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Secondary Curriculum 1a Assignment Callum Lofts 19277194 Final 2
Secondary Curriculum 1a Assignment Callum Lofts 19277194 Final 2
These sequenced lessons explore speeches as a text type, in conjunction with the
Grant’s Racism and the Australian Dream and Adam Goodes’ Australian of the
Year speech, students learn the language techniques, structure of speeches and
how they are composed to create persuasive meaning. (Ref Syllabus, Hattie,
content of the speeches while integrating ICT and group interactivity (ref Artful
English Teachers). In the final lesson, students will be assessed by writing and
delivering an impromptu speech, to identify how well they grasped and can
apply the concepts (ref). Lessons are designed to meet Outcome 1: ‘Responds to
and composes texts for understanding, […] EN4-1A ‘ (Ref) and content points
‘ACELY1750: Identify and explore the purposes and effects of different text
structures […] and use this knowledge to create purposeful texts (Page 52)” and
“(ACELY1719) Identify and discuss main ideas, concepts and points of view in
(Pg?).
will also begin to understand that these concepts can benefit them outside the
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classroom (Allison, Tharby & Lemov, 2015). Referring above, syllabus
express the big idea of rhetoric, argument and persuasion. This adequately meets
the content point for stage 4 and allows students to gain mastery of their own
language and immediately use the skills in context to their own lives (ref).
Therefore, students are taking ownership of skills that make them critical
thinkers, sustaining the national agenda education goals, creating students that
The lessons’ are guided with teacher self-assessment of the Quality Teaching
practice pedagogy (ref Ladwig). Further, journal reflections will be used with
three key questions from each lesson to help increase teacher self-awareness
(ref).The first lesson introduces spoken texts and the concept of argument.
Example questions are: ‘Why study speeches?’ ‘What is significant about this
form?’, directing students to lesson cornerstones that are linked to the syllabus
outcome and content point ( Ref check Department of Education and Training,
p.13). Students are provided with speech technique worksheet that they will use
over the next three lessons. Stan Grant’s speech is put into context with Julia
Zemiro’s Home Delivery interview. Then Racism and The Australian Dream is
played. Students are then given transcripts, do pair work and annotate and create
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a presentation of the speech. This emphasises robust delivery of the lesson
the use of ICT is incorporated throughout all lessons with the viewing of the
speeches and the use of software keynote (ref). This will first be modelled by the
practice.
The second lesson will give a deeper understanding of Racism and the Australian
Dream. The focus on this lesson will be allowing students to use the concepts
they have been learning in the previous lesson. This is achieved by doing
activities I Speak, You Listen and Jigsaw (ref). These activities are designed to
cement and deepen student understanding through peer teaching and practical
use of the techniques, giving immediate relevancy (ref). The informal debate will
help to utilise the rhetorical skills of argument to further understand how Grant
has used argument to make a persuasive text. Through clear and concise
Finally, the third lesson, which extends the context of Stan Grant’s Australian
Dream. Students will identify public figure Adam Goodes’ his significance and
why Grant has referenced him in his speech. Further context is provided with a
viewing of Ahn Do’s Brush with Fame on which Adam Goodes’ was a guest and,
then, Goodes, Australian of the Year speech will be presented. Upon this stimulus
and after extensive discussion, students will be presented with the question:
What motivates individuals to step up, step out and become the voice of a
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community? Using this as stimulus, students will construct their own impromptu
speech and present to the class. A speech scaffold will be provided and modelled
imaginatively recreate and engage with the spoken texts they have been viewing
and examine firsthand how rhetoric is used to create persuasive spoken texts
(ref).
Choices teachers make in content and texts and how to teach the curriculum
outcomes and content points Atwell (1987) has been used to give visual
representation and modelling (visual proof) to show students what they are
learning and give them a quantifiable effect of it. Further, Imaginative Recreation
from (ref) has been adapted to engage students in the issues presented in both
question: ‘What motivates individuals to step up, step out and become the voice
of a community?’ This allows them to recreate the social context and using the
same techniques that both Stan Grant and Adam Goodes have used (ref)
deepening their understanding of the texts reflecting upon how speeches can be
and homework activities, exploring the form of spoken texts through annotation,
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the locus for a text (ref). This is crucial for spoken texts as argument and rhetoric
inform how a speech is received (ref). Therefore, in conjunction with the Textual
that allows students to command and interrelate the many modes of language in
articulating its real world value (ref). In towards a rhetorical perspective (ref)
students experience new forms of language and modes that perhaps the
participate in meaningful ways (ref) and addresses ‘the art of discourse (ref).
