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1.1 Interior of a warehouse. It’s Caption: Abandoned Hortman’s


daytime, but the cracked, Warehouse.
dirty windows gives the place
a sepia tone. It’s clear
the place hasn’t had much
activity in a while. There
are still crates, but they are
covered in graffiti. There is
a amorphous shape laying in
the open.

1.2 The door to the place is


opened up by a figure obscured
by the light pouring in behind
him. A rat scurries along the
floor, and the shape scrambles
behind a crate.

1.3 Worm’s eye of the figure, now JAMIE MARVETTE


revealed to be a photographer, This is gonna be art...
JAMIE MARVETTE, has broken
into the abandoned warehouse.
He’s wearing a thick winrer
coat and has got a very large
camera, and is appears to be
scouting for photos. The shape
is lowering itself from the
ceiling. It’s insectoid, with
many arms. The larges right
arm extends a proboscis-like
length towards Jamie’s neck.

1.4 Jamie’s camera flash brightens


the scene enough for the
creature’s extended arm join
to stab him in the shoulder.
His face is complete agony,
while the arthropod monster
descends further.

1.5 Jamie opens his mouth,


screaming as the creatures
beings to presumably eat him.
He grabs the camera, taking
a photo of himself and the
monster.
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2.1 The digital camera screen


shows a blurry white shape on
top of Jamie, and is focused
on the outside, on a dumpster.

2.2 Much later, a police crime JASON HAIGH


scene has been set up. Center These cuts are something else...
frame is the body of Jamie
Marvette, his face is twisted
in agony, and his skin is
covered in patches of exposed
muscle. His veins are solid
black, and his eyes bulging
out of his skull. Standing
by his body is JASON HAIGH,
a detective. Jason’s forehead
is covered with a headband,
and he is very meticulously
groomed.

2.3 As cops mill about in the AUGUSTUS KLEIN


background, Police Chief I’m more or less worried about
AUGUSTUS KLEIN steps into this mark here. I mean, it’s clear
frame, rubbing his temple. he got injected with something
He’s a portly, mustachio’d acidic, but the tests aren’t
man, who is trying to cover exactly out on what did it. No
his balding had with a flat match to anything in the database.
cap. He’s pointing to a lump
on Jamie’s neck, a bubbling, JASON HAIGH
disguiting mark. You think that those exposed
muscles were caused by chemicals?

AUGUSTUS KLEIN
No, from what we the ME said,
based his quick examination
the wounds were caused by small
sawwing motions with a fairly
needle-like tool.

2.4 Augustus shakes his head, AUGUSTUS KLEIN


showing his phone to Jason. On Either the victim was killed by a
it is the camera’s last image. Yeti or we got one of your friends
Jason touches his forehead in running about.
reaction.
JASON HAIGH
Don’t joke. we might find a Yeti
in Cleveland*, one of these days.
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2.5 Bird’s eye view of Jason


looking back at the body. The
creature’s shoulder is just
in view, as if the audience is
sharing a point of view with
it.
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3.1 Jason kneels to get a better JASON HAIGH


look at the body. He’s looking Hey, show me the picture again.
very intently at the wounds.
Augustus is looking at him
funny, but shows him the
screen.

3.2 Jason rubs his forehead again, JASON HAIGH


thinking hard. Augustus is These tattoos match the wounds,
shuddering at the thought of perfectly. They sawed off his
whatever did this crime. tattoos.
AUGUSTUS KLEIN
Or chewed them off...

3.3 Klein looks around the place, JASON HAIGH


as Jason stands up. In the So, this guy was a photographer?
top, highest point of frame,
the creature leaves out the AUGUSTUS KLEIN
window. Yeah. No idea why he was in a dump
like this.
JASON HAIGH
You know, the whole urban decay
angle? Some people go into
abandoned.

3.4 Klein looks up, at the AUGUSTUS KLEIN


now opened window. Jason’s That wasn’t open a few minutes
following his gaze. ago...

3.5 Jason closes his eyes, JASON HAIGH


sighing. Augustus grabs his I hope that thing isn’t
service revolver. intelligent to spy...I’km not in a
mood for a smarty pants agian.

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