You raise important issues.

Good
You demonstrate a good understanding of….
you’ve got great material here
You’ve written an outstanding paper.
comprehensive description
Relevant
Very interesting
Very funny in parts
I like this a lot
Brilliant concept
This has the potential of being an excellent essay, but it lacks organization. Also, your grammar and
syntax need a lot of work.
Your argument is fairly well supported
Your writing is concise/clear/elegant/exquisite and examples of .... would have clarified your point.
Your word choice is creative/quirky/unique/ and can be improved by ...
I enjoyed reading your paper, and I know you worked hard on it.
Well done, you touch on some really interesting and important points.
This paper is much clearer and easier to read than your previous work.
Congratulations on staying on track throughout this paper.
Your enthusiasm for this topic helps energize your discussion.
You do a good job of explaining/analyzing. Do more of that throughout.
Can be improved by

重点突出，详略得当，资料具体。

This paper is much clearer than your previous work. All the best to you~

以简单愉快的语气，向我们娓娓道来，令人回味无穷。

叙述自然生动、结构紧凑，衔接自然连贯，中心突出。

语言简练而准确，联想则为触景生情，情景自然融合。

充分运用动静结合的写法，并辅以比喻、拟人等手法

观察仔细，叙述时井然有序

精妙词语的使用，无形中为文章增添了不少情趣。

流畅连贯

文章想象合情合理，
细节描述颇具匠心。极富功底。

描述细腻，遣词造句准确传神。

语言准确，鲜明、生动，资料极其丰富具体，

语言活泼明快，富有情趣。

超多采用生活中的口语，使文章更显自然亲切。

文章有理有据，说服力强

构思合理，行文层次清楚

结论正确，有创新见解

格式正确，书写规范，条理清晰，语言流畅

观点正确

阐述全面

思路清晰，语句通顺

开篇简明扼要，精炼有序; 重点描述，

教具设计 15 构思巧妙、色彩和谐、图文清晰、设计美观、主题突出。

教具应用 10 符合教学学习成果、丰富教学内容。

教具制作 10 取材容易、造价低廉、有较高的应用价值。

表达能力 5 报告有条理，语句通顺流畅，语法规范。