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Praying For Rain Short Story
Praying For Rain Short Story
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Praying for Rain
I am sitting on a wooden column at the end of the Number Eight pier, legs folded up beneath
me, listening to them call to each other across the bay. There are four of them today, drawing aim-
less circles in tar-spattered skies - more than I’ve seen in as long as I can remember. Greasy water
licks at the rotting stumps beneath me, and the blood-red air vibrates with the off-key songs of
engine and propeller and lotusfly hum, and all around me is the babble and clank and swish of gears
and metal and flesh. But I am sitting in the quiet places inside my head and listening to them speak.
“Hello there.”
A boy’s voice. Soft and edged with a smile, as if he has just finished laughing. I turn and
look at him briefly, squinting behind the polarized goggles that cover my eyes, and the red sunset
that hangs like a stone in the sky behind him turns the world razor-bright, the boy just a shadow
within it.
He is too thin. Clad in grubby rags that stink of the same blue-black exhaust hanging over
the city in a pall, trapping in the scorching heat, slicking every surface with sweat. The boy pushes
his goggles up onto his brow to rub at his eyes, and I see the whites are scrawled with red like a
lotus addict’s, black grease congealing under broken fingernails. But there is something in the line
of his jaw, the high cheekbones and strong hands that sets butterflies tumbling across my stomach
without quite knowing why, and I feel myself staring as I try to find my voice.
“Hello,” I manage.
“May I sit?” The boy points to the empty wood beside me, bleached pale grey by the blast-
furnace sun and the black rains that come in winter. He pulls his goggles back down, but before they
disappear behind the polished glass, I see his eyes are hazel. Heavy lidded. Shaped like the tips of
naginata spears.
If were a courtly lady in the Shōgun’s palace, this is the part where I would flutter my fan
before my face to hide the flush in my cheeks. I would stare at him over the unfurled edge, eyes
rimmed with dark kohl and blue powder, and I would say something mysterious. But the Shōgun’s
palace looms far behind us, high on the hill overlooking the city, struggling to keep its nose above
the fumes thrown skyward by the engines and power generators and motor-rickshaw below, and my
eyes are rimmed not with kohl and blue powder, but with sweat and dust and ash.
The boy sits beside me on the pier, lets his legs hang out over the edge and lifts the grubby
kerchief away from his face so he can spit into the tar-black waters below. I take in the shape of his
lips, the long unbroken line from chin to throat to shoulder. A sky-ship starts its engines behind us;
a stuttering, spluttering ignition followed by a bass-thick rumble like distant thunder, and we both
turn and watch it put out from the tall spires that line the edge of the bay like rusting teeth.
The ship is an ironclad, fat and slow and armed for war, propellers chopping at the choking
air as it drags its hull across the sky. Its inflatable is painted with the guardian spirit of the Tora clan
– a great prowling tiger, claws and teeth as sharp as the daishō blades of the Iron Samurai that line
her decks. They are headed east no doubt, east to Morcheba; more troops for the glorious war against
the gaijin barbarians who resist the spread of our Imperium. More grist for the mill. Stern-faced boys
in metal shells, recruited from the slums and shanty towns with the promise of three squares a day
and a place within the mighty Tora zaibatsu and a cause so glorious it is worth dying for.
Or so my father believed.
I turn away. The boy beside me watches them for a moment longer.
The sky-ship passes overhead, throwing a shadow across the sun. I steal a glance at the
simple Tiger tattoo wrapped around the boy’s bicep, the slender muscle, sculpted and hard, turning
away before he can catch me staring and concentrating furiously on not looking again. He is the
same clan as I. The same clan that rules this Imperium. The blood of Tigers in our veins.
His skin is pale beneath the grime. I thought he might be from the north – Phoenix lands,
or Dragon, perhaps even Fox. Kigen city is the capital of the great Shima Imperium, the heart of its
power, and folk from every zaibatsu clan can be found in its smoke dens and teahouses and alley-
ways. My father used to say sooner or later every man finds his feet on the road here. Before the
war took him away, left mother empty, staring out the windows of our estate with hollow eyes.
