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Professor Leonard
English Composition
17 November 2019
When you wake up in the morning, what’s the first thing you normally do… if you’re
like me, you check your phone and scroll through any social media that’s downloaded. To me,
social media is a tool that allows people to discover who they are and find a way to truly express
themselves, but I also believe that social media is one of the main reasons why society, as a
whole, have doubted themselves. This is because there are a lot of people out there that try and
hurt other's feelings for no good reason, social media is a gateway to a lot of negative comments
and actions, and we are given such high standards on social media platforms. Whether we put
these standards on ourselves or not they are being shown by people that lead these “perfect lives”
on these apps and everything they post about we want for ourselves. As a result, social media
brings more negativity to people’s lives today, especially teens since they are in the stage of life
where they are finding out who they are. Does social media have a hold on our lives wherever
we go?
In Sarah Rocha’s article, “Talking with Teens and Families about Digital Media Use.”, it
provides evidence which suggests that there is a correlation between the increasing use of social
media and increasing rates of adolescent depression, anxiety, and suicide. In other words the
more that teens are shown to be on social media the more they show signs of mental illnesses,
and the evidence doesn’t stop there. The mental health clinicians, that they provided their
information from, are reporting that the use of social media is a frequent source of family
conflict. Which means that the use of social media doesn’t only affect the teenagers involved, but
also their families. This issue goes wider than what most people think. These families are
concerned about their loved ones and want to help them in any way that they can, but there are
some issues. The same clinicians also stated that they are facing challenges when assessing
family digital media use and then trying to provide evidence‐based recommendations to help
them out. This is because they are still collecting solid solutions that will lead to the best results
for the many different conflicts of social media. Are there any positive effects of social media
When it comes to the positive effects of social media, there are plenty of things on these
platforms that can make us happy, but we have to go through a lot of negative to be able to find
the positive. Each social media app allows everyone to spread their creativity and fun to the
world while gaining new ideas and creating long-lasting friendships. In return, these apps also
allow people to comment hateful remarks on what anyone has posted because being hurtful is
how these people find their “creativity”. Even though as a society we are taught that you should
treat people the way you want to be treated, these types of people who put negative comments on
social media gain more confidence in hurting others behind a screen. This is because they don’t
have to show their face and deal with the punishment that would normally come if they said it in
person. When you think about, if we were all helping others and ourselves feel better about the
hurtfulness these hateful people bring, we could all stop the high standards that social media
provides. We could block out all the negative comments or even better, stop the posting of
negative comments in the first place. We would lead happier lives and set a good example for the
generations after. We would show that it's okay to be ourselves because we're all perfect in our
own unique way. Where should we start in making things more positive for the world?
We should start with the generation of people who are mainly on these social media
platforms because they get affected by it the most. In the article “Social Media Use May Harm
Teens' Mental Health by Disrupting Positive Activities, Study Says.” by Leah Asmelash, it
provides a lot of information about how it affects teens, and how we can help them. The source
gives a lot of insight on mental health issues and if we’re going to be able to help these
adolescents we need to understand their problems. According to the article, social media might
not be the problem for mental health issues seen in teenagers, but rather, it's the exposure and the
frequency of its use. This means that maybe it’s not social media itself that’s causing harm, but
the frequent use and the exposure of certain types of content that’s leading to the lower well-
being and problems of mental health in teens. If we were to adjust their unhealthy habits into
good ones we can help teenagers through the anxiety of social media. We can cut back on social
media, we can make sure they’re going to sleep at a reasonable time, and we can even make sure
they’re getting enough exercise. By bringing in healthy lifestyle changes, they are more prone to
a positive way of life and all of these mental health issues that are being caused by the exposure
and the frequent use of social media will start to fade. How bad is social media on mental health?
When discussing the subject of social media and trying to discover if it’s cruel to
people’s mental health, the simple answer is yes, but there are complicated facts to consider.
Including the fact that every person is nowhere near similar to each other and we all react to this
subject differently. We each have our own situations and experiences in our lives which can
affect how we look at social media. Some people are more sensitive and can get hurt easier than
others, this isn’t a bad thing, but it can determine how they will react if they get a hateful
comment on any platform. Or imagine if someone is suffering from depression and has a
negative encounter with someone through an app, how do you think it’ll affect them? There are
also those people who are extremely happy all the time, but one hateful remark can ruin them on
the inside because what if they don’t want to show it on the outside. You honestly don’t know
someone’s full story and even if you think you do, you don’t know how they’re feeling about it.
They can tell you, but you don’t know what it’s really like. That’s why we have to try and help
each other. If social media is a negative influence in the world and we all still use it because we
know there are some positives then we should stick together through those negatives to find the
positives. Is there more research concerning the negative impact that social media has on mental
health?
