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ENGL-117
Mr. Shackett
Richard’s Sentencing
During a cool evening on November 4, 2013, Oakland witnessed one of the most
appalling attacks against the LGBT community in its history. At 5 o’clock, a black Oakland High
School student, Richard Thomas, set fire to an agender individual, Sasha Fleischman. News of
the 57 bus fire caught the nation by storm, eventually reaching international headlines. The
district attorney, Nancy O’Malley, intended to sentence Richard for the charges of mayhem,
assault, as well as a hate crime; she also wanted to try him as an adult instead of a juvenile.
Personally, I disagree with O’Malley’s intentions and her sentence for Richard. Even though
Richard’s actions were horrendous and stupid, I still believe that he is a good person and he did
not mean for his behavior to cause bodily harm to another individual; therefore, I conclude that
Richard should be given a lighter sentence. To deal with Richard, I would try him as a juvenile
for the charges of assault and mayhem; after being found guilty of setting Sasha’s skirt on fire
and causing great injury, I would sentence him to three years in Juvenile Detention Center
(JDC), but if he completed a session of restorative justice with Sasha’s party, then I would
One reason that Richard is still a good person and should not be given a harsh
punishment like O’Malley’s is because there is a difference between the brain structure and
thought process of adolescents and adults. One difference is that juveniles tend to be more
“trigger-happy” and acting without thinking about the consequences of the act. Similar to what
the American Civil Liberties Union of Northern California (ACLUNC) felt in their letter to
Nancy O’Malley, I think Richard should be tried as a juvenile instead of an adult. ACLUNC
claimed “When juvenile impulsivity and poor judgement produce dire consequences, it does not
make sense to craft a response intended for adults … it is important to remember that children
are different from adults” (171). In other words, adolescents have a tendency to act without fully
understanding the consequences that follow it because they are wired differently in the brain;
therefore, Richard should be charged as a kid instead of an adult because he is still a kid and it’s
important to remember that they are two different types of people. O’Malley’s attempt to identify
him as an adult should definitely be seen as unjust and Richard should receive a lighter sentence
Additionally, even though teens can be as knowledgeable and reasonable as adults, this is
the age where they tend to be more sensitive to stimulus. Similar to what Dashka Slater believes,
I think that this increased sensitivity to stimulus reveals a glaring difference between adults and
adolescents. Slater states “Many people have observed that adolescents tend to be more reckless,
impulsive, and vulnerable to peer pressure than adults … judgement can be fairly awful when
they are feeling intense emotions or stress … making it more likely that teens will seek out risk
and short term reward without pausing to consider the consequences” (173). Her point is that
teens are audacious and hasty because of the structure of their teenage brain and stress as well as
peers can intensify their poor judgement. The limbic system reacts to the stimuli, making teens
more emotional and excited for new adventures; myelin, a fatty sheath, also accelerates their
when I was in 9th grade, I got into an argument with another kid over some small thing, but it led
to us starting a tussle in the commons. Afterward, we got sent to the office and had to report back
for a lunch detention. In that moment, my teen brain was sensitive to stimuli, making me very
emotional and aggressive as well as not thinking about the consequences of the tussle. O’Malley
misjudged Richard’s intentions and failed to recognize that Richard is still a kid and has time to
grow up and develop a matured brain. With this in mind, I believe Richard is still a good person
because he acted with his teenage brain, which is still undeveloped, and deserves a lighter
sentence which takes into account that he is still a juvenile and what he did on the bus was not
because it includes restorative justice. Restorative justice is an approach where the response to a
crime is a meeting between the victim and the offender, sometimes with representatives of the
wider community, to heal the harms created by the crime through understanding, not
institutionalization. Without this process, Richard would just go into jail and do not come back
out any better; it teaches him a lesson for the crime he committed but not for the crime against
the person. Similar to what Dashka Slater felt, I think restorative justice will be a beneficial part
for Richard during his sentence because it will allow him to understand the other side of the 57
bus fire and help him realize his faults so he can start to rebuild relationships between the victim
and the community. Slater illustrates “Restorative justice is more interested in relationships. A
crime is not an act against a rule, it’s an act against a person. When you harm somebody, you