She never talks anymore. But some nights I still find her crying.
“Tora Miho,” I say, citing the name of my clan before my own, as is customary. As is prop-
er. I am watching the gulls again, but I am no longer listening to their voices in my head.
“Miho-chan.” He covers his fist and gives a little bow. He adds the ‘chan’ to my name to let
me know he thinks I am endearing. I try to swallow and my mouth is dry. “I am Tora Rei.”
I already know he is of Tiger blood from the ink on his arm. But he cites the name of his
clan first, just as I do, for the sake of formality if nothing else. If we were at court, this is the part
where I would bow from the knees and flutter my fan again and say…
Rei reaches into the obi sash tied around his waist, produces two rice cakes wrapped in
rough cloth. With a sidelong glance, he takes in the elaborate tiger tattoo on my own arm, the wealth
it denotes. It is a beautiful piece; pushed into my skin with gleaming iron needles on my thirteenth
naming day, barely a year ago. My father was nobleborn; a man of means and stature before he set
off for duty and war, and the artist he commissioned for me was one of the most renowned in the
city. I sometimes wish he had not spent so much coin, that the tattoo was simpler. People assume
Though I can’t hear his thoughts, I know what the boy is thinking. Poor little rich girl. Slum-
ming down in Docktown for a few moments before disappearing back up the hillside to bowing
servants and clean water and fresh sheets. I do not belong here. I do not—
He holds out the rice cake in an open palm. I stare at it, stare at him, and he nods and waves
“Take it.”
My eyes drift again to the tattoo on his arm - the work of some backalley artiste with a rusty
blade and watered-down cuttlefish ink. “Are you certain you can spare it?”
As I take the rice cake from his hand, our fingers touch.
“What are you doing down here?” the boy asks around his mouthful, looking back out over
the water.
“…Listening.”
“To what?”
I am listening to the gulls. To their thoughts in my head. Reaching out into the minds of
the beasts that still remain in this city. Despite the poison roiling blue-black and viscous in the air.
So few. No cats. No dogs. No sheep or cows or snakes or mice. A few gulls with threadbare
feathers, hanging mournful in the sky. Corpse-rats in the squeezeways and alleys, tumbling and
snarling in new bones on broken cobbles. Sparrows in the Shōgun’s garden, wings kept clipped so
These are the voices I can hear in the place I am not supposed to go, but I cannot tell him
that. The Burning Stones in the Market Square are scattered with the ashes of people foolish enough
to speak of the Kenning - for that is what it is called, when it is spoken of at all.
And so I lie.
But it isn’t. Kigen Bay is an open sore, weeping black and scummed with fuel sludge.
Guildsmen set the surface ablaze yesterday to burn off some of the accumulated pollutants, and
smoke rolls thick off the surface, daubing my skin with ash. I wonder for a moment if the boy is
He is watching the sky-ship full of soldiers as it performs a long, lazy turn over the city,
chugging east towards the Morcheban fronts. He covers his fist and gives them a small bow.
“What are you doing down here?” I raise an eyebrow, though he won’t be able to see it be-
hind my goggles.
He shrugs, mumbling around another mouthful of rice. “My shift just finished.”
I point to the chi refinery, sitting like an old scab on the water’s edge. All towering chimneys
and coiling pipes, retching the sky three shades darker.
“And then?”
He takes another bite, points to the sky-ship full of soldiers, the fat snail trail of exhaust
We sit together not speaking after that, watching the sun sink lower. Behind us, Spire Row
is awash with flesh. Street urchins and beggars, geisha strolling beneath paper parasols, Iron Samu-
rai in their clanking, hissing suits of power armor. Neo-chōnin merchants haggling with Lotusmen,
traveling peddlers resting in the long shade of low rent saké houses. Eyes hidden from the burning
sun behind polarized glass, faces swathed in dirty cloth to keep out the ash and exhaust brimming
from every street. But here on the edge of the pier, as I steal another glance and feel the butterflies
beating in my stomach with copper wings, it feels like we are the only two people in the world.
