The author has not started the article properly.

In this article, the author has not completely described

the whole article in abstract. Moreover he has also not given proper introduction and has not discussed
the article properly. It can be seen that even after reading the whole article the reader cannot
understand the point of the author. He has not given proper evidences against his arguments and some
of the evidences given by the author does not support the arguments. He has not claimed clarified
points. This article is almost similar to the all other articles on this topic on the internet despite the fact
the author has tried to use his own words to describe the main point of the topic. The author has not
clarified the past problems and has not clarified the solutions to the past problems. In most of the
paragraphs, the author has written the article in difficult word which becomes time taking and difficult
for a reader. Some of the paragraphs of this article are completely irrelevant of the topic. In this article
the author has described about the multimedia traffic on the internet, the emergence of new
applications and the problems occurring with the current internet architecture but has not explained a
proper solution of this. The author has not written defined questions against his article and has not
answered them wisely. In this article the meta-analyses of ICN in not written. Through his writing the
writer does not seems to be a highly seasoned writer. The author has not mentioned the reason of why
should a reader should read this? Some of the information in this article is repeating which is a very
annoying thing for a reader. The information in this paper providing information on the topic of
Information-centric networking is limited it needs more research to discuss it. In this article the
information provided has too much jargon. The author of this article does not anticipate and rebut
audience counter-argument. In some of the sentences the syntactical errors are high because of using
high vocabulary and even the meaning of some lines is obscured

The positive impact of this article is people can seek information about ICN, which is very useful for the
females, males and students because the data they share through internet can be secured and
protected. The paragraphs, sentences and described information of the article are interesting and when
the reader starts reading the article, he finds it useful for him and interesting in reading. In some
paragraphs in which the author has described the solution to problems he has used easier words which
are a golden point of this article. In the article, a new solution to the internet insecurities of the people’s
data and problems is given. This article contributes a completely new important knowledge to the field
and for the students in their studying field and by reading this article the audience can see something
different and when the audience see something different they tell others to read the article and by this
article becomes famous. The past internet problems described in this article is fact based. This article is
an example of thick description and some of the functions of information-centric networking like
mobility and naming is described very wisely which increases the knowledge of a person about how to
protect his phones data. The theme of the article is to describe solutions to the mobile’s data
insecurities. Through proper reading this article it can be seen that writer was focused while he was
writing this article. The whole article makes a sense as it described synchronized. There is a flow in the
paragraphs of the information provided on the topic of information-centric networking because one
section acknowledges that there was a section before it and that there will be one after it. The positive
aspect of this article is that it is in a logical right order. A proper research on the background of the claim
in its article has been conducted and then this article is written. The writer of this paper has used proper
headings and these headings are in a logical right order providing the information of Information-Centric
Networking (ICN). The writer has skill in language and has used some high vocabulary while writing