Dear Erin Martin

In the beginning of your paper be sure to add in your necessary heading which includes
your name, professors name, class, and date. Also remember to add in a title. Also make sure to
double space your paper help complete the format that is required.
Source 1:
 Go into more detail regarding the main differences that is being discussed.
 Try using some transition words to make your sentences stronger.
 Do not use contractions
 Indent each paragraph
Source 2:
 Make a stronger intro sentence
 Do not use contractions
 Explain why it is informal in better detail (give examples)
 Indent each paragraph
Source 3:
 Needs hanging indent
 Do not use contractions
 Check grammar errors
 Indent each paragraph
Source 4:
 Briefly descried the ingredients of the hamburger
 Do not use contractions
 Use transition words
 Indent each paragraph
Source 5:
 Check grammar errors
 Indent each paragraph
 Do not use contractions
Source 6:
 Do not use contractions
 Use transition words
 Give more details as to why this is an intense reader
Source 7:
 Take out contractions
 Check for grammar and structural errors
 Use transitions to make paragraphs stronger
 Explain the other way that meats come in to give readers a better understanding