We sit on the edge of the pier as our shadows grow longer, stretching out across the splin-
tered wood towards the lopsided warehouses with their empty, sightless windows. The Sun Goddess
leans down to press her lips to the ocean, and I wonder for a moment what it would be like if I were
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Summer has come in all its fury and the stink rolls in off the bay like morning fog and I am
his hand. But as I sit and speak in the thoughts of the gulls (only three left now) and sunset draws
near, my ears strain for the sound of the refinery steam whistle, the blast of superheated air into
choking skies that signals the end of the day shift and tells me he will soon be here.
Listen…
There it is.
I see him soon enough, pushing his way through the crowds of sararīmen, his goggles
smeared with ash, the rag tied over his lips stained near to black. He stops before me finally, and I
can tell by the creases in his cheeks above his kerchief that he is smiling, and he covers his fist and
bows deep as if we were at court; he a noble lord and I a highborn lady and all the world at our feet.
The Guild don’t give the refinery workers any filters or breathers, and the pay isn’t enough
that Rei can afford to buy his own. So there he stands, the whites of his eyes scrawled blood red,
skin smudged grey, the rag tied across his mouth stained darker still. I am almost two years younger
than him, but you would never know it to look at us. He stands sixteen summers deep, but he al-
ready wheezes like an old man when pressed. The refinery is eating him alive. One day at a time.
The wealth my father left us means I will never have to work there. Never find myself
sunken to the eyeballs in exhaust fumes, slaving eighteen hours a day for a beggar’s salary while
my skin turns slowly grey. But Rei’s sister is only ten, and his mother has the blacklung now, and
the refinery is one of the few places hiring. I have tried to give him coin, but he refuses, and I worry
about what his pride will cost him. About what that place is doing to him.
He makes me real. He makes me laugh. And when I am near him, he lifts the weight from
my chest and makes me feel bright and unafraid, like I did when I was a child and the world was
He sits beside me on the pier and lets his legs hang out over the edge and lifts the grubby
kerchief away from his face so he can spit into the black waters below. Like he always does. And
A frown takes root on my brow, and I realize I do not wish to listen to them today. All they
speak of is death. Of the poison we fill our land and skies with. Of the endless fields of lotus flowers
choking the life from the soil, blood-red blooms torn from dying earth and refined into the fuel that
drives this engine, this war machine, this Imperium to which I belong.
But I do not belong. Have never belonged. And the fact that I can hear the voice of the gulls
Hush.
Truth is, they are singing to the wrong person. I cannot move mountains. I cannot change a
thing. I am just one girl, as lonely as they, and this boy is the only moment of joy in my days. So I
close off their voices in my mind, step away from the Kenning and slam the door shut. I do not want
to be a freak today. I do not want to be different. I just want to be here. With him.
Rei reaches into his obi and produces two rice cakes, and he offers one to me as he always
does. Even though he knows I do not need it. Even though I know they are all he has to eat today.
And as I refuse it, as I smile and give thanks and gently push his hand away, our fingers touch for
just the briefest of moments, just a half-breath in this place where every breath you take can kill
you, and I feel so light that if I kicked off the pier I might simply sail away into the red sky above.
“Did you read the newssheets?” Rei asks. He always talks with his mouth full.
I shake my head. I do not read the news, ever. Always war. War and glory and purity. Taint-
ed children burned at the stones. Tallies of dead round-eyes. Why would anyone read that?
“Tiger forces have almost crushed gaijin resistance at Fallow Pass.” Rei is looking east
across the water, eyes hidden by black, polarized glass. “The end of the war is in sight.”
“But it seems they mean it this time.” He curls his fists, jaw clenched. “They said so at the
I would never tell him, but I pray to Lord Izanagi every night that it will…
“Oh?” He turns to me, faint anger in his voice. “And how will I do that? Working in that
“You will find a way.” I smile, even though he will not see it behind my kerchief. “I believe
in you.”
He shakes his head. “Bushido is the way a man makes his name in the Imperium. Loyalty.
Honor. Sacrifice. The Shōgun, the Guild, they speak the right of it. The round-eyes must be crushed.
He hears these words at the Recruitment Centre, repeating them now by rote. His new friends.
