planning to tell you that, it sounds perfect to go to the countryside, the view is it
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the same! going to the countryside sounds perfect as
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spectacular. Although I have a new route in the mountain that we can go if you want. It is up to you, you
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choose. between the two and how many kilometers you think we should cross? sentence.
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I personally believe, if we are going to the countryside or mountain I suggest to bring quality food and Commented [TO10]: Sounds too formal
I believe, whether we’re going to the countryside or the mountain, we should bring some quality food, something ... Commented [TO11]: The mountain
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apples.

Let me know what you think as soon as possible.

Regards,

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