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The following sentences use the personification technique. See if you can identify which part
of the word or phrase is the personification. The answers are below:
Personification in Literature
"Ah, William, we're weary of weather," / said the sunflowers, shining with dew. / "Our
traveling habits have tired us. / Can you give us a room with a view?" - "Two Sunflowers
Move into the Yellow Room", Nancy Willard
Ten thousand (daffodils) saw I at a glance, / Tossing their heads in sprightly dance. / The
waves beside them danced; but they / Out-did the sparkling waves in glee - "I Wandered
Lonely as a Cloud", William Wordsworth
The fog comes / on little cat feet. / It sits looking / over harbor and city / on silent haunches
/ and then moves on. - “The Fog”, Carl Sandburg
The little dog laughed / To see such sport, / And the dish ran away with the spoon. - Nursery
Rhyme
The night was creeping on the ground! / She crept and did not make a sound - “Check”,
James Stephens
"And then one day the boy came back and the tree shook with joy." - The Giving Tree, Shel
Silverstein
Personification in Advertising
Oreo: Milk's favorite cookie - Oreo
Nothing hugs like Huggies - Huggies diapers
Goldfish: The snack that smiles back - Goldfish snack crackers
Kleenex says bless you - Kleenex facial tissues
The car that cares - Kia
Unwrap a smile - Little Debbie snack cakes
Carvel: It's what happy tastes like - Carvel ice cream
What do you feed a machine with an appetite this big? - Indesit washing machine and
Ariel Liquitabs, laundry detergent (UK)
Here are fifty more challenging examples of metaphors. The slashes indicate line breaks.
1. The light flows into the bowl of the midnight sky, violet, amber and rose.
2. Men court not death when there are sweets still left in life to taste.
3. In capitalism, money is the life blood of society but charity is the soul.
4. Whose world is but the trembling of a flare, / And heaven but as the highway for a shell,
5. Fame is the fragrance of heroic deeds, / Of flowers of chivalry and not of weeds!
6. So I sit spinning still, round this decaying form, the fine threads of rare and subtle thought.
7. And swish of rope and ring of chain /
Are music to men who sail the main.
8. Still sits the school-house by the road, a ragged beggar sunning.
9. The child was our lone prayer to an empty sky.
10. Blind fools of fate and slaves of circumstance, / Life is a fiddler, and we all must dance.
11. Grind the gentle spirit of our meek reviews into a powdery foam of salt abuse.
12. Laugh a drink from the deep blue cup of sky.
13. Think now: history has many cunning passages and contrived corridors.
14. You are now in London, that great sea whose ebb and flow at once is deaf and loud,
15. His fine wit makes such a wound that the knife is lost in it.
16. Waves of spam emails inundated his inbox.
17. In my heart’s temple I suspend to thee these votive wreaths of withered memory.
18. He cast a net of words in garish colours wrought to catch the idle buzzers of the day.
19. This job is the cancer of my dreams and aspirations.
20. This song shall be thy rose, soft, fragrant, and with no thorn left to wound thy bosom.
21. There, one whose voice was venomed melody.
22. A sweetness seems to last amid the dregs of past sorrows.
23. So in this dimmer room which we call life,
24. Life is the night with its dream-visions teeming, / Death is the waking at day.
25. Then the lips relax their tension
and the pipe begins to slide, /
Till in little clouds of ashes,
it falls softly at his side.
26. The olden days: when thy smile to me was wine, golden wine thy word of praise.
27. Thy tones are silver melted into sound.
28. Under us the brown earth / Ancient and strong, / The best bed for wanderers;
29. Love is a guest that comes, unbidden, / But, having come, asserts his right;
30. My House of Life is weather-stained with years.
31. See the sun, far off, a shriveled orange in a sky gone black;
32. Three pines strained darkly, runners in a race unseen by any.
33. But the rare herb, Forgetfulness, it hides away from me.
34. The field of cornflower yellow is a scarf at the neck of the copper sunburned woman
35. Life: a lighted window and a closed door.
36. Some days my thoughts are just cocoons hanging from dripping branches in the grey woods
of my mind.
37. Men and women pass in the street glad of the shining sapphire weather.
38. The swan existing is a song with an accompaniment.
39. At night the lake is a wide silence, without imagination.
40. The cherry-trees are seas of bloom and soft perfume and sweet perfume.
41. The great gold apples of light hang from the street’s long bough, dripping their light on the
faces that drift below, on the faces that drift and blow.
42. From its blue vase the rose of evening drops.
43. When in the mines of dark and silent thought / Sometimes I delve and find strange fancies
there,
44. The twigs were set beneath a veil of willows.
45. He clutched and hacked at ropes, at rags of sail, / Thinking that comfort was a fairy tale,
46. O Moon, your light is failing and you are nothing now but a bow.
47. Life is a dream in the night, a fear among fears, / A naked runner lost in a storm of spears.
48. This world of life is a garden ravaged.
49. And therefore I went forth, with hope and fear / Into the wintry forest of our life;
50. My soul was a lampless sea and she was the tempest.
1. “Food?” Chris inquired, popping out of his seat like a toaster strudel.
2. Then I knew those tiny voices, clear as drops of dew.
3. If seen from above the factory, the workers would have looked like clock parts.
4. She went like snow in the springtime on a sunny hill.
5. A mist about your beauty clings like a thin cloud before a star.
6. Cassie talked to her son about girls as though she were giving him tax advice.
7. Alan’s jokes were like flat soda to the children, surprisingly unpleasant.
8. My mother’s kitchen was like a holy place: you couldn’t wear your shoes, you had to sit there
at a certain time, and occasionally we’d pray.
9. The bottle rolled off the table like a teardrop.
10. The handshake felt like warm laundry.
11. The gray of the sea, and the gray of the sky, / A glimpse of the moon like a half-closed eye.
12. Yes, the doors are locked and the ashes are white as the frost.
13. The classroom was as quiet as a tongue-tied librarian in a hybrid car.
14. The flowers were as soft as thoughts of budding love.
15. The clouds were like ice-cream castles in the sky.
16. The music burst like a bent-up flood.
17. When he reached the top of the hill, he felt as strong as a steel gate.
18. When the tree branch broke, Millie fell from the limb like a robin’s egg.
19. She swam through the waters like she was falling through a warm dream.
20. The curtains stir as with an ancient pain.
21. Mikhail scattered his pocket change in front of the beggars like crumbs of bread.
22. But now her hands like moonlight brush the keys with velvet grace.
23. I flitted like a dizzy moth.
24. The man held the blanket like a memory.
25. The ice sculptor’s hands fluttered like hummingbird wings.
Here are fifty examples of similes for advanced readers. Remember: a simile is a
comparison between two different things using like or as to make the comparison.