The officers with their fresh uniforms and gleaming swords that have never tasted another blade,
never speaking of the sons who return senseless or maimed, or the fathers who do not return at all.
Just a breath.
“There are other ways to fight,” I say. “Other things to fight for.”
He looks at me then, and all I want is to pull down the glass that covers his eyes and stare
through those glittering hazel windows and find the truth of him. How to make him see. But the Sun
Goddess burns bright enough to leave you blind if you look at her with your naked eye. The layers
we have stripped from the sky have left us pale and frightened beneath her glare. I think perhaps she
“Besides...” I try to keep my voice light. “I would miss you if you were gone.”
Ever so slowly, a gentle smile blooms on his lips. “I would miss you too.”
And he takes my hand, and I cannot feel my feet, and we sit together and watch the Sun
Goddess stoop to her rest. And as she touches the horizon, he moves closer, and he puts his arm
around me, and it seems for a moment that everything is perfect, everything is good, red sunlight
refracting knife-bright off the ocean’s surface and setting the whole world on fire.
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A vast space, choked with people, lined with every kind of store beneath the sun. Spice mer-
chants and flesh peddlers and textilemen. Bakers and clothiers and herbalists, temples and smoke
dens and geisha houses. Performers catching the eyes of the unwary while cutpurses ply their shad-
ow trade. Goggle vendors everywhere, beggars in the gutters, every face hidden behind dirty rags
or clockwork breathers coated in ash. City soldiers in red jin-haori tabards, Iron Samurai lumbering
amongst the crowd in their hissing suits of power armor, hands on the hilts of their chainsaw katana.
Kigen city’s beating heart, and at its center, Rei and I, all the world spinning around us.
We are standing at a noodle stall, eyeing off cracker bowls filled with fried cuttlefish and
rice when the cry goes up from the mob. A tumult echoing across the crowded square, my heart
sinking in my chest and my stomach turning to water. I know this tune. I have heard it before.
Rei stands on tip-toe as the noise builds, looking over the mob at four hulking shapes clad in
suits of gleaming, burnished brass.
“Let’s go watch,” he says, and grabs my hand and drags me forward. And my feet are made
of lead and my eyes are full of sand and all I can hear is a single word, spit from a dozen mouths,
rising into a cacophony that fills me with fear. Because they have caught another one. And the next
Four Guildsmen are marching through the crowd, dragging a young boy dressed all in black.
The Guildsmen are clad head to foot in atmos-suits of brass and dark rubber, their helms smooth
and mantis-shaped, their eyes bulbous and glowing bloody red like the sky pressing in above my
head. They are pistons and ball joints and gauntleted fists. They are clockwork chests and plumes
of blue-black exhaust and heavy boots crunching on cracking cobbles with the cadence of a funeral
march. And the boy they are holding is pleading, screaming, but I cannot make out what he is say-
ing because all I can hear is the voice of the crowd, rising into a fever pitch, an accusation on the
Rei is still dragging me forward, towards the mall sunken a few feet into the surface of the
Square. Pierced at cardinal points by four towering stones, crusted in charcoal and old scorch, fresh
tinder piled at their feet. The manacles set in the stones clank and skitter in the ash-streaked wind
“Impure!”
The Guildsmen march the boy down to the pyres, push his back against the northernmost
stone and slap his wrists in black iron. And he is crying, begging, searching the crowd for someone,
Finding none.
“Burn the Impure!” cries a man beside me, looking at me to see if I share his glee. Rei is
standing on his tip-toes again as the Guildsmen begin to recite their scripture in rasping voices,
tinged metallic beneath their masks. They speak of “Purity’s Way”. Of purging the taint of the
Kenning from our bloodstream. Of the Maker God, great Lord Izanagi, and the ritual cleansing that
gave birth to the sun and the moon and the storms.
I have heard it all before. A dozen times. And every time, it makes less and less sense.