There is a great deal of research material that suggests that social media does have a
negative influence on mental health, even though in some ways the internet can cause teens to be
more social and creative. The article titled “Too Much Social Media Can Make Your Teen
Depressed.” Brought up some very interesting points about how “for many years now, social
media has been considered the main threat when it comes to the mental health of its users”
(paragraph 2). Research has linked social media platforms like Instagram and Facebook to high
levels of anxiety and depression on the teenagers of today’s society. The source has a lot of
research to suggest that the more teens spend on these social media platforms, the more likely
they are to be depressed. Since technology is advancing all the time, we as people want to try
these new technologies, which means we’re also spending more of our time in front of a screen.
Teenagers always seem to be the first ones to get all these new gadgets and to discover what’s
interesting on them, but this also increases their depressive state because of how much screen
time they’re having. Did you know that teens spend up to an average of nine hours a day in front
of a screen? With how much time is wasted on social media, no wonder how depressed and
mentally unstable adolescents are. How much time is being wasted on social media?
Well, according to the article “Teens Spend 'Astounding' Nine Hours a Day in Front of
Screens: Researchers”, it really is about six to nine hours. This team of researchers surveyed
2,658 eight to eighteen-year-olds, which it says represents children across the nation. As claimed
by this source "The fact that tween and teens in the U.S. are using an average of six to nine
hours' worth of media a day is still astounding," (paragraph 4). They say that this shows us how
kids spend more time on social media than they do with their parents, time spent in school, or
anything else they might do. On any given day these teenagers average about nine hours of
entertainment media use, excluding time spent at school or for homework, while the Tweens use
an average of about six hours' worth of entertainment media daily. They also believe that all this
technology could also be the reason that their ability to communicate in person is being hurt the
most. They say there is nothing better than face-to-face communication for understanding
emotions and being able to communicate with others. Of course, social media couldn’t stop at
negatively affecting their mental health with how many hours adolescents spend online, but it
had to also affect their communication skills negatively. How many teens do you think this
affects?
Social media affects a lot more teens than people think, tons of people in general, use
social media a lot more than we think. Just in the U.S., over 80% of people use social media
daily and that’s just here. Social media is truly a burden that follows us everywhere we go. We
can’t go into a coffee shop without someone sitting at a table on the computer or we can’t go into
a restaurant without someone taking a picture of their meal. We can’t even go shopping without
girls taking funny pictures in the mirror or we can’t travel without a tourist taking a vlog of
where they are and what they’re doing. Social media is just everywhere and we’ve all adapted to
it, we don’t even really notice or mind it anymore. If that’s the case, then why does it still have
so many harmful results in its use? Why are so many teens getting hurt mentally because of it?
These questions are harder to answer based on the fact that the solutions are ones that
some people don’t want to embrace because they don’t want to change the way they live their
lives. With the help of the source “Exploring Social Media Use as a Composite Construct to
Understand Its Relation to Mental Health: A Pilot Study on Adolescents.”, which was written by
Joana de Calheiros Velozo and Johannes E A Stauder, I was able to find accurate evidence. This
evidence was on the association between social media and mental health in teens and this source
provides this accurate information for their study includes more than just the general use of
social media. Other studies have focused on just social media use in general and have overlooked
the factor of social media activity. This means that the differences in activities within social
media can affect the results of their study. To be more specific this study is a pilot study that’s
trying to understand whether it is relevant to explore social media as a composite measure while
also thinking about how the genders would differ. It talks about how adolescents are spending a
lot of time on social media and studying how this factor is associated with their mental health has
become an important focal point of their research. The more damaging the content is on their
activities, the more negative thoughts and increasing mental issues these people have. What do
we mean by activities? How can the bad influence of these activities be so hurtful to our mental
health?
These activities that were discussed in the paragraph prior were talking about what each
app has to offer to its customers. For example, Instagram allows you to post any photos/videos
you want, but mainly these photos/videos are “model type” photos and videos that are to show
off a person's creative and artsy side. This app allows a person to show off their best look or
maybe their best art, whatever they specifically do, this is the app to show it to the world. Then
there are apps like the Tik Tok, where it’s the brand new trendy app where you can post videos
of anything. It can be a video of your lip-syncing and dancing to your favorite song or it can be a
really funny video that you make with your friends. The possibilities are endless with this video
app and since it’s new, it’s what teenagers nowadays can’t stop talking about. These activities
that you can do on the apps are not just about posting your own content, you also see everybody
else’s and you can comment on anything saying anything you want. This can lead to the
negativity that was being explained earlier. If someone doesn’t like something about another
person's content, they have the free will to make sure the owner knows it. There is also the
possibility of seeing something inappropriate on these apps that you don’t feel comfortable with
or, if you’re still a child, your parents don’t want you to see. There's a lot of space for bad
influences on these apps, which can eventually result in depression or mental health issues. Is
there any way to block out the negativity on social media completely?
