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Arielle Enriquez - This I Believe Essay Draft
Arielle Enriquez - This I Believe Essay Draft
Arielle Enriquez
English 10
Ms. Chung
12 August 2019
I believe that God can help with problems that you think are too much to handle. All you
have to do is reflect and let God in and everything will fall into place. God can do many
wonderful things to help you. He can send you signs through things and/or people you wouldn’t
think of to have the answers to help you. You just need to believe and have faith.
I was having overwhelming problems at home, school, and with myself. I didn’t know
what to do that will help my situation. I was so stressed that the problems seemed to get bigger
every day that I didn’t do anything to improve them. I began to think that my parents hated me
with a passion, I was never going to get my grades up, and that I was never going to be the
person my parents wanted and knew I could be. When I finally left for 8th-grade Retreat I was
prepared to make it an escape. I thought that I could just relax in nature and forget the real world
for a while. Little did I know, that once I got there I would have an eye-opening and breathtaking
spiritual journey.
We stayed at Whispering Winds Retreat Center for three days and two nights. When we
arrived there on Wednesday morning we went straight to the hall after putting our bags in our
rooms. We started the day with goal setting, meditation, and reflection. Our goal was to come
back to society as a new person with a new mindset. My homeroom teacher told us to forget
everything that was burdening you back at home and at school. That we needed to focus on
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bettering ourselves instead of carrying burdens with us that could hold us back. Then my religion
teacher said to reflect on our spiritual life that we had then and that it would become a lot more
important and bigger here. Later that afternoon, started the real opening up we had to just sit and
pray to God but in different way than we normally would. We would stay completely silent and
open-minded to hear him speak to us through the wind and we would answer him.
We did a lot more activities of that nature throughout the whole trip that things that I had
buried a long time ago came rushing back to me because it would help me and be significant in
my life now in the present. All I had to do was listen deeply not just with my ears but with my
heart and soul as well. I came back from that trip and all my problems were fixed. It’s almost as
if it were a miracle. I told my parents in detail about my spiritual journey and the problems with
them were gone. The problems I was having with my self disappeared because I came back with
confidence and pride of who I was and no one and nothing was going to shake me down. I had
got back into the groove with my school work with all the burdens I gave up to the Lord because
The gist of all is that opening up to God and letting Him guide and help you is the best
way to live your life. If you let him in he will do great things for you this I believe.