owe it to them to make things right. By making things right, you begin to heal your relationship
with the community.” (238). In other words, restorative justice helps the people involved
understand each other, which is then turned into a new, strong relationship. All these layers of
understanding heals the harm caused by the crime and strengthens the community. In my
sociology class, I have participated in a restorative justice circle with my classmates. Going into
the session, I thought it was it was boring and stupid, but as everyone talked about how they felt,
we started to learn things about each other we never knew about before. Through restorative
justice, my classmates and I were able to heal relationships and create new friendships. With
restorative justice in the sentence, Richard will be able to rebuild a relationship of understanding
with Sasha and their community, as well as reform Richard into a better person; this would not
Even though I believe this is how we should deal with Richard, we all have our own
personal opinions on various topics, so it is important for us to identify any assumptions and
biases to our audience. For me, there were various assumptions and biases that made me charge
Richard as a juvenile for mayhem and assault and give Richard a lighter sentence, compared to
O’Malley’s harsh punishment. One assumption I have is that restorative justice is going to help
reform Richard into a productive member of society and a shortened sentence is long enough to
teach him a lesson. Through my experience in a restorative justice circle and reading regarding
that topic, I believe that it helps people get to know each other and how they felt, which benefits
each other’s relationships and better oneself. Similarly, a bias I obtain is that I am not too fond of
individuals from the LGBT. This does not mean I am homophobic and desire to inflict harm on
them, but it means that I still find that being gay is weird and often find myself double-taking
whenever I see those people, like many other Americans. My strict cultural and religious
background plays a role in this awkwardness around people from the LGBT community. I
always taught that God had made two types of humans––male and female. Another bias that I
acquire is that I lived in Oakland for a few years and had witnessed all of the things Richard
talked about––drugs, crime, and violence. I know what he went through and what he felt at those
points in his life, so it caused me to develop a soft side for Richard. It was hard growing up
Oakland for me and I know it was the same for him as well, especially because of his ethnicity.
While I believe Richard is still a good person and deserves a light sentence for his crime,
many people, such as district attorney Nancy O’Malley, would disagree with my claim. When
deciding Richard’s sentence of 5-7 years in jail, O’Malley believes that her heart was in the right
place by punishing him for his actions against an agender person. However, the district attorney
never had the time to get to know Richard; she only knew him from the case, where a guy set
someone on fire in broad daylight, and that he had a previous record. Like O’Malley, other
people in society don’t know Richard or his intentions so they believe that what he did on the bus
was on purpose and desired to inflict harm on a gay individual. On the other hand, I learned
about Richard’s bleak past and his intentions on the night of the fire from the book. Therefore, I
have a better insight into the offender’s life and the incident and am able to give a fairer
judgement. Even if they knew Richard did not have harmful intentions, O’Malley and others
would argue that the kid is old enough to know that lighting someone’s skirt on fire is bad and he
should be punished as an adult due to the severity of the crime. However, like I stated before, the
brain structure and thought process of adolescents are completely different than adults. Overall,
O’Malley’s harsh punishment of 5-7 years in state jail and an attempt to charge Richard as an
adult and a hate crime is unjustified for the circumstances of the incident. With this in mind, my
approach to dealing with Richard (a lighter sentence and a chance for restorative justice) would
be a better option to reform Richard and make him into a beneficial part of society.
Ultimately, the act Richard committed that evening on the 57 bus is not to be taken
lightly––it was horrendous as well as stupid. However, I still do not agree with the sentence
Nancy O’Malley gave Richard for his actions. I believe that Richard is a good person and can be
salvaged from this incident, so he deserves a lighter sentence. To deal with Richard, I would
charge him as a juvenile for mayhem as well as assault, and sentence him to 3 years in Juvenile
Detention, but with a possibility of only 2 years if he completes restorative justice. Richard
should have this sentence, compared to O’Malley’s harsh 5-7 year punishment, because of three
reasons: adolescent’s brain works differently than an adult's brain, Richard intentions and his
background shows that the act was not intentional but a result of a dumb decision, and restorative
justice will help reform Richard and heal his relationship with Sasha and the community.