Sadly, you can’t completely cut it out of you or someone’s life without deleting the apps
entirely or switching to a flip phone with only texting and calling. If you do want a little extra
help with these issues there's an article called “Impact of Social Networking Sites and Digital
Applications Upon Teens.”, by Amy Roehl and Alyssa Humphries Stewart. The purpose of this
source is that it provides information about the issues of teens and how we can encourage them
to engage in conversations about their social media use and to make sure they model healthy
behavior. Even though the intended audience was adults that have taken responsibility for teens
that are struggling with mental health issues as well as anyone who wants to help them through
the struggle, I’m sure the same strategies work with adults too. You probably just have to adjust
the approach. This source focuses on the development of youth by examining how the use of
social networking sites affects them mentally. Of course, like so many other researchers and
studies before them, they found that the more people were on these sites the more gloomy and
bleak they felt. They also included research that demonstrated that using certain types of social
media increases the existing issues that the teen population is facing. The issue stated, is the
anxiety, depression, and mental illnesses that are increasing every time someone logs onto social
media and even though you might not think it happens every time, just ponder on it for a minute.
Every time you’re on an app do you ever think to yourself, dang I wish I could pull off that outfit
or dang, I wish I was in an adorable relationship or even dang, I wish I got into my dream
college, well then you think negative thoughts every time you see those posts. When you think
negative thoughts, it leads to negative emotions, then results in your emotions affecting your
behavior and that can start you down the path to a negative life. Another thing that’s discussed in
the article is their new concerns that they are beginning to worry about, which is how we as
people are lacking communication skills more and more. Since we spend so much time looking
at our phones and texting with abbreviations, we’re starting to forget how to look into each
other’s eyes and start talking to one another. This scares me the most because when the day
comes (which it probably won’t) where all technology no longer exists, how will humans
communicate? Isn’t social media another way to communicate with people who don’t live close
to you?
Social media is a way to communicate with others, especially if they live several states
away or even several countries away. You’re able to connect online with the people you care
about without having to be with them in person, but this can affect how you talk to others around
you. When it comes to social media you can’t a positive without there being a negative and to
help prove that is Emily Weinstein, who wrote the article “The Social Media See-Saw: Positive
and Negative Influences on Adolescents’ Affective Well-Being.”. This research article is about
the relationship between social media usage and the well-being of teenagers, “whether enhanced
or degraded and how it's not confined to an “either/or” framework”(Paragraph, 5). It discusses
how there are both positive and negative influences involved with our lives on the internet and
how this is an important role in the “emotional see-saw” of social media. The article has done
several surveys to test their theories and what they conducted portrayed social media use as, for
the most part, is a positive influence in our lives. As long as we think more optimistically and try
to focus on the content that inspires us to be our best selves, we can only enhance the positives in
our world. Now, this article also conducted interviews that revealed that while yes, there are
positives that can come from the internet, there are still negatives creeping around every corner.
There are still going to be nasty, unwanted comments and there is still going to be inappropriate
content on your pages. No matter what it will be there, but if we all help each other out by
bringing happiness into the universe, it will get easier to cut out all those hateful things. You
know the greatest win is walking away and choosing not to engage in the drama and toxic energy
at all. We need to start having the courage to let go of the matter which doesn't matter, we need
to learn how to be happy with ourselves before we can consider what others think of us. If we go
into the bad vibes of social media with these quotes and mindsets, it will be a piece of cake,
ignoring the “haters” (this is what negative people on social media are called). Will these facts
and lessons help the people who were negatively affected by social media?
I hope this research article can help people, I hope it can help anyone who is struggling
with the idea of social media. Since it is how other people see our lives, it’s an example of who
we are as a person and negative content can mean a bad person. Showing our creativity to the
world and exposing who we are as an individual is a scary thought, especially if the internet isn’t
your thing. When you wake up in the morning, you go to grab your phone, and you start
checking social media, what are you thinking about? Is it a bad thought or a good thought? No
matter what it is, I wish you start your day with a smile and a good thought. I wish for you to
discover who you are and to find a way to truly express yourself in an environment that’s
comfortable for you, even though social media is one of the main reasons why society, as a
whole, have doubted about themselves, I want that to change for the better. For the better of you,
me, the younger generations, our families, and for everyone. There are a lot of people out there
that try and hurt other's feelings for no good reason, and social media gives them that gateway to
spreading a lot of negative comments and actions, and on top of this, we are given such high
standards on social media platforms. The people that lead these “perfect lives” on these apps
aren’t really perfect in any way, shape or form, just like everyone else, but how they display their
life and show how they live in a “fantasy” is mesmerizing and we want it for ourselves. As a
result, social media brings more negativity to people’s lives, especially teens since they are in the
stage of life where they are finding out who they are. Teens today are the most insecure,
unhealthy, and unstable generation of teenagers on record, but we can help change that. Let’s
start by showing them what true happiness and love for themselves looks like. Let’s help evolve
their life on social media for the better outcome of the world.
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