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Issue Technology 1st
Issue Technology 1st
Starting from a basic problem, earlier there were no alarms and mobile phones to
wake you up. we had to completely depend on ourselves. But today, due to invention
of mobile phones and mobile phones, it make the work quite easier, now we dont have
to depend on ourselves to wake up it will ring on the time we set on it. Today, we
are surrounded by technology every minute and every second. But again the
technology of mobile phones helped us a lot. we can easily send messages and we
can easily contact with any one whenever and wherever we want.
Earlier, when there was no advanced technology, people used to solve minor problems
to major problems by discussing on it. But today, they completely depend on
technology to solve each and every problem, they dont even think that it can easily
be solved on discussing and choosing alternative options. However, technology can
easily solve that problem in seconds but human perform activities as per their own
intelligence and using their common sense to solve problems. On contrary,
technology only has artificial intelligence.
As per my view, technology has beyond doubt, eased the life of human beings. It has
proves to be great boon in development process of culture and society. However, too
much of anything is bad. Technology should be used with due care and caution only
for the purposed that are benefit for humanity.
A good attempt but the essay lacks clarity. What is your stand?
Moreover, the dependence of technology, how has it affected humans ability to
think? That is what you should also discuss. Made us lazy, has affected our memory
etc.
Please review your essay to minimize grammatical errors related to sentence
construction and spelling mistakes
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