Though I possess the gift, I cannot see how my existence harms the Imperium. I speak no ill against
the Shōgun or the Guild. I am so afraid, I hardly speak at all. But the people around me are drawn
like lotusflies to new corpseflesh, some curious, some revolted, some genuinely possessed of belief
He turns and looks at me, eyes hidden behind his goggles, face hidden behind his kerchief.
“Why not?”
He turns back to the Stones. There is a flare of bright light, sunburnt orange.
“Please, Rei.”
He holds my hand and we push away through the mob, and I try not to hear the sound of
the tinder catching. And I try to not to smell what that boy is becoming, or absorb the words that he
is screaming. I focus only on Rei’s hand in mine, wishing that I did not have to ask him to take me
away, wishing that I was not here, wishing for one moment that I could be like them – this mob with
the glow of the flames dancing on their eyes and the Guild’s dogma dripping from their lips – in-
stead of like the boy who even now flails and screams in the firelight.
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It is two months, twenty four days and three hours since we met.
We are lying in the dark at the edge of the pier. Our place. I am resting my head on his chest
as listening to the tune of his pulse against his ribs. His hand is tangled in my hair, and I can still
taste his mouth on mine, and the night air is cool against the sweat on the back of my neck. His
breathing is soft as feathers, rhythmic as a sky-ship’s clockwork heart. My fingers are entwined with
his and nothing else in the world matters. Not the Guild. Not the war. Not this city, rotting from the
inside out.
If only.
It hangs between us. This thing that I am. This curse. This gift. Even now, reaching into the
Kenning and feeling the lives pulse around me, the few animals that remain in this world we have
made. I wonder what he will say if I speak it. I wonder how I can think he loves me, if he does not
know me. Or how I think I can love him, if I am not honest about who and what I am.
“You don’t have to be afraid.” I can hear the smile in his voice without looking at his face.
But I am afraid. Afraid his new friends at the Recruitment Centre have filled him with too
much talk of glory and battle and pride. Of the Shōgun’s law and the Guild’s doctrine, and how in
the end, one does not matter, no matter who that one might be. Only the nation matters. Only the
Imperium.
And so I turn away from it. To the other wedge that lies between us, growing thicker by the day.
“What did I ever do before you?” I whisper. “What will I ever do without you?”
His breathing catches, his muscles tense. I feel his anger, even if he does not show it. We
I prop myself up on one elbow and look into his eyes. It’s only when the sun goes down
that I can see them clearly. Only when that burning sphere has slunk to her rest and the goggles are
pushed down around his neck can I see those warm, sugar-sweet hazel eyes, framed by gently curl-
“Can’t we just go away? You and me? I have money. We could bring your sister. Your
mother, too. We could work on a farm, maybe. Grow lotus far away from here. Far from the Shōgun
And then I hear them. In my head. In the place where I should not go. The place no-one
knows about but me, that I cannot speak of, even to this boy I think I love. The place I have visited
less and less since I met him, trying to be normal, trying to be clean. But I can hear them now, the
The sound is awful, sharp as knives in my head. I am on my feet, running without thinking,
feeling for them in the dark. They are a different shape than the corpse-rats, a different texture in the
Kenning, easy for me to find. And Rei is running behind me, shouting at me to stop, asking where
I am going, but I can barely hear his voice over the screaming gulls, all fear and rage and ash grey
feathers in my head.
I round the corner of a tumbledown warehouse, broken eaves jutting out from the wall like
a crooked overbite, and in the shadowy place beneath I can see two street boys standing on a pile
of packing crates. Two gulls circle in the air above their heads, screaming outrage. The urchins are
grubby and thin and desperate, and their eyes are lit up like kindling wheels on Lord Izanagi’s feast
day as the taller of the pair reaches up beneath the eaves and finds it – a treasure, a little miracle of
twisted sticks and dark mud, filled with small white globes.
A nest.
And the gulls are screaming, screaming, and I cannot shut them out. And though I can see the
urchins are starving, stick-thin limbs clad in threadbare rags, I cannot help but think how selfish we
all are. How there are so many of us here, and so little remaining of anything else. No birds in the sky
or fish in the bay. No cats or cows or pigs or pigeons. Just people and the world we have destroyed,
stained blue-black by the machines we have created. And still, we think only of ourselves. No matter if
these are the last free birds left in the city. No matter if those eggs are the last they will ever lay.