The use of visual stimulus, with both speeches being presented and
contextualised on the Smart Board and, then, giving students the opportunity to
the verbal and the visual and examine their effects in a communication situation”
(Towards a reh, p 41). Ultimately using the concepts of rhetoric and argument as
stated by (Ref reh p 41) to see the relationship of language and society and
language and power something that is, perhaps, missed in traditional studies of
Finally, ICT as highlighted in (Ref the artful English teacher) to allow students to
engage and interact in a multimodal way (ref) and supports Standard 2, 2.6.1 in
the Australian Professional Standards of Teaching (NESA, 2012, p. 11). The lesson
is further supported with the Quality Teaching Model, particularly markers: Deep
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knowledge, Substantive Commination and Intellectual Quality (Department of
Education and Training, 2006, p. 3). These cornerstones of practice have guided
privileged, allowing them to gain deeper insight into the concepts of aesthetic,
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ENGLISH LESSON PLANNING TEMPLATE (Lesson 1 , Stan Grant Racism and
Communication (ref). I’ll be assessing myself against this rubric and extend my
students are taking away from the lessons, which is identified as crucial practice
Outcomes
Syllabus outcomes:
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Content Points:
ACELY1750: Identify and explore the purposes and effects of different text
structures and language features of spoken texts, and use this knowledge
to create purposeful texts that inform, persuade and engage (Page 52)
ACELY1719: Identify and discuss main ideas, concepts and points of view
speech.
Procedures
mark roll.
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Brainstorming focus on exploring speeches as persuasive rhetorical
coloured at the end of the unit, they will compose their own
markers for
hand out literary techniques are used in more than one mode
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sheet. and the art of argument rhetoric. Inform students
spoken texts.
15 Clear Continue with discussion using the whiteboard to
minutes instruction: identify with the students the uses and definitions of
context.
students have about his life and context. This is to contextualise his
books and the context points, briefly discuss with students who
pens. Provide Stan Grant is, his perspective as a first Australian and
of paper and
pens if not. Inform students that they are now going to view Stan
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Bring up and
play Julia
Zemiro’s
Home Delivery
on
Smartboard
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minutes Handout 24 Hand out transcript and have students pair up and
transcript
Record
Have a
student hand
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with Keynote have used this software before) that they will in pairs
for modelling
Drop box in
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structure evidence, linking sentence).
beneficial.
Evaluation/ Extension
200 word response on what makes Stan Grant’s speech relevant to contemporary
Australia.
In retrospect
In the frame of the Quality Teaching Model, I will at the end of the lesson self
assess against the rubrics I have chosen. That is Intellectual Quality, Deep
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After marking myself against the rubric, I would write a reflection on whether I
students with a strong introduction to spoken texts, their forms and features, and
Can students identify the language forms and features of spoken texts?
Do students engage with and interpret meaning from Stan Grant’s Racism
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Pre-service teacher’s Objectives
for improvement.
Outcomes
persuasion.
Content Points:
ACELY1750: Identify and explore the purposes and effects of different text
structures and language features of spoken texts, and use this knowledge
to create purposeful texts that inform, persuade and engage (Page 52)
Materials
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Dropbox containing students’ Keynote presentations
Procedures
minutes students and speeches and how rhetoric are used to formulate
Minutes presentations Keynote presentations. Ask for file names from the
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Minutes
1 and
partner.
Clear
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Play prompt already apart of your day to day life? Repeat exercise.
2 and ask
instructions
and to make Ask pairs to join up (four) and ask them to agree on
fashion ask
students to
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present their
conclusions.
Conclude
exercise.
minutes instruction: of the room, one agree and one disagree with this
Form even statement: “In your view, does Stan Grant present a
either side of side to join their group. They have to back their
minutes students that through these exercises today they have had to
their seats. position, that they have used the forms of spoken
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them that in order to address social issues, like the
Evaluation/ Extension
In retrospect
In the activities today, did students apply their knowledge and if not, why
not?
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Are the activities I provided appropriate for age and stage and give the
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Pre-service teacher’s Objectives
this, I will be analysing three crucial questions at the end of the lesson to
for improvement.
Outcomes
persuasion.
Content Points:
ACELY1750: Identify and explore the purposes and effects of different text
structures and language features of spoken texts, and use this knowledge
to create purposeful texts that inform, persuade and engage (Page 52)
Materials
Goodes.
Video file (Youtube clip) Adam Goodes Australian of the Year Speech
Procedures
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Write What is Adam Goodes key message?
Hand out What motivates individuals to step up, step out and
scaffold.
teacher.
10 Review key Inform students that they will now present their
speech
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After Presentations, surmise the unit relating to how
Evaluation/ Extension
Third and final lesson of the sequence. Students are assessed on their improntu speech and
provided feedback. For example, ”What are the features in spoken texts: organisation, clarity,
In retrospect
Reflect on the unit through the QTM rubric. Assess if lesson met the majority of
Knowledge. Reflect further on the three lessons as a whole with this rubric.
As the third and final lesson with a formative assessment, I will be able to judge if
the sequence of lessons has been providing students with a strong understanding
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Have the students given evidence of progress in understanding spoken
I would write a reflection on these questions and by using the marking criteria, I
will assess my own performance as a teacher and then consult my head teacher
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http://www.curriculum.edu.au/verve/_resources/National_Declaration_o
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