Writers Journal #5

My community faces the problem of deforestation is getting worse and worse every day. The
audience that I would like to be reaching is more in the arena of adults maybe in high places or
other people who already have some sort of influence or idea where to go to implement change
or make my voice heard.I feel that maybe my paper was not very organized or really separated
enough into a larger amount of paragraphs to get a much better view of my ideas. I will revise
heavily and take a closer in depth look at my paper this time organizing every topic into its own
section and in an order that flows well not only making the read a very pleasant and informing
one displaying my research and opinions in the correct places.