The taller boy turns to me and his eyes grow dark and his smile fades.
“Or what?”
Rei rounds the corner, sweat-slick and breathless. The refinery has already left its mark on
his lungs. He’s right – he cannot stay there. Neither of us can stay here.
“…Miho?”
The gulls are still screaming, cries sharp as broken glass splitting the night. And I reach into
the Kenning and tell them it will be alright. That Rei will make the boys put it back, that everything
will—
He is looking at me. And his eyes are narrowed and his frown is taking root between his
He looks at the boys and they are smirking and already slinking away, nest in hand. And the
gulls are screaming, screaming inside my head, and though I could shut them out if I really tried, I
feel I should listen, I should hear them, because gods only know if anyone else ever will.
“Please!”
“Miho—”
“STOP THEM!”
I turn away. I cannot look at him. Cannot bear to see he is becoming just like everyone else.
So blind to anything and everything. This city. The people in it. I find myself praying for rain. For
a storm so dark and fierce it flushes all of us away. The lotus and the Guild. The Shōgun and his
armies and this reeking hole at the heart of this rotten nation. We are stupid. We are eyeless.
I call to the gulls in my mind and hold out my hands, and they descend to my palms and
hang their heads. They are simple, fragile things. They do not feel loss as we do. Already, the stolen
nest and the round white treasures within are fading from their memories. But I remember. I feel it
for them. And I gather them close and there is warmth and wet upon my cheeks, and salt upon my
lips, and I tell them it will be alright. That one day, all of this will be gone.
Rei watches me, mute and unblinking. The birds are still and quiet in my arms now, my
thoughts a soothing lullaby in their heads. And I turn and look at this boy I think I love, this boy
who gives me food he cannot spare and speaks as if he has just finished laughing, who makes me
“Impure,” he breathes.
A slow horror is dawning on his face, and I see in his eyes a stranger. Just another soldier for
the war. Just another sword in the Shōgun’s hand. Just another one of them.
“Impure…”
The gulls spread their wings and take to the sky, calling mournfully to each other across the
And I sit in the cool, and I close my eyes, and I listen to them sing.
Because I know.
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me, listening to them call to each other across the bay. Only two of them left now, drawing aimless
circles in tar-spattered, blood-red skies, and soon I know there will be none at all. Greasy water
licks at the rotting stumps beneath me, and the blood-red air vibrates with the off-key songs of
engine and propeller and lotusfly hum, and all around me is the babble and clank and swish of gears
and metal and flesh. But I am sitting in the quiet places inside my head and listening to them speak.
“Citizen.”
It is a voice of metal and insect wings, a thousand cicada hum. I do not need to turn around
to know what they are. Who they are here for. Who told them.
Brass boots clomp along the desiccated wood, burning sunlight refracting on burning metal.
The Guildsman stops beside me, stoops down and takes hold of my arm in a grip of pistons and
gears and smoking blue-black exhaust. And the fear comes then. The fear of where they will take
me, and how I will end. That I am too young to die. That all of this is horribly wrong.
They pull me to my feet, and I try to hold back the tears. The sun is blinding in the sky, but
I can feel the gulls above me, circling, calling to each other mournfully without quite knowing why.
And I reach out to them, in the place I should not go, with the Gift I should not own, and I tell them
They do not understand. And as I am marched up the Spire Row towards the Burning
Stones, a crowd gathers around me, eyes alight with hunger behind polished black glass, that hateful
“Impure.”
I am holding back the tears, holding back the terror, holding on to the gull song. But it is
fading in my head as they drag me further away from the bay, and I know soon I will not be able to
hear it at all. And after that, I do not know.
I do not know.
I see him in the crowd. Just a glimpse. Clad in the red jin-haori tabard of a Tora soldier, a
shiny new naginata spear clutched in his hands. He is looking right at me and his face is pale, and I
wonder if he spoke then, what would he say. If it would sound like he had just finished laughing.
The Stones loom before me, black and high and charcoal clad.